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Title: awww
Reviewed By: yasha _luver602 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 23:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED this chapter...griffin and kids..too perfect and "cheating on me" haha...hilarious...anyways wanted to say great chapter and cant wait for the superbowl one!!!
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Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 19:34 EST
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I read chapter 25 and it struck me that I don't know Gunner's real name, Mamoruzen mean????help??? Anyway, excellent chapter. Can't wait for the one shot..Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 17:28 EST
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"I thought about making a huge-ass cake and having Mama pop out of it, but you know, Cain's old . . . he'd probably have a heart attack and die which would make Bubby tai-youkai, and he's already insufferable enough without adding that to the equation . . ." LMAO!!!! Oh my gosh, I just love Evan, that was just too good! Hmm....I wonder if he's really going to do that though, that would be a sight to see lol. Aww, I kinda knew that it was the children coming to his house. That little girl seems so cute!!!! Hmm...and Superbowl Sunday one-shot! Yes! Gives me something to do other than watch football lol, not my best sport to watch lol.
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Reviewed By: bert_6 On: January 30, 2007 17:00 EST
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wow that was a really sweet chap with all the kids and chirstmas coming up!! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This si driving me crazy. But I shall remain patient. I have to know what is going on with Dr. Avis and the research. If he hurts Jilli then I feel bad for him when Cain and Gavin gets through with him. I also can wait to find out what in the world is up with Griffin.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 12:48 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 12:42 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I loved the interaction between Bitty, Griffin, and the children! I can't wait to see what happens next, so update soon please!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 12:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm on my way out the door, but I just wanted to say thanks for making my day. I absolutly loved the new chapter, but then I love all you work, don't it?
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: January 30, 2007 10:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: January 26, 2007 00:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I thought this was an exceptionally beautiful chapter. The last part, where Griffin begins to give into his feelings for Isabelle, was so softly descriptive and touching. I was very, very impressed. It made my heart go KA-THUMP quite a few times. I can not wait to read what Isabelle might feel. The "legend" thing is very original and adds alot to the story. Also, Gunnar definitely acted like a young cocky version of Sesshoumaru in some of his words and mannerisms. The "narrowed eyes" was perfect. Though, judging from the bedroom scene, I am not sure he has inherited his grandfather's class. I figure that you want us to see that he has some cold hardness to his character even though he is young. How old is he supposed to be? Thanks! Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 21:03 EST
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De Nile is a river in Egypt, Griffin. I thought you would know that by now with how old you are! Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: evloner On: January 24, 2007 21:30 EST
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Oh my god! I feel so honored that you took the time to answer my comment. Wow!! I'd didn't think that I could hold you in any higher esteem, or look at you with greater respect, but by just acknowledging that you read my comments made me feel so special. Great chapter and Griffin was very sweet. Hopefully Griffin won't wait until Isabelle is asleep to express his feelings.
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Title: Incandescence
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 01:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! I really love the words that were used in the last chapter. Griffin finally realizes that he doesn't want to be alone anymore. I can't wait until the fluff. Great update and teaser! Take care.
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 00:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful chapter. It really touched me. It's nice to see that Griffin has accepted the inevitable. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: jable [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 23:27 EST
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wahhhhh, nooo didn't think that id ever catch up. i started reading purity 1 about 3 weeks ago and was reading like 10-25 chaps a day (yeah i didnt learn anything in school the last month lol) its gonna be hard to just read a chappy every few days, i might have to start paying attention in class agian!!! ahhhhh!, well at least i wont get my axim taken away all the time now. anyways great job, your my favorite author prolly of anything i read, right up with gary pulsan and tom clancy
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