| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angelhart [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2002 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very original and very pleasant to read as well. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: amazon fox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2002 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wish soooooooooooo bad that i was videl!! or bulma!!! they are so luck!! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
18 paused as the phone began to ring. She moved to the small table that held the only extension in the house and frowned as her hello was met by a girlish giggle.
“Stop that,” the caller chastised some unseen person.
“Bulma?” 18 questioned.
“18? Hi! Listen I-” another fit of laughter erupted followed by soft moan.
18 removed the phone from her ear and frowned at it before putting it back.
“- hold on a minute okay?” she heard Bulma say. “Okay sorry about that I'm back. I won't be there today so- wait a second Vegeta I wasn't through!”
“Oh yes you were,” Vegeta growled just before the line went dead.
You know I loved this scene. I, of course, skipped the whole Videl/Gohan thing. If fact, I'm dreading that I have to write it. It's like a chick flick.
(clears throat) JadedBest, may your story have the honor of being the first story in my fanfiction section at http://committed.to/bttp ? I'll put it in a lemon section and everything. Check out the sight and email me back yes or no? Thanks! This was a truly awesome fic! BTW, I still think of chapter 6.... |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji (not logged in) On: August 10, 2002 07:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's over already? But it was so fun, and good, and well written...and enjoyable... o_O; can't think of anymore...
ah yes, everyone go!! Read Rae George! Anything by her rocks! And I'm not just saying this because she's one of my best friends...not at all! It's because her stories really do freaking rock!! |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 05:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
*chuckles* I like this fic a lot. *insert evil grin here* Us writers are so mean, but the entertainment value is well worth it. The scene where Bulma and Videl got into the cat fight and Gohan and Vegeta were enjoying it was great. Sexualy frustrated Saiyan's are just so much fun! Plus I liked Bulma's phone call at the end... and 18's subsequent disgust was just perfect! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Beji (not logged in) On: August 09, 2002 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor, POOR Gohan...and Videl. |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a sweet G/V lemon! I never thought that Videl would be the winner...but it makes sense! Thanks for writing such a great story...this one is one I'll always remember! Can't wait to read some more of your stories...until next time keep up the great work! :)
Later Tater! |
Reviewed By: priss On: August 08, 2002 14:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
IT WAS GREAT! (I MEAN WILLPOWER) * PRISS BOWS IN YOUR PRESENTCE anyway i'm on the list for willpower so you can take me off and again great story bye |
Reviewed By: Hosi-chan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 13:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Short, but great all the same! |
Reviewed By: tinie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This story is almost as good as When You Least Expect! hehe, i said almost ^_~ anyways, update your others... especially WYLE plleeeaasse! ok, well can't wait! tinie |
Reviewed By: Nesha On: August 07, 2002 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sad that it's over, but I enjoyed it anyway.
Um... *looks around*... that's all I have to say.
*yells* DON'T FORGET TO READ DIGITAL HIGH!!!! I COULD USE SOME POINTERS!!!
And I'll be on the lookout for your other fic, My Friend. |
Reviewed By: darkwarriorgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was SOOOOOOOOO funny! THis is just an idea, but in one of your fics, you should let Vegeta find out that Yajirobe cut off his tail in the Saiyan Saga. I was watching the Saiyan Saga on DVD and Vegeta NEVER found out who severed his tail. That would be hilarious! Vegeta enraged and Yajirobe is the subjet! Anyways, that was easily one of the FUNNIEST fics on MediaMiner, with the exception of the Vegeta Adventure Trilogy! lol |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! I can't believe it's all over. I'm so friggin' glad you decided to forgive Bulma. My friend Jennifer would absolutely die if you didn't update When You Least Expect!!! (hint, hint, hint)
Okay, I guess I should say great chapter, yadayadayada...You know all that already, so just think of what you wanted me to say the most, and that's what the yadayadayada stands for. Okay?
Well, I can't wait for you next creation. Oh, and just for the record, I know I haven't been updating. I have some more written to The Sister Saga, I just have to make myself sit down and edit it...I hate editing. I also have a new story I've been working extremely hard on about Trunks. I have yet to find anything like it and I hope you'll enjoy it when I finally get it up. It's called The Truth, so keep an eye out for it. (Why did I say that? You know I'll email you when it's up...Oh well...)
I guess that's it...I can't wait to see what you write next, I just hope I can find the time to read it all! I'm sure I will though...You're that awesome! Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 06, 2002 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, it's over. Well, I can honestly say that having read all your fics you really outdid yourself with this one. Great piece of work JB, you should be proud. I'm glad that Videl won it afterall she really never wanted any part of it to begin with. Bravo!! Oh before I forget, One was updated and is close to being finished, DITH #45 is up (this chap is really gonna piss you off) and Requiem In Blue has been updated also. I've been wanting to check out RG's fic for awhile now, but lately I haven't even had time to talk to myself, but as soon as I get a chance I will. Miss ya, glad you're back ^_^. |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 06, 2002 22:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great ending to a great story. I thought the fight between Gohan & Videl was a nice touch and made their ultimate reunion that much better. Great job! Very enjoyable. |
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