| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nesha On: June 14, 2002 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story was so COOL!!! I'm glad to be reading a lemon fanfic that deals with lack of sex. See... *blushes from embarrassment* I've, too been suffering from lack of sex. 4 LONG MONTHS OF NO D*CK!!! Anyways... when my fave lemon author of all time, Gokusgirl voted this story as fanfic of the week, I KNEW there was a reason for it! Keep up the good work! ;) Also I want to join your mailing list. My E-mail address is: nesha219@hotmail.com I hope you finish this story SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Queen Noriko On: June 14, 2002 13:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Poor Poor Videl! Bulma should learn to be more specific!!! Keep writing, I hate "To Be Continued"'s |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 14, 2002 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, the glass broke. I can't wait to see what will happen as a result of this. As always, another good chap. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: June 14, 2002 11:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um, I posted more than that! It didn't get it all! (wails) Anyways, I'll have to stick to saying great awesome totally cool really bodacious cowabunga (why in thw world am I speaking Turtle-ise?) chapter here.
BTW, 'bussal' is bustle. For some odd reason, it make me think of brussel sprouts..... |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! What will happen now that the REAL glass of wine with the x is gone???? Please hurry and update before I piss my pants!! :) |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: June 14, 2002 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me + Review = where is the next chapter? |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 14, 2002 07:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
majorly cool! i wonder what juliet has planned for trunks? and oh no! i hope the right mrs. son gets the drugged glass, not videl! |
Reviewed By: Gundam Gemini Maxwell On: June 10, 2002 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINISH THE FIC OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN!!!! ~.^ jk! love the fic! keep it up! write more often!!!! peace |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2002 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ohhh, Bulma is such a little devil! Getting rid of competition. But I don't believe she has purely pure (this is the time I need a thesaurus) motives. She's Vegeta's mate for Pete's Sake! She won't simply concede when the whole pot is within arm's reach. Divide and conquer.... Vegeta would be proud...if he wasn't so angry and deprived.... WAHHH! I say, since Bulma's trying to cheat, she should get her own medicine; pun intended. Let her be the sex-driven berserker jumping Vegeta in a room full of people. I'm sure he won't mind. ^_^
You're going to let Videl win aren't you? Or none of them. Videl's the one we least expect and none is just devious enough to satisfy everyone.... What? They all get the pill? (gg) None of the guy's will mind. Or maybe somebody like Yajirobe will get it. (EEK! Scary thought! But then again, paybacks for the whole tail thing, huh?) Anyways, let me know what happens by updating.... I'll wait. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 09, 2002 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, bulma is twisted! i knew she was vaguely evil, but holy jeez! the boys should retaliate! yay! |
Reviewed By: Queen Noriko On: June 09, 2002 00:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ... |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: June 09, 2002 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
@_@ !!!! ... um... I don't know what to say! Wow. Please update SOON!!! I wanna see what happens!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 08, 2002 04:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Susie Scream-A-Lot?? LMAO! That's funny. Anyway, I think it was nice of Bulma to give Videl a break and I can't wait to read what happens at that party. Good job JB. |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 20:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Bulma's so evil! I'm glad that she's not doing the same to Videl though... I feel really bad for the girl. *smirks evilly* I'm glad Chi-Chi's going to loose. She doesn't deserve to win. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no I just have a feeling this is going to back fire lol but keep it coming I want to see this ficcy to the end lol |
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