| "Love's Smirking Revenge" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] |
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Title: KamakuraYumi
Reviewed By: KamakuraYumi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 18:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just gets better the more of it I read. It's hot, it's sexy, it's nicely paced. Like a film noir the characters and the plotline just suck you in. More please!
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 21:34 EDT
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Glorified smuttines... I love it. And sex, sex, sex all the time isn't a BAD thing... Anywhoodle, can't wait to see what happens w/the whole mafia thing... isn't Kags' life supposed to be in danger?
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: May 11, 2007 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kinda diggin' this. Can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 19:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what else can i say...you're doing a really really great job with this story and i really enjoy reading it...ohh...i agree with almost everyone else...you definately deserve more reviews...well...can't wait for the next one!
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Title: fabulous
Reviewed By: Lady Persephone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say one of the best lemons i have ever read. Excellent description. It was so life-like. 10 out of 10 for your first lemon!! and i agree with one of the other reviewers. This story definitely deserves more reviews. It's fantastically engaging and realistic. I look forward to your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 03:17 EDT
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update soon. us fans are dying here..
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 07:29 EDT
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Hmm... what to say, what to say... very detailed, not at all awkward... it had good flow too... all in all, you write smut just fine!
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Reviewed By: HelpfulBeauty On: April 19, 2007 23:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm well and truly hooked. What happens next? Don't keep me in suspense...
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Reviewed By: AI On: April 15, 2007 22:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10's all across! all i can say is...wow. and update soon
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Reviewed By: XxRuler_of_the_DarknessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 12:50 EDT
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If you don't update I WILL find you and MAKE you UPDATE!...LoL! Please update soon^^
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Reviewed By: Pim On: April 14, 2007 00:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I need a cold shower. For your first lemon that was INCREDIBLE. I can't wait for the future lemon's to come. haha. Keep up the fantastic work. Sincerely, A.J.
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good story and i like the idea for it...its different ya know! haha...anyways...keep up the great work and i look forward to reading whats gonna happen next
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Title: trini
Reviewed By: trini-trickster [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 14:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice so far keep up the good work. I like Kagome's personality and wit, it's interesting to see her with a potty mouth.
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 12:42 EST
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Ah... damn you.... Well, for your first lemon, you're doing well! Even the part where Inu's too stubborn to ask where her bedroom is... haha... definitely in character. Can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: future author On: February 28, 2007 16:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this chapter. i'm glad that he could trust her with his secret and that she took it so well. i can't wait to see the next chapter and all the ones after. Update soon and keep up the excellent writing.
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