| "The Transience of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: JapSock On: March 18, 2007 17:24 EDT
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What!? Last chapter already!? Damn. I really liked it. It was a sweet story. Keep writing, you're good at it. ~JapSock
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Title: title
Reviewed By: next speilburg On: March 18, 2007 14:45 EDT
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some people fall in love They had too crash into it :D Brilliant.
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Title: meh again
Reviewed By: carol annerayne davis On: March 14, 2007 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i kept reading and reading andreading until i though meh poor litte head wood go KABOOM!!!!!!!!! i think it did.... hang on, lemme check *looks n mirror* ahhhh, no, but just barely.... well, g2g b4 meh mum comes home!!! rayne
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Reviewed By: animewhore666doom On: March 10, 2007 22:47 EST
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nooooo!! i dont want it to be overrrrrr!!!! DONT BE LAZY!! >:0 *gasp* ahhh! im sorry! ur not lazy! i just can NOT ponder life without this story! do you know what i do every freakin friday?...CHECK FOR UPDATES!!! and when they dont come i die inside...wah. ok i wont whine, (hate whiners) but i will throw out some suggestions, if that is ok ;) umm, im really a hopeless romantic, so in the last chapter, could you make sure that hayner tells seifer he loves him....maybe? that would be perfect...with some sloppy kisses! yes, then at least, i could die with some happiness. x___x...and uh, hmm. actually thats all i can think of, ya know besides the whole dont end the story request :\ this has been THE best fanfic i have read all year...for seriously! you are an excellent writer. and even though its gonna SUCK!.. i know the last chapter will be teh coolest ending eva!! XDDDD ok i sound like a kiss ass now...i'll stop. UNTIL NEXT TIME!! (if its worth anything at all...;) Peaceandphlover@gmail.com
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Reviewed By: Uniasus, the lazy On: March 08, 2007 18:22 EST
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I'm still here! *waves* Hmm...I was always intreged by that sea salt ice cream.
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Reviewed By: ChocoLuvER [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 02:42 EST
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wow!!! you did awsome AS USSUAL... LAST CHAPTER!!! REALLY?!?!?! ..... awww ..... im gonna cry... oh btw : do you post here instead of y-gallery now???
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Title: Seifer has a sexy tummy...
Reviewed By: firefly12 On: March 07, 2007 18:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the only Seifer/Hayner fics I've seen, which is bad 'cause I'm addicted. I love this entire fic because I love AkuRoku too. Yummy. ;)
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Reviewed By: pwd On: March 07, 2007 08:06 EST
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YAY another chapter!! thank you :) butbutbut... where's my sxh!?? D: i mean akuroku is all good, but..butbut :( haha i can wait. you've given me enough for now. thank you!
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Reviewed By: AmytheYu On: March 07, 2007 03:44 EST
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NOOOOOOO!!!!! This must not end. This must NEVER END! DX The buttsex must go on forevar! X3 I'll have nothing left to look forward to reading every week if this ends. T_T
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 22:42 EST
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Teehee, there were some things in this chapter that just made me smile like crazy. The flustered Store clerk was very reminiscent of Cat and Mouse. ^_^ Oh, and that part when Axel was remembering about Roxas's days in Org XIII just seemed really possible. Roxas comes across as a cold person/nobody sometimes. Okay, I'm almost rambling. Can't wait till the next chapter! Even if it means THE END. -__-
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Reviewed By: angel of mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 21:28 EST
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why..why will it only post part of my comment!! >:O aarrgg! *posts the rest of it on dA*
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Title: oh so lovely :3
Reviewed By: angel of mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things i liked this chapter (well...the things that are short enough to put here :D ) Axel hugged Roxas a little closer and smiled lewdly. hehe! i love that PDA n.n -something to long to post- that was so sad, that whole part about what axel felt like after roxas left T.T i was getting teary :'( Roxas sighed in defeat, and tilted a quick kiss to meet Axel's lips. "I'll live, I guess." that was so sweet :D kissing where people could see them, pure true love!
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Title: oh so lovely :3
Reviewed By: angel of mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things i liked this chapter (well...the things that are short enough to put here :D ) Axel hugged Roxas a little closer and smiled lewdly. hehe! i love that PDA n.n -something to long to post- that was so sad, that whole part about what axel felt like after roxas left T.T i was getting teary :'( Roxas sighed in defeat, and tilted a quick kiss to meet Axel's lips. "I'll live, I guess." that was so sweet :D kissing where people could see them, pure true love!
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Reviewed By: Hikariryu On: March 05, 2007 14:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*teary eyes* Nooooo, to think it's almost OVER...I can't bring myself to comprehend this tragic reality, absolutely not. On the other hand, this chapter was just as brilliant as your other masterpieces ^^ I really enjoyed myself a lot reading each installment. Perhaps it is because they are so realistic, but in any case, they give me hope that perfect endings might exist after all! I don't really have much more to say (since I've "outgushed" the last few reviews) except that I await eagerly the final chapter. Actually, I'd be lying if I said I didn't hope that you'd write another beauty like this one. As for the doujin...XDDDD like everything else, it's not going to be finished in the near future (my spring break got violated by college visits)...but whenever I do have time, I'll try (so that you can get the whole of the chapter 7/8 doujinshi ten years after it was written) Anyhow, keep up the spectacular work!! *leaves cookies EVERYWHERE*
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Reviewed By: xleicorex On: March 05, 2007 06:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow thank you. you made my week .. i look forward to each chapter so much that i get incredibly excited and all my friends ask me what on earth is the matter :/ that's how much i love your story. uh-huh. you really turned me into a sxh shipper. thanks for that :)
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