| "Mokushita Hyuuga" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i pretty much figured katoki was naruto, but it was entirely different to actually read when he got his memories back. i love the way you ended that chapter, but at the same time i hated it. damn the cliffhangers... please, please, PLEASE update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: ya-ya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story u are a awsome writer keep it up
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 12:06 CDT
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AHA I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT!
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Reviewed By: master of all and nothing On: July 12, 2007 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome and brilliant fic can't wait until next chap is posted also I NEWWWWWWW ITTTTTTT!!!!!! Bwaaa Haaa haa haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Title: FAIL encouragement
Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 23:32 CDT
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Don't worry :D Parents are usually tripy and everything so maybe after a nap or something your dad will be okay. CONGRATS on escaping HS and Thank you for the cool fic
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Reviewed By: This is Juan Carlos On: June 22, 2007 18:58 CDT
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wow...that sucks...anyways, I am glad u r not giving up on Mokushita...AND I hope you continue writing since this fanfic is the BEST I have ever read!!! :D Thanks and good luck on the search!! XD
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Title: Update please
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 15:44 CDT
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No updates ye :( ,you are torturing your readers. Please do not abandon the story.
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Reviewed By: THE_WRITER_OF_CROW On: June 15, 2007 10:07 CDT
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its a good story. exelent plot. need a little work on the grammer. :P p.s. when is the next update coming out
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Reviewed By: mousetrap [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update or say when you will start adding chapters again. Almost the same style as the manga. excellent work
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Reviewed By: queenhinata [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A nagging part of me says Katoki is Naruto. Hm. That was really funny when Katoki came out naked and then Sakura commented. XD Katoki and Hinata are like perfect for each other. Anyway I really like the chapter.
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing. i have been reading and watching for updates for a few weeks now and i love it. i know i like a story when i'm thinking ahead to who some people are and how the plot will turn out. that is what you story does. i thank you for writing something so enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: demoncell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it more than ever. Though it kind of annoys me that Hinata doesn't know it's NARUTO. It is naruto right? Or am I imagining things. Hey can you give me some pointers on my story 'Reborn'? If you would, that would be really helpful. Please and Thankyou. I love your story write more.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The pacing of the story is great, the whole story is. I am just wondering why did Katoki scar at all is something wrong with him aside from his memory?. For his kyuubi healing kicked in or he would have hit the bucket when Hiashi attacked and his arm healed so why not his face? And what about the seal on his belly it was kind of big to be notice by Sakura at least for I believe she saw it once.
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Reviewed By: Juan Carlos Ng [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! I knew Kouden didn't die! ^^ I am also surprised that Ero-sennin has a daughter, not to be you know, but she sounds hot! ^^ I been reading some fanfics lately, and I am surprised that I have found two fanfics that includes Jiraiya having a daughter! Anyways, Moghedian, you are the best!! Keep it going! "Mokushita Hyuuga" is just as good to me as the original Naruto Manga! ^^
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Reviewed By: queenhinata [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 09:18 CDT
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really great. i still can't believe Hinata is pregnant. ^_^
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