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Title: *cries*
Reviewed By: tinners [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok. so i almost cried when he yelled at her. it was so well written. you are MAGNIFICENT.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 12:52 EDT
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Great chapter! I hope that he shows her the basement. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 00:50 EDT
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I wonder if she's finally going to see what the mysterious basement holds. I'm actually surprised that Griffin was so fast to attempt to make up, but I guess the classic 'chase after your girl' scene doesn't exactly fit their style and abilities after all. In the end, Griffin's a shy bear and just, psycologically, wouldn't be able to follow her back to her parents or grandparents' house. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 19:12 EDT
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Hmm....I hope he's showing her the basement. You know, he owes her a kiss for putting her through so much distress lol. Hmm...I wonder if those people will tell Jilli that Avis is dead.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 18:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two updates in a week i feel really lucky. I love the Purity FF that you write. fantastic chapter more please ;)
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Title: dun. dun. DUN!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 18:46 EDT
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The basement!!! Wheee! She'll finally get to see the basement!!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 17:07 EDT
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Man I wanted to hit him upside the head...but finally he is opening up...update soon
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Reviewed By: angelyami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 16:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
jaslkdjfal;sjfsl;jfsl;djasl;....that is my thoughts right now. LOL. When the chapter ended i was on the edge of my seat going: omfg! no! more! LOL. I'm impatience. Great as always!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Their first big fight!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Keep up the good work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 14:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I love how dynamic your characters are! Finally, Griffin will give in! I'm so excited! But I wonder what's going on with Dr. Avis.. Hmmm.... update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 14:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter had my heart racing a mile a minute. Please update, they both, especially Griffin deserves to find some happiness. I know he's not a man of many words, so let him do something that will show her. Please update soon, please. And I have a feeling that a hell is about to break loose, especially when they find out the Avis is dead.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 10:40 EDT
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 19:31 EDT
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oh boy the drama is going to start...update soon
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 12:05 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! If Griffin was having problems sleeping before, I wonder what he's gonna do now! (LOL) I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the good work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 23:51 EDT
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If Griffin was any other man, he'd bee all over her like a... bear with honey! Sorry, I couldn't help it that time. With the nose of an inu-youkai (at least partially), I would have thought that Isabelle could have smelled the meat burning, but with how preoccupied she was, I guess it's not that surprising after all. And this is coming from the daughter of one that burns water. Keep up the good work, dark
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