| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 11:41 EST
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One of her patients died? Or was it the baby that didn't make it? I've been reading most of your other works lately (pure boredom… don't ask…) and one of the lines in your story about Zelig's parents struck me as interesting in the fact that it was a bear youkai that saved the boy. Zelig scratched and bit him all up and down his arms and there was also a fire that night in the barn… or am I looking too far into your other stories to make any sense? Well… keep up the good work! dark
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Reviewed By: yanan On: January 05, 2007 09:29 EST
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Amazing Chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: charity nicole On: January 05, 2007 02:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man u make me wanna no!!! oh well just gonna have to wait .. but its so hard!!!! lol... well evil cliffie of doom it is!!lol.. well keep it up!!! ahhh... wats wrong with bitty belle???? yea.. i have t osay these cliffies do something to the human brains i swear!!! lol good job!!! ttyl... well comment you later...
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Title: Guilt
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 00:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy, that was the "Evil cliffie of doom...?" I haven't written a review on MM in a long time. It feels good to be back here though. I liked the chapter and the teaser. I was kinda hoping you would give some clue on the teaser, but I already knew the answer. I hope that someone didn't die under Isabelle's care or something happened to the pregnant lady that was mentioned earlier on. I can't wait to find out. Great writing as always and I am loving the words that you are using in your chapters. It makes your stories stand out more. Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I wonder what happened to make Bitty so upset?!?! I hope Griffin can make her feel better. I can't wait for more, so update soon please!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: fob On: January 04, 2007 19:18 EST
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Superb Chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 18:49 EST
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Yes, that was an evil cliffie of doom!!! Hmm...I wonder what Ryo will do once he finds that human is dead...I hope that he can get the notebook back; I'm glad it wasn't what that Alastair guy was looking for, although I knew right when those two characters came into focus I knew what research they were looking for. Aww, I wonder what's wrong with Bitty Belle to make her want to just break down!
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Reviewed By: nekosan On: January 04, 2007 17:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. It is indeed an evil cliffie.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 17:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, what happened to her? Did she kill somebody by accident? Did she get raped or something? Did she have a lapse in judgement and sleep with an old flame? Where was she all night that she had to come home to take a shower? Was she in jail? Why can't she talk to Griffing, she better talk to him. Uggh, sue, I have almost forgotten how much your cliffie's hurt! Please update, by the grace of the gods you have to.
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: January 04, 2007 17:31 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lianne On: January 04, 2007 17:12 EST
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oh wow. that was interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next ^_^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 16:33 EST
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I loved the ending, especially where Isabelle said that Griffin's real name is "Sexy-as-Hell." Sorry this review is late, I wasn't feeling well yesterday so I basically stayed in bed all day lol. Hmm...I wonder what Isabelle will name the kitten!
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Reviewed By: nekosan On: January 03, 2007 16:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story. Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 15:54 EST
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I'm half-hoping that it's the breed of cat that makes it look that way, half hoping that it's only because of lack of food that made the hair fall out. Either way, I agree with Griffin on this. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: fob On: January 03, 2007 15:31 EST
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Superb Chapter. Please update soon
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