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| "The Transience of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] | | Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] | Reviewed By: Manda On: April 28, 2007 03:09 EDT
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(sniffle) aw maaaan! Over already. ... oh wait. It's 3 am. Heh. ^_^; Well, at any rate, I'm very sad that I was distracted right past the ending. (sigh) however, it's almost good. I would have killed you with questions. (^_^); Anyway! The important part! ...... I LOOOOOOVE YOOOOOOU!!!!!!!!! (glompage) And thank you for being awesome and magnificent and superb and all those funny sounding adjectives that mean really really good. The relationship building, the smut, and the overall goodness will keep me happy for a long time. And I WILL reread it. Again, and again, and again. ^_^ Much love !
| Reviewed By: Manda On: April 28, 2007 02:45 EDT
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HA! I'm sure Axel would have MUCH rather had Roxas flaavored icecream. (... don't mention how that sounds. Please) Then again... Roxas flavored icecream.... hm. Not a bad buisiness plan.
| Reviewed By: Manda On: April 28, 2007 02:28 EDT
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^_^ happy. You make me very happy. very, very, very happy. And so very very sad at the same time for being a busy loser.
| Reviewed By: Manda On: April 28, 2007 02:16 EDT
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Hey look! I've returned!(finally) (glomp double glomp triple glomp) I am soooooooo soooooooo SOOOOOO sorry that I've been missing forever! School got in my way, a lot. And of course, now that you've heard the reason, I have to comment. Yes. (huuuuuuuuuuuuuge fangirl squeal) (melts into puddle of fangirl goop) I love the smut. It's lovely, glorious smut. And pretty too. And now, I've got catching up to do. (which is why i didn't review the last chappy. although, it would've looked something like this) (ps. I do hope the guy seifer has to kill (jerkface Mc. douchebag)dies painfully. oh yes. very much pain.)
| Title: /cry!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 18:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I came in after the end of an era!! . . . But I still loved it. . . However, since you've provided and e-mail/journal place for questions, I'll give my full review there . . . if I can figure out how. ^.^;;
| Reviewed By: animewhore666doom On: March 31, 2007 01:53 EDT
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0_____0 oh, mygod. is it over? no way....it cant be! i want to read the obvious smut scene about to unfold between hay and seif!! why?!!!??? ok. wow. so its over....over...hmmm. well, seeing as how my life depended on this story i guess i have no reason to live now ...*commits suicide*...*long pause*.... ok im back! neat trick huh? like every other FREAKIN chapter...this one was outstanding *reluctantly giving praise to an OBVIOUSLY better writer*haha i just kidding, on the reluctantly part...ok, oh my gosh. its amazing how much i'd fallin in love with this story! the way you developed each character, how there was an actual plot line WITH smut involved...unlike other (in fact, most) fanfictions...its so unnreal to know its over! i dont know if its wrong, but i really have no questions! we all know seifer and hayner are going to be together happily for eternity and have sexy hayner/seifer babies (dont ask how, i dont even know) and how roxas and axel will live together and also have sexy akuroku babies(again, loss for words). thats freakin incredible! not only did you create an excellent story, but you tied all the knots! YET,(!!!!) you left room for little side stories! (that you did mention and we all hope you will follow up on) ok, this is tooooo long. I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOUR STORY!! I WISH IT WERE MINE, CUZ IF IT WAS I WOULD PUBLISH IT EVERYWHERE!! i'm DEVASTATED that its over, but it ended on a good note. if you ever decide to make sequels, you can be sure i will be there to judge and criticize ;D much love!!! and thank you for the wonderful story!!!!
| Title: Wowzers!
Reviewed By: SR4EVA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 14:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is totally awesome (So far). So much as I've read, I'm enjoying it and can't wait toget to school each day to print it out (for free... yeah, that's all that school is really for, aye? Naw, I'm just palyin') But I totally love this, and other then that, that is my total review. I love it!
| Reviewed By: olheiras On: March 27, 2007 11:50 EDT
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Oh this was lovely. I'm kinda sad this was the last chapter but hm, a sequel? :D a one shot sequel perhaps?? :D:D Oh well, either way this was a very fun read. I had been following this fic since Late December and I'm very pleased with the way it took and how it ended. Nice job!!
| Reviewed By: AmytheYu On: March 27, 2007 08:34 EDT
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That was so cute, so well written, so...in need of a sequel!!! >=O I demand more at some point. X3 Until then, I'll have to satisfy myself by rereading this one a dozen more times than I've already done. T_T
| Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 19:58 EDT
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GReat ending! I actually liked it and didn't go "WTF???" I could imagine it in a movie and stuff. Anyways, ubercool fanfic! It still surprises me when I realize it was probably the time span of only a few weeks, everything seemed so long in between, it made me go back and reread a few chapters. Which was worth it. I'll probably reread the whole thing now. Keep up the Seifer/Hayner stuff, I'll send an army of smileys your way: ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ etcetera...
| Reviewed By: Hikariryu On: March 21, 2007 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I didn't get to review until now...I've been stuck at universities in Cali, and I've just gotten the chance to respond. Anyhow, *sniffles* Gorgeous...absobloodylutely gorgeous ending. I'm proud to say that it's one of the few endings that I actually enjoy, which is an accomplishment, at least in my eyes ^_~ I'm sad that it's over, but I it's quite the satisfying ending, so I'm not completely devastated by the facts that there won't be more updates on this story. However, I have to say that I'm overjoyed by the fact that you may write more HxS (hehehe, I'm not biased at all) but feel free to take a looooooongass break, because you, more than anyone else right now, deserve it! XDD I love you so much for writing the story that has made my entire winter/part of spring! Ummm, haha yeah...I'll be waiting however long it takes to bring out another masterpiece. Until then, ciao (message on DA or something if you ever want to ^^)
| Reviewed By: mellorine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 23:27 EDT
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-spasmspasm- NUUUU! It's over! I feel like my world is ending and crumbling around me. Maybe i'll just go cry now or something. Your story... this chapter ... everything... was so amazing. I swear, you may be one of the sole reasons how I got into Seifer/Hayner and Axel/Roxas pairings. I AM NOT WORTHY! I'm so sad that's it over! I mean, it was going to happen sooner or later... but still! Wahhhh! I really, really can't wait for your next stories. MORE! YOU MUST WRITE MORE! Your writing is so descriptive and well-worded and just so... FLUFFIN' AWESOME! I'm too shocked about the ending to write anything more, it was just all so good. And i'm so depressed now that the ride's over. That is, until your next story. Right? Right? Heck yes.
| Title: Oh so lovely!
Reviewed By: angel of mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He could pull and push with all his might, and Seifer would undo the efforts, make him submit, ravish him without batting an eyelash. It was terrible! It was… so incredibly hot, he admitted to himself. - Thats great! wonderful! your style of writing...*puurs* :3 lovely! "If we… don't leave now," Hayner gasped, "I'm going… to let you." - a little bit of PDO and Hayner being a total Uke, lovely, lovely! n.n Roxas smiled that smile at him, and held out his hand as if he were offering the world. - i love the Axel/ Roxas moments! they are so kind to each other, its so heart warming n//n Axel felt the weight of old memories slowly loosen, falling from his shoulders like a heavy cloak as he stepped forward to take the blonde's hand. - Your descriptions are full of so many pictures! they paint lovely unforgetable images in my mind. "Always," he said, purposely responding to the double meaning, and the blonde's slightly fixated gaze. - haha, that Seifer. He knows just how to get Hayners lust boiling. Seifer kissed at him condescendingly, barely holding off his lascivious smile, rushing Hayner on his way with a blush and a scowl. - I can picture that so clearly. Its a lovely thought n.n Lets hope that my whole comment shows up this time, shall we? haha~
| Reviewed By: Uniasus(lazy) On: March 19, 2007 16:33 EDT
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Wonderful, wonderful story! I adored this completly and am looking forward to more!
| Reviewed By: :) On: March 19, 2007 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive loved reading this. i constantly checked everyday if there was a new chapter up! & it always made my day when there was. i cant believe its finished now though :( so sad. but i hope you keep writing because your stuffs great :D yay for Haynerxseifer!! there is not enough of it in the world! so chocolate cookies for your & your amazing fic :)
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