| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 13:34 EDT
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Great chapter! I liked that Gin, Cain, and Bas were in this chapter. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 00:26 EDT
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I've heard of a lot of hiccup remedies (mine is meditative breathing), but the kiss is something that I haven't heard of before. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: March 26, 2007 22:26 EDT
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aww, you broke your finger?? dang. i've been there. the drugs dont help for some reason... lol. great chapter! ;)
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Reviewed By: yuki_chan_89 (not signed in) On: March 23, 2007 23:05 EDT
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As always you manage to make us smile with the brilliance of your ideas. I am very sorry to hear about the broken finger, that really is unfortunate. I hope you get well soon...and don't have to take too many painkillers. :P The story is wonderful as usual. We wait as patiently as possible considering the addictiveness of your writing for the following chapters. Don't listen to flames at all, they're just written by sad, lonely people who have nothing better to do with their lives than make other people feel bad. You are a wonderful author. Thanks for another great chapter, chao!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luvving this story so far! So you broke your finger? nasty. I broke my ankle and this is the first time in weeks i've been able to get to the computer... lol at least you have nine spare fingers, i only have one spare leg. I really like how this is shaping up... i really like Gunnar, so i'm looking forward to Purity 12... And, out of interest, because this idea's been niggling at me, I know that youkai that are a few centuries old tend to change their names a bit. Was Griffin's name ever Kioshi? I'm probably wrong, but whatever. Good luck with the stories. I had a fanfic on here a while back, but i pulled it and changed account because i got a lot of hurtful reviews. I know i'm not a brilliant writer, but some people were really brutal. I hope you don't suffer from this too much, but if you do, don't give up. Some people don't know good stuff when they read it, and loads of us love you. Hugs, and get well soon!
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: March 23, 2007 01:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just the right amount of humor; just the right amount of seriousness; and just the right amount of feelings. I really loved this chapter, it was so touching. You could not have done better with that first kiss. Again, loved it. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they kissed!!!!! i hope ur finger gets better:) update soon!
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Reviewed By: krazee-mad On: March 22, 2007 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
niiiiiice. kissy time!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 22, 2007 03:01 EDT
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great chapter! who knew hiccups could be so entertaining? so cute at the end!
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Title: Too Cute!
Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 23:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if I've ever said this, but hands down the BEST chapter I have read in the Purity Universe. Great Job, Sueric! How'd you break your finger? Hope it heals soon!
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Title: Evloner
Reviewed By: evlonerhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 20:57 EDT
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That was so sweet! I just loved the hiccup cure. Sorry about the finger I hope you get better soon.
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As you are very aware by now, I love this and all your Purity stories. But may favorite part in all the stories is the final thought. I love that! Always leaves me chuckling or like dag man. I really enjoy your fics and I always tell people if they want a good one read anything by you.
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Title: wheee!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 15:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You broke your finger! That's like breaking a toe for a ballet dancer! As always, I loved the new chapter. The kiss! The first kiss!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 14:37 EDT
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Hmm....so Bitty Belle finally got a kiss out of him, kinda lol. Too bad it was part of her home remedies lol.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 13:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I loved when Bitty and Griffin compared their feet!!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Hopefully, there will be tons more kissing!! ^_^
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