| "Love's Smirking Revenge" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] |
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Reviewed By: MAYRA On: November 24, 2008 01:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! ALL IVE GOT TO SAY IS WOW...........AT FIRST I THOUGHT THAT MAYBE SHE HAD BEEN WITH THE BROTHER TO GET REVENGE FOR WHAT HAD BEEN INFLICTED ON HER BUT THIS CHAPTER BLEW IT ALL AWAY!!!!!!!!!!! I ACTUALLY FELT THE HANDS AROUND MY OWN NECK.... AND TO REALIZE SO QUICKLY AFTER THAT SHE DIDNT REGRET IT...WOW!! IM NOT SAYING THAT SHE A BAD PERSON BUT IT GOES TO SHOW JUST HOW SHE HAD CHANGED BECAUSE OF WJAT SHE HAD BEEN THROUGH......I HOPE INUYASHA DOESNT PULL AWAY FROM KAGOME BECAUSE OF THE WHOLE KIKYOU THING.....CANT WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 07:20 EST
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As if that would make Yash hate her. Naraku doesn't know just how much Yash hates abusive trash. Woot woot! Finally got the skeleton out of the closet! Can't wait to see how it plays out!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 11:13 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20Sept08 / ~ Inuyashloverr & KnittingKnots Owners of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 23:51 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 20:27 EDT
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Excellent. Can't wait to see how Yash will get out of this one. And what was that connection between Fluffy and Rin? Guess I'll just have to wait and see, eh?
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 13:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. I must say your story is different. I've really enjoyed it, truly I have. Your story is dark, twisted and yet there is still hope in your story. I loved reading the beginning of InuYasha and Kagome and there relationship. And the twists in your story are really good. I find myself worried for Kagome and her safety and InuYasha will he find her?! Your story is very well written which I love, because there are so many really good plot stories but its not very well written. Keep up the AMAZING work.. your doing a fantastic job and your story truly is really good kept me clicking for the next chapter:D Looking forward to reading the chapter.
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Reviewed By: tangolover On: September 11, 2008 14:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh things are getting interesting!!!!!!!!! i hope you can update very soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 10:20 EDT
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I am so glad he has found her at last. But now you have me wondering what the next chapter is going to hold. I got so excited when I saw that you posted- This has to be my top AU fic of all time. Please don't keep us in so much of a wait like you did befor. Such great work should be shared not withheld. Lol. Love every part and you left me sitting on the edge. Can't wait until your next update. Hopefully soon then the last:)
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Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 04:05 EDT
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I was scanning through fics to read, and I happened to come across this one - just what I needed! I'm not usually a fan of AU and am pretty picky about my fics but yours just sucked me right in! I'm lovin' the way you're going with this and can't wait for an update! From what I've seen every day is worth the wait for a chapter =) Keep up the awesome work and can't wait to see more!!
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Reviewed By: dreamy7_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 23:20 EDT
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This is an amazing story. It's drawn me into it so much I find myself re-reading it all the time. waiting and wishing for more updates faster. I love all the twists and turns you but into this and I know ill probably end up reading it another time before you update! so please don't keep us all waiting too long. I am in constant wondering as to what will happen next. Love to story! so keep the updates coming!
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Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 18:53 EDT
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Wonderful chapter, and overall, a beautiful, beautiful story. I love it, it's sultry, saucy, stunning, eerie, dark, and captivating. I like your style of writing. You have good descriptive capabilities, but it doesn't interfere with you going quickly and efficiently into the thick of the story. I enjoyed this fic and I hope that you will update really soon. Pursue your dreams and continue to refine your amazing writing skills.
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 12:52 EDT
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woo hoo for speedy updates! and awww... a deedication! I don't think it was too dark, and I love the twist. Ithink we all get into the mindset that Onigumo and Naraku are one and the same, but instead of having them be different sides of the same coin, I like the separate characters. Don't often see that. Kags killed him? That is a twist I didn't expect! I hope you go into a little more detail on that next chapter. And then maybe Yash comes to save the day? (I hear the mighty mouse theme song in my head when I think about it) If not, I'm intrigued by this new Onigumo/Naraku development, and wouldn't mind if you stretched it out another chapter or so.
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Reviewed By: Kags- -dogboylover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amaaaaazing chapter, really great!!! and thanks for updating so soon ^^ but now you left us hanging in a cliff and that can only be solved with a quick update *ducks form a flying shoe* lol just kidding ;D
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Title: chapter 19
Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What a great twist. Well if she was getting beaten, yeah, I would have killed him too. However, you made it sound like this guy knew her, remembered the way she feared him. I loved it! Look forward to the next chapter. Chanda
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashaluvskagome909 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!! THIS IS GETTING REALLY REALLY GOOD. IT SUCKS THAT KAGOME HAD TO GO THROUGH THAT..... BUT THE REALLY SAD THING IS THAT IT HAPPENS OFTEN IN REAL LIFE........ WHY CANT LIFE JUST BE HAPPY?? BUT THAT WOULDNT WORK EITHER....OH WELL... BUT PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!!!!! OHHH AND I HAVE A QUESTION... DID ONIGUMO EVER love KAGOME OR WAS IT JUST INFATUATION/POSSESIVNESS??
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