| "Mokushita Hyuuga" Reviews/Comments [ 94 ] |
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Title: Nice closing
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a highly enjoyable story, Thanks for writing it. The closing was really nice. I am still confused about Sasamis recovery from she was being held I kind of believe you had more plot for it and cut it down. I will wait for the sequel. Probably paperwork nightmares from Naruto,
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Reviewed By: This is Juan Carlos Ng On: August 12, 2007 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update!! THis is just getting more and more exciting!! :D
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 04:59 CDT
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That was a good but sad chapterwell the sad part is with Tenten and now with Neji i`m not sure if you have it he is still alive or that she is just seeing things anyways I just cann`twait till Naruto and them get back to Konoha yeah cann`t have Sakura to become the next Hokage so please update soon
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Reviewed By: kmt87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 18:33 CDT
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Yes Neji is alive!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mousetrap [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again a great chapter, you have a great storyline and i hope it doesn't end soon. I don't mind waiting for the next update quality over quantity. Eagerly anticipating next chapter.
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 11:07 CDT
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Sorry for not reviewing the past few chapters, i had no internet for a few weeks and i was exstatic to see that there were quite a few chapters for me to read! lol. i really enjoyed reading the part with gaara in this chapter. i cracked up when i realized he was laughing because naruto loves to piss off tsunade. please update soon! i'm really curious as to what will happen when the group gets to konoha. oh, and that cliffy was pure evil... just to let you know. O.O
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome update, please update again soon. can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: Juan Carlos Ng [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOrry for not commenting on the previous chapters! Well, these chapters were AWESOME!!! YAHOO!!! Katoki is Naruto!! BUt...now I wonder what is going to happen!! (I havent read CHapter 40 yet, I am going to after this review)...Anyways, I don´t want Mokushita Hyuuga to end so fast!!! >.< Thanks for updating FAST!!!....
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update again soon, awesome update by the way. awesome story!!
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON, i need to know what happens. your story is aesome, and your a griter writer!
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Reviewed By: KT On: July 30, 2007 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really interesting I can't wait to read what happens next I actually got so rapped up in this fic that I read all chapters in 3 days great writing keep it up
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 18:20 CDT
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I can't believe they are going to tell Tsunade that Hinata and 'Katoki' ran away. ... are you trying to kill off Naruto right after you bring him back from the dead? lol. I can't help but wonder if Sasuke is going to think Naruto and Hinata lied to him when he thought Katoki was Naruto at first. Is he even going to give him a chance to explain before he kicks his ass? so many questions, so little patience. I can't wait for you to update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nichole On: July 18, 2007 11:10 CDT
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OMG He finally got his memory back, and he is going back! I'm jumping out of my seat here! What is going to happen once people realize that Naruto is back from the dead? PLEASE get the next chapter out real soon.
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: korbaton [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah. He lives again! Thank goodness. Having read the whole of your story over the course of one day, I must say that I am very, very, very impressed. One of the most original and intriguing Naruto fanfictions I've ever read. The characters are very well-developed; Kouden is exactly who I'd see as being Hinata and Naruto's child, the Rookie Nine are the same bunch of loons in your tale as they are in the canon, and overall, I'd just say that this fic kicks ass. I look forward to seeing more of Naruto come back, and I really wanna see just how Hinata will react to Naruto's "awakening," so to speak. Write more soon!
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Reviewed By: upchuck605 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this story--it's very well thought out and developed and really explores a very different future than what most authors assume for Naruto. Occasionally there are some grammar and spelling issues, but it's better than average (which sadly isn't that good). I also think your style is easy to read, but somewhat formal as well. Great story! I look forward to updates eagerly!
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