| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2002 16:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I DON"T WANT IT TO END! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But otherwise, that was a fantastically deviously wonderful update. PLEASE try to extend this story as much as can be! |
Reviewed By: dbz#1fan On: June 05, 2002 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow this fanfic is none like the other's i've seen you have to finish it soon. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 05, 2002 14:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh, goodness, bulma is so devious! absolutely evil, even! i love it! |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2002 07:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Muahahahahahahahaha, I haven't laughed so much sinsce Vegeta and the great dating adventure. its hilarious! I feel somewhat tense though the lack of sex is appearantly getting to me as well. Tell you what. ill live in celibacy as loing as this fic lasts as mental support for all of the poor people involved ( me being single this isnt as nice as it sounds, but its the thought that counts right?) Ok., write on!!! |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: June 03, 2002 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Trunks is just a smart one isn't he? ^_^ So are Videl and Bulma going to team up on Chichi? Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! ^_^
May your muse visit you many times (to get rid of that writer's block) ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SusieQ On: June 03, 2002 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love it. I have printed it off and keep it under my bed to read over and over What more can I say. Please keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Queen Noriko On: June 02, 2002 19:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Be gone writer's block so Jadedbest can continue writting!!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2002 14:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol love it keep it going |
Reviewed By: priss On: June 02, 2002 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a cool chapter.......but at the end with trunks...........Lets just put it this way i'm a trunks fan too! so......yeah just keep that in mind! oh one more thing i think he should be in the story more! but cool chapter! |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2002 11:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooo, Bulma's got a plan... ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl On: June 02, 2002 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I see where this is going! So I'm not going to give it away....so update like really soon, or when you get over your writer's block. I hate it when it happens to me...I can't wirte even a sentence for weeks! Take care! :) |
Reviewed By: moiraineaurian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2002 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i haven't read anything so funny in a long time. please keep up with the good work. also keep me informed on your fanfics. my email address is moiraineaurian@cs.com
thanks |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story just keep getting better and better
UPDATE REAL SOON!!!!plz |
Reviewed By: Puerto Rican On: May 30, 2002 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I've given you a review but what I was saying was that I have already 2 really long fics in between the time I read chapter 7 adn now. Wha's da deal Jadedbest? Everyone is just dying for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2002 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS ROCKS! UPDATE SOON! |
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