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Title: Tears in Heaven
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 05:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great title to another well-written chapter. I had to read it twice because it was that good. I really felt sad for Isabelle. I didn't cry though but I did laugh at the way Griffin was handling the situation and the things he was saying to her. Great teaser also! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I almost started crying when I read this. I'm glad Griffin at least tried to confort her. I can't wait for more, so update soon please!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: January 09, 2007 22:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. can't wait to read the next.
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: January 09, 2007 21:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy! My heart is heavy after reading that. Out of misery comes comfort and understanding. These characters have become so rich. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Lianne On: January 09, 2007 21:14 EST
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Wow! that was an amazing chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next :P
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Reviewed By: charity - nicole On: January 09, 2007 20:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.......... wow... this is a heart breaking chapter.. of all the sad tragic stoires i've read this one is the best ... i am in awe of your ability to make a character seem real enough for you to feel their pain... wow.. kepp up the good work... i feel so sorry for isabelle.. and griffin and the baby's daddy.. =( *tear*
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Reviewed By: happilyjaded On: January 09, 2007 20:03 EST
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This was a very beautiful chapter. The way that Griffin consoles Isabelle gives us so much insight into his character. Great Job!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 19:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That's all I have to say, "Just Wow". Very, very, very touching chapter.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 18:06 EST
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Aw, that's sad! Poor Isabelle, she didn't need to be called a murderer. Aw, Griffin's consoling her, that's so sweet!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 17:55 EST
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Oh my goodness!!! I feel so bad for Isabelle. Its horrible when you feel helpless and hopeless. I can relate. But at the same time I understand that they needed that situation to occur, because it opened up Griffin's heart more and more he could never turn his feelings around when you love someone and they hurt, they cry every fiber in your being screams for you to make it better, to ease their pain even accept their pain if possible because you love them that much. When they hurt you hurt and when they cry so do you. Griffin just proved that he'd do anything within his power to make Belle's Pain go away.
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Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 17:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i kno that i havent reviewed in a while but i think you should kno that i think this chapter just hit home and i was in tears before i knew what was happening...i guess its because in the past my aunt had something similar happen to her and...im going off on a tangent again...anyways GREAT chapter and you've done an amazing job on all of the other purity stories and i kno that this one will be no different!!! cant wait for yout next update and Happy (late) New Year!!
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Title: *contented sigh*
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 17:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man. I swear... you get better with every chapter that you write. Thanks so much for sharing your writing with us and I can't WAIT to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: January 05, 2007 22:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your work is so dependable that it makes it easy to take it all for granted. I just wanted to let you know that not only is the chapter great, but all of your chapters are great, and that how often you update, is really great. The angst in this story is really peaking. I can not imagine how Bitty and Griffin will finally rise above his past and present problems. Where will it all go from here? Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 12:56 EST
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Great chapter! I wonder what has Isabelle so upset? I was good to see Kichiro and Ryomaru in this chapter. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 11:52 EST
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Awww I hate tears and so does griffin from Isabelle anvway. Great Chap EVIL CLIFFE! But can't wait until the next chap.
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