| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: charity- nicole On: January 23, 2007 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWW!!!! it's sooo cute!!! man , i wish half the guys who hit on me were like that... no.. they are just all " hey mama , wanna holla at a pimp?" stupid!! lol but yeah.. keep up the good work!!! loved this chgappie!!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 17:56 EST
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Please tell me she heard him say that! That was so sweet! I just want to give the bear a hug now lol.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 16:41 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter....I started crying by the end of it! lol I always love the scenes between Gunnar and Myrna! I think they would make an adorable couple!! I'm glad that Griffin is finally starting to see that he and Bitty can be mates...then maybe we will finally see what haunts his nightmares pretty soon. I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 16:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! thats all I cam really say. It took him long enough to break down and now that he did WOW!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 10:07 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 09:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Griffin's attitude. To me it comes across as brash, but loving, and I find the whole Jezebel and fat ass thing just too endearing. Anyway great job once again, and it's good to see him accepting the fact that she is his mate. I love Girffin so much, he's just adorable, but I'm absolutely in love with Gunnar!!
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 09:30 EST
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You just can't help yourself, can you? You're torturing us with your little clues of what happened to Griffin. When are we going to hear the whole story? I can't take the suspense! ::Lol:: You know I love your stories. Please, just hurry with the rest of the chapters. I really can't wait to see this story play itself out, especially now that Griffin has admitted to himself his dependence on Isabelle. As always, great writing, great story - you're an amazing author.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 08:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your work. You create such believable and heartfelt chracters and you have weaved them into a universe completly there own. Thank you for sharing your stories. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 23:48 EST
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He's never had ice cream talk about hibernating! LOL Another great chap Sue, waiting for the next
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 04:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh boy that wasintense a the end and cute...yup just awfully cute...cant wai till the suspense of the notebook theif comes up and tries to harm Isabelle...KICK HIS BUT GRIFFIN...cant wait for the update...thanks
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Title: That is so cool!
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is the wierdest thing! happy birthday to your brother. lol. two aquarians in the world make life so much more interesting. hope you and your brother are blessed with many more birthdays. GREAT CHAPTER... WRTIE MORE!
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Reviewed By: charity- nicole On: January 17, 2007 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its cute how their oh-so-totally-date was an oh-so-totally-not-a-date ... at least to Griffin... lol.. that was cute and very touching and ... kissy kissy... lol... keep up the good work.!!!!
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Title: ~Silver Bells and Mistletoe~
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 20:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked how Isabelle had kissed Griffin on the cheek and how she got him to eat ice cream for the first time. He even came back for seconds. I still don't feel the closeness between them yet but that will come in time. Great chapter and teaser! Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 19:03 EST
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Griffin, stop living in denial, it's a date! Lol. That chapter was cute; everyone knows it's a date and he just refuses to believe it lol. Haha, Isabelle is right when she said it's never too cold to eat ice cream; it's still delicious, even in the middle of winter lol.
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Reviewed By: Lianne On: January 17, 2007 18:38 EST
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OOOO...loved the 'date' haha. Nice chapter, and i can't wait to see what happens next ^_^
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