| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 14:26 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. The card from Maria was a nice twist! I thought the snow fight was really cute. I can't wait for more, so update soon please!!!! ^_^
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Title: so adorable
Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 11:16 EST
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Hi, your snowball fight and capture was so adorable i can really visulize that happening in the real world, well maybe not in texas but in the winter wonderlands that are the northern states. Chao.. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: December 27, 2006 14:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 21:19 EST
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It's been a while but between work and school i've been very busy. But I think this is one of the best stories you've ever written and honestly, i can't wait to read the next Chapter. please hurry with the update I'm on the edge of my seat.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 20:21 EST
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At least they're finally getting somewhere in their relationship. There were several times when a simple 'sorry' could have possibly helped, but Isabelle isn't exactly one to use those words and actually mean it. That night both of them learned something from the other at least a little. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 03:00 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Griffin, I'm suprised he hasn't died of embarrasment yet!! LOL I thought the ending to this chapter was really sweet....at least he won't lie about his pain anymore! Update soon please because I can't wait for more!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 21:40 EST
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Aw, poor Griffin!! But Isabelle is right, there are a lot of girls who would love to have a pooh bear like Griffin!!!!! And the one that wants him the most is standing right in front of him lol.
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Reviewed By: charity nicole On: December 22, 2006 15:34 EST
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oh i forgot to say Font Color MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
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Reviewed By: Kaida18 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 15:34 EST
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Now that was entertaining. Very, very entertaining. I can't recall how many times I've forced one of my friends to do something by sitting on him, or throwing my golden retriever on his stomach or other valuable parts. Go, Bitty Belle!!!
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Reviewed By: charity nicole On: December 22, 2006 15:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg... i laughed out loud when i read this and my sister and brother were looking at me like i was on crack or something.. i luv seeing these two together.. they make such a cute and funny couple... i tried to get my sister to read but she didn't want me to ruin it for her... she's reading purity ... 5 i think... yea.. the one with gavin and Jilli... well we love your stories and we wish you would continue writing... the anticipation between chpt.'s drive me crazy .. but to everyone else i already am... oh well... yea.. so .. keep up the good work .. i really enjoy it...
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 13:34 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inu On: December 22, 2006 10:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
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I'm really enjoying this couple, very much so. They're so cute together that it just makes me want to coo. I actually lauged out loud with this chapter. Nice work and thanks for updating before I leave this afternoon. You great, even thouhg I know you didn't do it for me, but I'm delusional, so I'll choose to believe that anyway. Merry Xmas and Happy New Year!!!
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Reviewed By: Lianne On: December 22, 2006 08:40 EST
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OOOOO.....that was really really good ^_^. I'm really curious to see what happens next :P
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Reviewed By: Rawben.. On: December 22, 2006 03:23 EST
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oh, good timing! i was bout to go to sleep! but yey! a new chapter! "do you have a penis?"!!! LMAO!! poor griffin! he's just a big virginal bear! thank gawd he has izzy. ;)
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: December 22, 2006 02:40 EST
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aww! poor griffin! he's just too cute. ;) reminds me of that grumpy care bear (http://www.care-bears.com/CareBears/html/about/grumpy.html). and i love that he's so grouchy! hilarious! too bad he's not fit enough to rough someone up. cause i want more growling from him. ::purrrrr:: great chapter(s)!!
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