| "The Transience of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: Uniasus(lazy) On: March 19, 2007 16:33 EDT
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Wonderful, wonderful story! I adored this completly and am looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: :) On: March 19, 2007 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive loved reading this. i constantly checked everyday if there was a new chapter up! & it always made my day when there was. i cant believe its finished now though :( so sad. but i hope you keep writing because your stuffs great :D yay for Haynerxseifer!! there is not enough of it in the world! so chocolate cookies for your & your amazing fic :)
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Reviewed By: JapSock On: March 18, 2007 17:24 EDT
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What!? Last chapter already!? Damn. I really liked it. It was a sweet story. Keep writing, you're good at it. ~JapSock
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Title: title
Reviewed By: next speilburg On: March 18, 2007 14:45 EDT
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some people fall in love They had too crash into it :D Brilliant.
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Title: meh again
Reviewed By: carol annerayne davis On: March 14, 2007 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i kept reading and reading andreading until i though meh poor litte head wood go KABOOM!!!!!!!!! i think it did.... hang on, lemme check *looks n mirror* ahhhh, no, but just barely.... well, g2g b4 meh mum comes home!!! rayne
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Reviewed By: animewhore666doom On: March 10, 2007 22:47 EST
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nooooo!! i dont want it to be overrrrrr!!!! DONT BE LAZY!! >:0 *gasp* ahhh! im sorry! ur not lazy! i just can NOT ponder life without this story! do you know what i do every freakin friday?...CHECK FOR UPDATES!!! and when they dont come i die inside...wah. ok i wont whine, (hate whiners) but i will throw out some suggestions, if that is ok ;) umm, im really a hopeless romantic, so in the last chapter, could you make sure that hayner tells seifer he loves him....maybe? that would be perfect...with some sloppy kisses! yes, then at least, i could die with some happiness. x___x...and uh, hmm. actually thats all i can think of, ya know besides the whole dont end the story request :\ this has been THE best fanfic i have read all year...for seriously! you are an excellent writer. and even though its gonna SUCK!.. i know the last chapter will be teh coolest ending eva!! XDDDD ok i sound like a kiss ass now...i'll stop. UNTIL NEXT TIME!! (if its worth anything at all...;) Peaceandphlover@gmail.com
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Reviewed By: Uniasus, the lazy On: March 08, 2007 18:22 EST
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I'm still here! *waves* Hmm...I was always intreged by that sea salt ice cream.
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Reviewed By: ChocoLuvER [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 02:42 EST
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wow!!! you did awsome AS USSUAL... LAST CHAPTER!!! REALLY?!?!?! ..... awww ..... im gonna cry... oh btw : do you post here instead of y-gallery now???
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Title: Seifer has a sexy tummy...
Reviewed By: firefly12 On: March 07, 2007 18:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the only Seifer/Hayner fics I've seen, which is bad 'cause I'm addicted. I love this entire fic because I love AkuRoku too. Yummy. ;)
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Reviewed By: pwd On: March 07, 2007 08:06 EST
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YAY another chapter!! thank you :) butbutbut... where's my sxh!?? D: i mean akuroku is all good, but..butbut :( haha i can wait. you've given me enough for now. thank you!
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Reviewed By: AmytheYu On: March 07, 2007 03:44 EST
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NOOOOOOO!!!!! This must not end. This must NEVER END! DX The buttsex must go on forevar! X3 I'll have nothing left to look forward to reading every week if this ends. T_T
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 22:42 EST
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Teehee, there were some things in this chapter that just made me smile like crazy. The flustered Store clerk was very reminiscent of Cat and Mouse. ^_^ Oh, and that part when Axel was remembering about Roxas's days in Org XIII just seemed really possible. Roxas comes across as a cold person/nobody sometimes. Okay, I'm almost rambling. Can't wait till the next chapter! Even if it means THE END. -__-
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Reviewed By: angel of mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 21:28 EST
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why..why will it only post part of my comment!! >:O aarrgg! *posts the rest of it on dA*
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Title: oh so lovely :3
Reviewed By: angel of mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things i liked this chapter (well...the things that are short enough to put here :D ) Axel hugged Roxas a little closer and smiled lewdly. hehe! i love that PDA n.n -something to long to post- that was so sad, that whole part about what axel felt like after roxas left T.T i was getting teary :'( Roxas sighed in defeat, and tilted a quick kiss to meet Axel's lips. "I'll live, I guess." that was so sweet :D kissing where people could see them, pure true love!
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Title: oh so lovely :3
Reviewed By: angel of mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things i liked this chapter (well...the things that are short enough to put here :D ) Axel hugged Roxas a little closer and smiled lewdly. hehe! i love that PDA n.n -something to long to post- that was so sad, that whole part about what axel felt like after roxas left T.T i was getting teary :'( Roxas sighed in defeat, and tilted a quick kiss to meet Axel's lips. "I'll live, I guess." that was so sweet :D kissing where people could see them, pure true love!
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