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| "The Transience of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 ] | Reviewed By: Deidara On: December 18, 2006 13:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My God. I traveled here from AFF.net, cause I was mildly interested on how the story would turn out. I was abit thrown off by the very angsty AxelRoxas, but I'm a HUGE fan of SeiHay. So I waited it out, reading your awesome work, but I was kinda hoping it'll just come out already(no pun intended). You dragged it out, but God was it worth it, you built to it. Not like alot of other authors who just lay the scene and get it over with. You made them dance around eachother, it was amazing how much characteristics you put into this. I felt everything~ Hayner's fear and anxiety, but some how still trusting Seifer. And Seifer's respect for Hayner, and respecting and loving him enough not to rush into things. The lemon at the end was SO FUCKING WORTH IT. God, I can't say that enough! So detailed, so emotional~ You seriously take the cake for best SeiferHayner lemon... that I've EVER had the great fortune of reading. Its fanfics like these that keep me going, keeping me believing there're still worthy author's out there. Ah~ I'm still gushing like a fangirl over that cute senario you left us with Seifer and Hayner~ So adorable. And so frikking incharacter! Man, not for a SECOND did I feel anything you wrote was something they wouldn't do, quite the opposite actually, it felt surrealisticly normal.. like something like that could've panned out. I could just go on and on about the awesomeness of your writing skills. But I'm tired and the lack of oxygen from giggling too much is taking it toll on my brain x_x ^___^ Please update soon, I'll be waiting ethralledly~ Y'know what, I might just re-read the thing over again. God, I love it xD
| Reviewed By: sennenricecooker On: December 17, 2006 03:28 EST
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I LOVE this fic! You are a great writer, the way you handle lemons are good... who needs the descriptions of "fluids arching into the air" anyways? ^___^;;; So yeah, UPDATE SOON!
| Reviewed By: Larissa red On: December 15, 2006 02:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow....this is fic is wonderful the pairings seem real and not forced. you explan everyone's feelings well. The set up's are good the reason's they are froced together and all i have a rivalship...after all i am a Seto/Yami girl. i like the feel of it....the cute rocks! i hope to see more and if i dont....i will kill all your pets and take your copy of KH2!
| Title: toast
Reviewed By: MaskOfMe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 03:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're awsome. Not alot of authors are funny or have a sense of humor. "do me harder bitch". That's classic & I love it (in a funny way, not the sexy way). But it's getting cute now, i'll feel bad if seifer does him and they don't even have feelings! ........yes, i'm one of those retardedly random romantics that need to wear a helment to survive (haha, retardedly random romantics= r cubed!, if you know algebra...or geometry.....dammit).
| Reviewed By: Number VIII - Axel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 16:58 EST
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Yay! I love the Hay/Seif. Mmm, ablicious Seifer... Oh, and I do hope we see more of Roxas and Axel soon as well. :B I totally understand your point on the descriptions (yes I read all the notes). When I finally get around to posting my fics up here (I'm slow, I know) you'll see I do use some of those words but it's only because I feel that the characters using them would think in those terms. But I digress. Excellent chapter. Can't wait to read the next one! I'll stop typing now. XD
| Title: Mreowr.
Reviewed By: ChocoboHaired [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 11:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously wonderful.
| Reviewed By: Loli On: December 10, 2006 19:27 EST
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Your comment at the end did clear quite a few things up! Thank you! But now I'm worried about Seifer... What happens if he chooses Hayner over his gang?! I mean, you can't really just quit a thug life. But Hayner is too cute and innocent to be brought into it! I.. Hope this story has a happy ending. For Roxas, Axel, Hayner and Seifer.
| Reviewed By: Aoi Hebi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 22:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heheh, I'm really enjoying this! I was a little hesitant about the pairing at first, but really, there are, like, NO fics with Hayner in them, so I figured I'd give it a shot. And I'm a FFVIII nut anyways, so of course I'm gonna read about Seifer! ^^ Ya know, this fic really reminds me of a SeiferxZell fic, just replace Zell with Hayner and make some minor personality adjustments and tadaa! SeiferxHayner goodness! And I adore Seif and Zell as a couple in the first place--the whole 'I tease you because I like you' thing is so fun to read--So this is a nice, original change. Anyways, I really do love your writing style; it flows nicely, and nothing ever seems rushed. Though the Axel and Roxas bits aren't quite as interesting as the Seifer/Hayner stuff. Oh well, it all fits nicely, so I should just shut up, lol. Thanks mucho for what you've written so far, and I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of this!!
| Title: lala
Reviewed By: MaskOfMe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 03:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHHH seifer has gotta "ravish" hayner XD but last time you wrote, err, "intimicies" with azel and roxas, it wasn't that descriptive
| Reviewed By: Loli On: December 03, 2006 02:22 EST
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I found it! I was your reviewer on AFF ranting about how i wouldn't find it, but I did! I yahoo'd this website and searched for a bit, but I found you! :D
| Reviewed By: Number VIII - Axel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 14:02 EST
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Ah you got me to join here~ Here's a review~ I love love love this fic! So keep writing more, yeah? :3
| Reviewed By: FadingSKye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 10:39 EST
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Hey, I just thought I'd leave a review and say that I like your story ^_^. Its cute, and I think Hayner and Seifer is a pretty interesting pairing that I wasn't interested in until your story. -huggles- I like it, and I can't wait to see the next chapter
| Reviewed By: oath2oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 05:33 EST
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*sniffle* me again *hiccup* omg cahppy 4 is... is... *bursts n2 tears* sooooooooo b-ond sweet~! bad~! u mad rayne cry~! grr~! on the upside, u deserve a cookie... don't worry, this one isn't on fire! *gives cookie* well, g2g rayne
| Title: AWWW
Reviewed By: oath2oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 04:58 EST
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ur right~!! hayner and roxas' friendship is too cute~! o, and dont worry axel, i love u~! *gives axel a flaming cookie* cookies are good on fire!! rayne
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