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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 03, 2007 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh! You can not lie to Mama. Mama's always know about their children. Isabelle's got the fever now on solving or finishing the research. I have wondered if Griffin might have been a pawn in that past research. Not enough clues in that area yet for me to tell. I am glad that Isabelle decided to spend Christmas with Griffin. The development of their intimacy has been beautiful and touching. (My favorite parts.) It was definitely too soon to throw him under the bus with her family (especially Mom with little inhibitions.) I imagine Griffin like a deer in the headlights in the midst of Isabelle's strong charactered family members. That will be an interesting possibility for future writing thoughts. Neh? Thanky thanky for sharing so quick this week. Cynbad146
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Title: Very Happy
Reviewed By: theundefeatablemj [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 18:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm sorry this won't be very constructive; I just wanted to let you know that getting an email notifying me that you had updated this story brightened a very crappy day!! I began reading this series some time ago but this and that I wasn't able to catch up. I am sad that I won't be able to read through this story like the others but instead I must wait like everyone else...sigh. Lots of Love~MJ
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 18:25 EDT
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Aww, poor Griffin; he doesn't know what to get Isabelle. Ahaha, I just love Bellaniece; bombarding Bitty Belle with questions lol. Great chapter, Sue!
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Reviewed By: krazee-mad On: April 03, 2007 18:24 EDT
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only evil people stop the chapter before christmas while writing fanfictions.
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 17:07 EDT
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Agh, you've done it again! LOL Your story has got me hooked. I always look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: terpsichore44 On: April 03, 2007 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey... loving your fanfics as always!!!! :) I just thought I would drop you a quick note to say that a genome refers to the entire collection of genes an organism possesses in its DNA (such as the Human Genome or the the Drosophila Fruit Fly Genome, both of which have been sequenced). Thus Isabelle talking about the "transformation genome" doesn't really make much sense. I think the word you're looking for is gene, which controls the production of a protein (which is then expressed in some way such as eye color, blood type, etc). I'm not in any way criticizing the story, just trying to iron out a little kink I guess. Looking forward to more!!!
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Reviewed By: seme-_-uke On: April 03, 2007 16:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that was so romantic...GO GRIFFIN...any drama going to start soon with the bad guys??? dun dun DUN...Update soon...*bows*
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 15:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, he's realizing that she's his mate!! I'm so happy for them. I don't know if it was suppose to come across like this, or if I'm just reading too much into things, but Bellianeace (sp) seems to have something on her mind, what it it? Awesome job, by the way and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 30, 2007 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! Enjoyed every word. I was wondering if Jezebel might find the bracelet before the end of the chapter. Hopefully, she will find it before Griffin takes it back. Thank you ever so much for sharing, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 18:24 EDT
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Aww, those poor fishies! Lol. Although, that would be pretty funny to see lol. Hmm...and when will Isabelle show Griffin how much of a gift he is to her? Lol.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 17:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww...that was so romantic...GO GRIFFIN...cant wait for the drama to start...PLEASE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*greatful sigh* As always, love the story and the way you write it. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: elvina On: March 29, 2007 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why is it each time I stumble upon one of your fanfics I stalk them for days waiting for new updates? I absolutly love your work. Very sweet chapter, can't wait to see how Griffin will pull himself out of the stocking thing. Sad to hear about your finger, hope it gets better soon lots of hugs from elvinah
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Cain and Gin are sooo cute together!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Title: Simonkal of Inuy
Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesomely done. I could actually visualiz sydnie on top of the fish tank. That was brilliant!! Update soon!!
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