| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great! I'm sorry to see it end. *sniff* |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohohohohohohohoh!! you must continue this!!!! I feel bad for Gohan and Videl. *sigh* please PLEASE continue!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-is dying with laughter- Man, some of those chapters were just too good! I do feel bad for poor Videl and Gohan. -gives them both a hug- This is an awesome fic! Very original. I mean, there are fics where bets are made, but none that are like this. Considering that in this one the guys devise a plan of their own. ^-^ Love this fic to death!!!
Fate: You love everything mortal.
I know but even you have to admit this was a good fic!
Fate: -smirks- It was nice to see those saiyan losing it for awhile.
-fofl-
Vegeta: -glares at the stupid demon mutt-
Goku: -arms crossed- I don't find it funny
Gohan: -nods- Not at all
Fate: -gulps-
Ok, well I better end this before there is a total smack down in my review. ^-~ TTFN! Until the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Astria On: July 29, 2002 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it!
I had this exact same idea for a fanfic a couple of months ago but I never actually wanted to write it out. Just read it. Oh by the way did I mention: Love it! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 29, 2002 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha! poor gohan and videl!!! i feel sooo bad for them! i hope they start talking to you again in the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: tinie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You CAN NOT just stop like that! Oh plleeeaassseee finish it! I love this story, it's so gooood. ^-^ I really enjoy it, in fact, I enjoy all of your stories, hippiechick got me hooked on you @_^ ok, well please update soon, I'll be checkin in. Byes, tinie |
Reviewed By: Hosi-chan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 21:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Blue Oh, JB that was a great chapter! Especially the G/V part. ^o^ Next chapter's the last?! No! U can't; it's just starting to get, umm...'interesting'...
Loved it! |
Reviewed By: Firaga On: July 25, 2002 10:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
hahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!! poor POOR gohan! oh man that sucks, and THANK GOD, i was beginning to wonder how long it would be till the much anticipated v/b lemon mmmmmmm yummy... good job AS ALWAYS! |
Reviewed By: Jedibabe On: July 25, 2002 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! As usual, JB! Can't wait for the last chapter! Oh,no! It's the last already! Aww...*sniff* |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 09:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was great! The lemon was great! B/V for life! But I can't wait for the lemon between the winner, Videl and Saiya-man! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was certainly worth the wait. The is a fantastic fic (as are all of yours). |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOO HOO A LEMON!! YEAH!! WHOO HOO!! *ahem*
so Videl really won didn't she?? =)
Hee hee, poor Gohan and Videl.....
lucky Vegeta and Bulma!! ^^
Everyone should be getting sex now!! ^^
HAha
CONTINUE!! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Conga Line [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! *dies* poor gohan and videl!! *dances* cool, she came out in sexy underwear, whoohooo! ^.^ the great saiya-man....they should have turned off the tv, and just used the dragonballs to wish everyone back. ^.^ nah, where's the hero-ism in that? Anyways, awesome chapter! I can't wait to read the next one, I feel so bad for poor gohan-chan. lol. being a hero really sucks sometimes. great work! |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 02:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Poor Gohan!!! I guess that's the curse of being a super hero. I wonder if Saiyaman can even funcion properly without getting laid on a regular basis.
Oh well, it's not like I'll ever have him. (Damnit all to Hell! Life's just not fair!!!) Since he's with Videl, who I do not care too much for if you didn't catch that in THE SISER SAGA, he can suffer forever for all I care!!! If he wanted to get laid that bad...Okay, so maybe it's just me...Moving on...
I hate to see this story end, but you're right. You have a bunch of stories which need your attention (When You Least Expect and Relationships) and I'm hoping for faster updates. I can't wait! I'll be reviewing! Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 25, 2002 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Poor Gohan and Videl, they were just about to...and you...oh man you're cruel. Bad, bad author! At least B/V had a great time in the GR. That lemon was hot. Fantastic chapter JB. Can't wait for the grand finale ^_^. TTYL |
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