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| "Feudal Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: bluegurl On: December 23, 2006 08:27 EST
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I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait! I can't wait!!! But I am... and I will... :) Happy Writting!!
| Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 07:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update! I really liked the part where InuYasha says that he will protect Kagome. I can't wait until the next chapter. Thank you.
| Reviewed By: Secret35 On: December 23, 2006 03:43 EST
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YEAh you update so quickly, im so happy, i finished reading the next chapters that you updated,OMG! it's so amazing, you put this story well played out, i just love the plot, and inu said he'll protect her :) thats So CUTE! well i cant wait until the next chapter is up, talk to you soon
| Reviewed By: Cheesey345 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 22:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice... i love it. Some people go overboard with details ( I have been very guilty of this) while others make them talk so much it ruins everything. It is a very good story with a nice plot line and original story idea ( correct me if i'm wrong but i have never read a story with Kagome being a peasent.) I would love your input on what im writing. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 20:16 EST
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Wow. I must say that this is getting very intense. Beautiful writing style. You portay the characters wonderfully and set the tone of the story perfectly. However, one of my favorite parts has to be how you managed to end the chapter leaving suspence, but not enough of a cliffhanger to ruin it. So are InuYasha and Kagome going to adopt the two girls? It would make sense in a way. Still I must say this is one of the best written fanfics I have read in a long while. Squeet. Good day and 'til the next review, Shadow.
| Title: Fedual Tale
Reviewed By: trinity757575 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 15:34 EST
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Aaaahhh!!!! A cliffy! lol. I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens. I hope Kagome and Inuyasha are able to bring Ayame and her other little sister's to safety. As for Kikyo, NOT a big fan, I don't care what other people say for her, I know this isn't related to the story, but if you love someone, and I mean TRUELY love that person, you DO NOT try to change them, you love them for who they are, flaws and all, for you are not with flaws yourself. Okay I'm stepping down off my soapbox now. LOL. And I hope her mother comes out of this okay, even though I'm probably wishing on a soap bubble huh? Well I can't wait to read what happens next. This is a truely wonderfully written story!! I'm enjoy it immensly, keep up the great job! 'Til next chapter, I'll be reading y'ah, trinity
| Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 00:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say this is the most pleasant thing I have read in a while. Your writing style is laid back, almost calm, while you still move your story along in a unhurried pace. I'm not sure how you accomplished this but don't change it! I didn't feel the need to process every detail for hidden clues. (though I did try to infer some of it...) Your characters are perfect for the roles you have given them. I'm happy that you considered the other varibles in your story that would change the profiles of the character's personalities. Such as the the time period (as you pointed out earlier). And it is nice that you seemed to have learned something about that time and the inner workings of the era. Reading things that people are knowledgeable about are easier and delightful to read. You even added the bit about him having a ritual. I thought that was cute. I honestly read the part with Kagome telling off Sesshomaru with my hands over my mouth the whole time. It was like a scene from a movie. Not over the top but I promise it made me say "Oh my God" between laughs. I like the way you are slowly bringing them together. I'm not sure of what to say about Kikyo's husband yet so I will reframe for now. I really do like this story. I can't wait until the next chapter. (Sorry for and errors.)
| Title: Great Updates!
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 18:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't get the chance to update on the last chapter so I will now for both. I really liked how gentle InuYasha was with Kagome while they were making love. That was very well-written and it just felt like I was watching a movie. Your writing makes me feel like I am living in Feudal Japan! Just amazing!!! The way you describe the rituals and superstitions for the next chapter is great! I just can't get enough of your wonderful story! Thank you again and take care of you!
| Title: Fedual Tale
Reviewed By: trinity757575 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 17:46 EST
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Poor Kagome..she just wanted to see the sword. I'm just lucky I wasn't born back then, pretty sure my head would roll, got a wee bit of temper that I do, being Itilian/Irish with some sweden mixed in to help keep things confused..lol. I wonder if it will dawn on him that Kagome was giving him a taste of his own medicine or will she let it drop in face of his concern and gruff kindness? I know he said he wanted to talk to her to find out what had upset her, hopefully the spunk that thrives in Kagome will surface and tell him how he had hurt her, even though he probably didn't mean to. It was very sweet of him to finish the laundry and serve her in bed. For a man in the 1700's Fedual Japan he is almost civiorous in his concern and action towards her. Seeing how most men didn't really cared how they treated their wives or daughter's back then. I'm also curious to see if he will mention what he learned at the festival when his brother-in-law made those remarks about the govenor. And there was no mention of him saying anything to Sesshomaru of what he had heard? Maybe I will find out in the next chapter(s)? Can't wait for the next chapter, 'tel then I'll be reading y'ah, trinity
| Reviewed By: mel f On: December 20, 2006 17:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love your fic. its so nice. i want more soon please.
| Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 16:03 EST
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Wow! I really, really love your story. It is absolutely brilliant. I look forward to reading the next chapter, and I really hope you can finish by Friday! ~Sharon
| Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 13:50 EST
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It isn't silly with the rituals and all...okay, maybe a little bit ^^; when you go too far....Sometimes I'll sorta meditate before I start writing a good idea I have and the same with drawing, but tell no one of this! I'm still crazy about this tale. Do you know how long it will be? Are you going to make it like some people and have thirty chapters, or are you going to get through the plot line and have it, not so long...Either way I'm sticking with this fic. I feel fuzzy inside...squeet. I got another question for you though. I think at the beginning of this fic you said InuYasha was human, no? But then you described Sesshoumaru with silver hair and gold eyes. This kinda through me off. Is he really human? Or in disguse? *looks around* Wow. Nothing else to say, now I think it will be time for something random, no? *picks up giant rubber ball* Squeet! *throws ball* *balls hits car, causing it to crash into post office* *letters fly everywhere* Sweet...*looks around* Wasn't me!!! *runs off into the night* LoL for the randomness, ~Shadow
| Title: Fedual Tale
Reviewed By: trinity757575 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 18:02 EST
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I can't exspress in words how well I'm enjoying this story so far! It's nice to read for once the softer side Inuyasha shows for Kagome. And I loved how she stood up to Sesshomaru..hehe. I had to read all 4 chapters and I didn't want to stop there, but sadly I had caught up by then=). I definently have you on my favorite authors list, I don't have to worry about missing this amazing story. I can't wait to read the next chapter, you've got me hooked,line,and sinker for this story,so 'tel next time,I'll be reading y'ah,trintiy.
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 16:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the update! And getting alittle more into the plot of things. Keep it up and update when you can! :D
| Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 15:09 EST
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This story of yours is extremely nice, and I can really feel how Inuyasha is warming up to Kagome rather nicely. Actually, he was extremely nice from the beginning, which surprised me a bit. I always thought he was a rude, inconsiderate, jerk at the beginning, but he seems to be very nice. You've captured the essence of each of the characters extremely well, and I look forward to reading the next installment! ~Sharon
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