| "The Transience of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Title: Lovely, as usual.
Reviewed By: angel of mint [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh so lovely. That Axel/roxas sweetness just made my day n.n And the hayner/seifer wasn't to bad either n//n hehe~ hayner is a feisty one isn't he? "Fine by me," Axel said agreeably. "But… I don't have any money." It was difficult to remind Roxas of that. It had been hard enough to get the clothes he had. And until he got some sort of job in this place, he wouldn't be able get the things he needed. He didn't want to be a burden, and he already had to rely on the blonde's kindness for so much…. That was just so incredibly lovely! usually its the pr0n that makes me squeal, (and it did) but this was just so great! it just touched my heart *wipes away tear* it wasn't exceptionally mushy or anything, i don't even know why i like it so much. i guess the fact that Axel is so in love with roxas and doesn't want to be any burden on him is so lovely :D he's being 100% truthful to his feelings, i love that!
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Title: chya
Reviewed By: next-speilburg On: February 18, 2007 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ROck. yeah you defintely listen to your fans. I wish i got as many reviews as you. T.T
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Reviewed By: highanddown On: February 18, 2007 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww come on where's the next chapter?? i want my sxh .. But thanks for the stuff so far ;) i really enjoy this story. i think you brought the characters out very well .. and you've brought popularity to an essentially unknown coupling. good work :)
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: next-speilburg On: February 09, 2007 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more seifer/hayner mansex,please? not xemnas...mansex.. i can see why you can confuse the too. lol
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Reviewed By: AmytheYu On: February 06, 2007 03:59 CST
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Huzzah! for buttsecks! 8D Now you know what's needed next, MORE buttsecks! That was some really great buttsecks. If only every fic had awesome buttsecks like this...there'd be too much buttsecks, BUT THERE ISN'T! So I still want more buttsecks! XD (And for a comment with actually content, please see other comments that do not come from me cause my brain is enjoying it's place in the gutters.)
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Title: Awesome-ness
Reviewed By: angel of mint [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! thats awesome! great timing on hayner's part! and seifer! coming to collect his 'wayward blond' n___n Oh, who cares? Against the door is just fine. thats great! i completely loved that whole chapter! the axel/roxas was great! and hayner finding out about being drugged! lovely! hehe! Not just with Seifer… doing Seifer loved that!! hehe~ i could give quote after quote of what i loved, but, sooner or later, i would ending up quoting the whole chapter! just lovely! once more, i am so glad that i found this fic n.n
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 18:03 CST
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Ok, the smut is really hot, and I mean…really…REALLY hot…O__O. But still, I'll hold true to what I said before, about reading the fic smutless...good writing is good writing, after all. I actually had to visit this fic four times before I got to finish it because I kept getting interrupted. Stupid reality godammit! >< But reading the beginning made me so friggen nutty to finish the rest I actually started doodling a comic for it before I could finish reading it… "Dammit Axel, why do you have to be so sexy?" haha… but at its current state it wouldn't even be considered fan ART. Yeah, you know your fic is popular when people start drawing fan art for it. Anyways…*chants* Update. Update. Update…
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 05:08 CST
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Just what the doctor ordered. I got such a laugh when Hayner walked in on Roxas and Axel! Aw, both blondes are adorable. But very nice job at the end. I love how Roxas and Axel were so hot and bothered that they rushed to lock the door ^_^
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Reviewed By: KageRune On: February 04, 2007 22:08 CST
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I'm glad Hayner didn't really get raped.... Although *KOFF* the only person I'd like see doing that would be Seifer..... AND IT'D HAVE TO BE A HAPPY ENDING, HA! *ducks flamethrowers >.>;*
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Reviewed By: KageRune On: February 04, 2007 21:24 CST
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Lol, I musta missed the note then XD. Two more delicious chapters yay~. I know, no pr0n but they're cute, so that's good enough for me~. *goes back to review other chap*
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Reviewed By: Animewhore666doom On: February 04, 2007 17:39 CST
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XDDDDD JYESSSS!! SUCESS!! and not just one, but TWO new chapters!!! *ecstatic!!* hurraaaaayyy fooooorrr BUTTSHEXH!!!!:] but omg! i thought seifer was going to go kill some puppies or something when hayner handed him the ring! i was like wtf?! why are you doing that???!!! dont scare me like that...i thought there little scene in teh bathroom was especially sweet though ^_^ when will hayner confess for seifer?! dont leave poor seifer hanging! anyhoo, DONT EVER STOP WRITING!!!YOU ARE A HAYNER/SEIFER WRITING GOD!!
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Reviewed By: Loli On: February 04, 2007 10:14 CST
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I downright giggled while reading this chapter. And I never giggle. Props to you! I loved that scene when Seifer walked in on the awkwardness of the whole Hayner talking to Roxas who was introducing Axel bit. xD
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Reviewed By: Hikariryu On: February 04, 2007 03:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could sit here and repeat what I've said millions of time over, but I'm preeeeeetty sure we all know what I think of this fic, and I'll tell you that it's completely unchanged (okay, amplified) every time a new chapter comes out. You really know how to make people's days!! *slaps self* I must seem like such a creep...impeccable timing as first visitor (haha, opposite of Hay >:D) This time, I have to decide between Seifer's short appearance with a side of witty remarks and the smutty goodness as my favorite part of the chapter...then again, your writing makes it impossible to define a favorite part ^^ Please tell me this will go on and on and on!! You're just spoiling us now; I mean, not only do you present us with divine fanfiction, but a LOVELY doujin too!?!? (I'm reduced to dreaming about completing mine...looks like I'm not the only pervert on the block *nudge nudge*) Oh look, I'm blubbing again, but I'm glad that reviews like this give you inspiration rather than fear!! *prods you* HaySeif lemon next time? (YES!! I'm absolutely shameless!!!) *dumps a year's supply of cookies and treatsies on you*
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Title: Hell Yeah!
Reviewed By: Deidara xD On: February 03, 2007 09:59 CST
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Agreeing with AmytheYu; Not enough buttsecks! xD (oh, man, her comment had me laughing so hard XDD) More lemons/teaseing/groping/lovemaking in the next chapter(s) please~ Cause, y'know, you write them so damn well ^_^
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Title: ;_;
Reviewed By: Deidara xD On: February 03, 2007 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah!! You scared me there for a second, I seriously thougth Hayner was thinking about cutting his ties with Seifer TT_TT that would've been so horrible. But, like we know, even if Hayner wanted to cut ties unwillingly, Seifer wouldn't take no for an answer ;3 .. it was so surprisingly cute to hear Seifer admit that he loved Hayner, so cute!! And the AxelRoxas stuff.. sad and cute at the same time. I loved it when Axel said even if Roxas didn't remember, he would've still tried to become as close as possible to him ;_; how sad. Another awesome chapter~ Loved it!
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