| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 15:12 CDT
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Well, another great chapter, like all those I've come to expect from you ^_^. Lucky for Videl that the glass had been knocked over. *whew* And Chi-Chi seems suspicious. Hmm, what will happen next? Please update SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Jedibabe On: June 26, 2002 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I'm mad! I've been waiting aLONG time 4 the next chappie and when it comes out, it's SO short! That's not nice...
Otherwise I enjoyed it! Videl danceing with Goten? Kawaii! |
Reviewed By: Penny On: June 26, 2002 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Please give them some action soon I'm getting desparate on their behalf every time i read and my poor husband is getting suspicious - not complaining just suspicious. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 26, 2002 05:24 CDT
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Kahlan just put up a new fic. Total lunacy called Little Pleasure Price. You're in it. Have fun ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Queen Norkio On: June 25, 2002 23:29 CDT
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Your really moving up the most viewed list and there is nothing stopping you from reaching the top except that you keep leaving us wanting more. But sense that is the mark of a really great story teller we will forgive you this time. Just know that you story is addictive and we want more A.S.A.P!!!
P.S. Don't go too easy on Videl even through is didn't want to get involved in the first place! |
Reviewed By: Ryan On: June 25, 2002 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this has turned out to be very interesting i give it a ten cuz i like the plot and style of the story*claps* this is the best fanfic ive read in a long time but i think it is cruel to make the men suffer i feel for them |
Reviewed By: Ryan On: June 25, 2002 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Colorwell this has turned out to be very interesting i give it a ten cuz i like the plot and style of the story*claps* this is the best fanfic ive read in a long time but i think it is cruel to make the men suffer i feel for them |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: June 25, 2002 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...*frustrate sigh* Way to short! I wanna know what happens! Suspense is an ugly way to die. ^_^ I look forward to the next update, really I do! ^_- |
Reviewed By: priss On: June 25, 2002 17:16 CDT
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yeah! another good chapter! update soon |
Reviewed By: Eleclya On: June 25, 2002 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, this is so cool. You have to update soon, as in no, as in right now. Sorry, but I just can't wait for the next chapter. Very origional, don't think I've ever seen any fic like this, and I must say tis very good
Keep writing away |
Reviewed By: chels On: June 25, 2002 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no, poor videl! see what you did Bulma, geez. oh well, can't wait to see where this will take them. interesting, ne? anywho, great chapter! and the poor saiyan guys...(although it's quite funny ^.^). Keep up th great work and update soon if you can. This story rox! So if Videl's dancing with Goten, will Gohan get jealous and want to cut in? and just what about chichi and goku?^s i'll have to wait and see. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 08:27 CDT
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Dear god what happens next! O.O I must know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Faded Lush [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 01:56 CDT
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Please update soon. I have to know who got the drink! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 25, 2002 01:53 CDT
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Just wanted to let you know that Cha updated DITH, and boy what an update ^_^!! TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Devilishly Angelic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well nothing much happened in this chapter, but it was still great hehe. Please update SOON |
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