| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 21:51 CDT
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I knew it wouldn't happen! Poor Bulma...back to square one! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
don't leave me hanging l;ike that lol nice. |
Reviewed By: digibitch [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best DBZ fics I've read - and I'm not normally one for NC-17. However, your fic is honestly addictive. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 24, 2002 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH F*CK!!! Or should I say the lack thereof. You know, I wanted Bulma to win but I wanted her to win fair and square. I don't like the way she lied so easily to CC's face. As it stands right now I'd love to see Videl win. She never wanted to be included in that mess to begin with. Let Bulma sweat it out more and then feel free to do the lemonade whenever the mood strikes you. I know I don't have to say this but I will anyway: IIIILLLLOOOOVVVVEEEETTTTHHHHIIIISSSSFFFFIIIICCC!!!=^_^= |
Reviewed By: Erica On: June 22, 2002 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, this story is GREAT! Its sooo funny! I love the situations you put everyone in, they're priceless! PLEASE add me to your mailing list OhSodDevilish@aol.com!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Bri On: June 21, 2002 12:42 CDT
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I love this fic! I'm don't done reading it yet, but so far so good ^_^.
Poor Veggie, u know he wants to. Oh well, maybe he'll get it in the end. Be prepared 4 my overall review when I'm done reading! Keep up the great work!
p.s.email me sometime (Go10luver17@aol.com or Hosichan02@yahoo.com)!
~*BRI*~ |
Reviewed By: yazmine On: June 21, 2002 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is truly kewl!! keep writing it I'd like to see the end! keep up the incredibly really really good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Faded Lush [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 17:22 CDT
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Oh please you have to update soon. I know how you are feeling, having to umm...be without. It's not exactly a situation I would want to be in by choice. If you could please email me with updates I would love you forever....emerald3852@yahoo.com Post soon! Ja! |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 10:39 CDT
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that was genius!!!! what i really didn't get was the part where you had the butler get confused about Videl Son, or ChiChi Son...*shrugs shoulders* oh well, each author to their own liking i suppose. hope you update this one...or others soon!!!! plz plz plz !!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jedibabe On: June 16, 2002 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!! I can't wait for the party! Please write more!!
-Jedibabe- |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story!!! B/V shower scene was great!!
Update soon. I love your B/V stories! |
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did great! Again I have to say! Puh-leeze hurry up and finish this fic! |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 16:16 CDT
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It takes me longer and longer to scroll up and down these revieuws... this must be a record of some kind! I think Bulma should win! ChiChi really doenst deserve it and Videl deserves Gohan!
Now.. My celibacy is getting kinda irritating as I have meat a very very very cute guy.. Please finish soon okay? ( or ill have to agree with one of the other revieuwers and hunt you down) |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 16:06 CDT
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Well, so now that Bulma's plan has backfired I wonder what she'll do. It's lucky for Chi-Chi though. ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter! Please, please PLEASE update soon! |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: June 14, 2002 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
@_@! You know...everytime I read a chapter it just makes me want to read the next one even more!!! *sigh* And now I have to wait! *pouts* anyways! As always an unbelievably great chapter!
May your muse visit you many times!! ^_^ |
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