| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 16:08 EDT
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Naughty!!! lol Update soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 15:10 EDT
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lol! office sex? oh griffin, i didnt know he had it in him... ;) and i also think he should frame that 'yes' sign. that was so adorable!
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 08:12 EDT
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This chapter was amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 07:08 EDT
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BEST CHAPTER YET!!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 05:21 EDT
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Mucho squeeing! That's so sweet! Pooh Bear proposed! And in typical Jezebal fashion, she has to say "yes" in front of his ENTIRE CLASS... XD
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 23:04 EDT
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YAY!!! Another chapter!! Griffin is so cute when he is flustered!! I can't wait for the next installment!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 19:49 EDT
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Eating pretzels and reading this fic does not go hand in hand. I almost started choking because I was laughing so hard! Lol....poor Griffin, Isabelle is at it again, falling asleep when he needs to ask her an important question.
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It counts! It most definitely counts! =D
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 15:55 EDT
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Well, I guess you can ask that way!! lol Update soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Title: Good Job!
Reviewed By: buggy6565 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 15:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your sucha a great writer and this was another great chapter and im not one to review much but i think u accidently repeated a paragraph. Just figured i could tell you to help *this one* It took a moment for the subtleties of his words to sink in, and even when they did, she still wasn't entirely certain that she dared to understand what he'd said. It wasn't that he was against the idea of having babies, was it? He was . . . arguing over the term she'd used . . .? But he wasn't done talking, either. "I'm the . . . the dominant mate, so if we . . . i-if we had . . . those . . . they'd be cubs, like me." Great otherwise though i love how shy he is about asking her.
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Reviewed By: kittycatkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 13:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories and look forward to updates from you everyday!! Thank you for the fun with Gin and Cain hearing Griffin- he is so much fun to play with. I love when other family members are included in the stories.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2008 12:17 EDT
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Lolllll, its wat I would've done. I was hoping he would do it that way. But I never thought he'd shake her head and ask her while she slept. Idve just slipped the ring on her finger. I hope someone asks me to marry them that way. Lol that way neither one of us has to deal with the uncomfortable moment between the question and the answer. And the awkward display of emotion afterward. Lolll I'm still cracking up. By the way, wat kindve puppies did you raise??!!
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yey!! school's finally over and i can catch up on P7! i feel so accomplished!! and i'm so psyched for the rest of the story! how many chapters are left? and i loved griffin's fight scene! that was what i wanted most out of this story! rawrrrr. him and his brute force. totally awesome.
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 18:26 EDT
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After a long day at work, this chapter was all I needed to put me in a good mood. I hope Griffin works up the courage again soon!
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 18:17 EDT
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This chapter was soooo cute! With the whole ring thing and all... I can't wait for the next chapter!
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