| "The Transience of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Title: Still With Ya!!
Reviewed By: Takaia On: March 04, 2007 22:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I just letting ya know I still hooked on this I love it! I can't wait till your next chapter! I have never enjoyed a story as much as I am enjoying this one. Keep up the awsome work!!
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Reviewed By: Number VIII - Axel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 22:43 EST
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Awww, but sea salt ice cream is really good (at least the recipe I yoinked from flurry-chan on y!)~ XD *likes it* This chapter was full of so much omfg cute and backstory~ Two of my faves. :3
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Title: wow over 1oo reviews
Reviewed By: next speilburg On: March 04, 2007 19:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS. -hugs seifer and Hayner dolls-
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Reviewed By: Loli On: February 26, 2007 21:03 EST
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Uh, well, I'm not 100% sure but I believe someone is stealing your work. It may be you on a FF.Net account, if so, sorry! xD I was just being protective of your story! And if not, http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3410363/1/ ^That person is taking credit for Transience of Memory. X:
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Reviewed By: animewhore666doom On: February 25, 2007 14:44 EST
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AHHHHH!!!!>_____< YESSS!!! gosh i love hayner and seifer buttshex! im going to hell i know...rarw!! that was so worth the wait! you write so well! i cant believe its gonna end soon! NOO! drag it out! you can do it! i dont think anyone would mine! ok, with this new amount of smut fresh in my mind, i think i can go another 2 weeks or so without and update. but any longer and the cells will begin to deterierate...keep up teh good work, love!!
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Reviewed By: LadyRedDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 20:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story! I really enjoy reading it! I love the couples in your fic. I also love to read stories that are centered around characters that usual are not in the spot-light. I have never thought of Hayner/Seifer and now I can't get enough of it. Sadly I have not found any other fics focused on them. Which is one of the reasons why I hope you write more Hayner and Seifer. I love your writing and the relationships you have built are believable. You portrayed the characters well. Seifer seems like the protective and jealous typed.I love the idea of Seifer protecting Hayner- It's so Cute! I want to know what happens next! I really hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: AmytheYu On: February 23, 2007 04:04 EST
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And the prayers for more buttsecks has been granted!! XD Oh what a wonderful world of buttsecks it is! Buttsecks for one, buttsecks for all!! ====>--3 and a badly drawn ejaculating penis!! =D
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Reviewed By: Number VIII - Axel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 02:38 EST
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Love your work. Love love love.
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Reviewed By: increase On: February 21, 2007 03:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY she updates thank you :D:D you are win ..man you've got me hooked on sxh now. it's a wonderful thing.
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Title: so CUTE!
Reviewed By: Deidara xD On: February 21, 2007 01:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aw! This chapter was filled with warm, squishy feelings... I love it to death! I'm sad to ehar this fic is coming to a close, but assured that you'll write even awesomer stuff that I'll get to fangirl-ize over =D... cause I mean, I'm such a fangirl for your lemons xD I think I began to love KH more after reading this fanfic, I really think so xD So put out this last chapter so I can have the closure I so readily deserve xDD ... how odd, you put this chapter up on my birthday =D ----and yes, I dub this chapter;enough buttseck >D... on second thought, one could never have enough yaoi-buttsecks xD
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Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 01:50 EST
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i love this!!!! But you know you use so many big words.....i had to go dictonary throughout the chapter...(do you know how old i am....) oh but it was soooo worth it! >o<
i can't believe the fic is almost done *tears* hey! i'n your next fic could you do zexion x demyx? *gives the puppy dog eyes* i know my mood changes alot...MUHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! keep up the good work! your {strike}stalker{strike/} friend -Chibi Hikiri
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 00:18 EST
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This is gonna be your second to last chapter? Aww...I'm kinda sad, but all good things must come to an end. ^^ I loved it, as usual, especially when you described Axel's eyes...I was like O.O *wide eyed.* You made the expanse behind his eyes seem so everything, argh, I can't find the right word, but I've seriously never read a better description for eyes before. I love your lemons and I love your writing style. Emphasis on all of the LURVE. Okay, as I have observed, I couldn't care less if you updated within a week, although that would be really cool, but yeah… I still be here…
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Reviewed By: Convict_Panthress On: February 18, 2007 22:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story. Please, I hope you update soon. I've been trying to find more Seifer/Hayner fanfictions and I can't seem to find them. It's really starting to irritate me. If you could please help!!! Update, please, I really interested in Seifer/Hayner! WOOT!!!! XD
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Reviewed By: Hikariryu On: February 18, 2007 19:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
asoifujewijrwe...this chapter has officially turned my brain to mush...and it's all thanks to my most adorable, accomodating authoress!! *hugs and piles cookies on uber-neko* Honestly, I can't think of any more praise to lavish your spledidness with! I loveloveloved the lemon and a half (counting the frisky akuroku and the Seif's tease)!! Their relationships are really progressing into something almost tangible, and I worship you for that ^^. I bet you never thought you'd be writing this much HaySeif huh, *nudges you*. I'm so satisfied now that I'd like just as much plot development as smut *le gasp*!! You're my absolute hero, and once again, no worries for the delay. I will faithfully wait for the next chapter (and I'm sure every other dedicated fan will), so don't go slaughtering yourself trying to finish the next chapter (B ' V')B
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Reviewed By: animewhore666dome On: February 18, 2007 19:09 EST
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...i can feel every cell in my body die...pleeease update soon! i cant take it! i need mucho hayner/seifer SMUT!! they should get married....yeah..so they are always together...please pull out another wonderful chapter. dont worry! everything you write is novel worthy! ;)have confidence!
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