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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 09:26 EST
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Great chapter! It surprised me when Gunnar showed up. I seriously thought that he was gonna start something with Griffin, thank god Isabelle showed up. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: happilyjaded On: December 21, 2006 00:39 EST
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I'm sorry to say, but I have to disagree, Wawali. Characters are the most interesting and well defined when they are human, and that means having both flaws and virtues. It means making mistakes, and having moments they might want to apologize for later. Not that I'm necisarily saying Gunnar will or should apologize. I see a lot of his grandfather in him, especially in this moment, which I thought added to his depth. Well done chapter! It was intense and definately left me wanting more!
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Reviewed By: wawali On: December 20, 2006 22:27 EST
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Gunnar is seriosly becoming dislikeable, is it si weong that I want him to get his ass beat? You know to humble him a bit.
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Reviewed By: Awesome from cutechick18 On: December 20, 2006 22:23 EST
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I really like this chapter. It was left at a big cliffie but that is the point right? To keep us on our toes so much that we crack our toenails! LoL! Anyways I really cant wait to see what happens next in the next chapter between Pooh Bear and Isabelle. :) This is from cutechick18. I would have put it in the nickname slot, but it wouldnt let me so here I am!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 22:08 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Sometimes I really get annoyed at Gunnar. I know he cares about her, but he's a little to much like Inyasha and Sesshomaru!! LOL I hope Griffin is okay and I hope he doesn't freak out when he realizes that Bitty is human!! She must really love him to risk her secret like she did! Update soon please because I can't wait for more!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 20:56 EST
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I'm glad Isabelle found him. Man, Inuyasha sure has passed on that stubborn streak very nicely onto his kids and grandkids lol.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 19:42 EST
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what does Griffin think about Isabelle when she is human?
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 19:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe I'm crazy but this entier chapter played like a movie for me. I could actually feel the tention between Gunnar and Griffin, man, if they were to bump heads I really think Gunnar would get his ass handed to him. And that's hard for me to say, since Gunnar is my fav, being that he not mated as of yet. My heart really aches for Griffin. I don't know what he did, but he deserves just a little slice...piece...a moment of absolute happiness. Brilliantly done, and I'll consider this my second Birthday Present....LOL. Thanks for doing what you do Sue!! Have a Merry xmas and a happy new year, in advance in case your not able to update and I'm not near a computer. Awesome job once again.
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Reviewed By: Lianne On: December 20, 2006 17:28 EST
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Wow...that was a really great chapter. I loved how Izzy stood up to Gunnar. And I'm even more curious about Griffin's past now... ^_^ Anyway...great chapter, and i can't wait to read the next one
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: December 20, 2006 17:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter. Hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: happilyjaded On: December 20, 2006 14:20 EST
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I really enjoyed this chapter, and have been looking forward to it! It seems that we're on the precipice of something major - I'm excited! Great Job!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 13:05 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Mirahbella On: December 20, 2006 11:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really great chapter. Your writing really makes a boring week more fun. Can't wait to see what happens next. It will make thing interesting when news gets back to Griffin that someone from Zelig's office was looking into him.
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Reviewed By: Lianne On: December 19, 2006 22:21 EST
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WOOT - awesome chapter...and I can't wait for the next one to come out...hopefully soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 16:54 EST
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Hmm...I'm wondering how Myra is connected to Attean. Is he married to her sister or some other kind of family member or something along those lines?
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