| "Love's Smirking Revenge" Reviews/Comments [ 148 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyashaluvskagome909 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! I AM REALLY LOVING THIS STORY. I LOVED THE PROMETHEUS AND PANDORA CONNECTIONS........NOT REALLY SURE AS TO WHAT IT MEANS BUT I REALLY LOVED IT......AND THE STUPID DOCTOR........GEEZ... SAYING ALL OF THOSE THINGS RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM AND HE DOESNT EVEN DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT..HMMM.... AND WHAT REALLY HAS ME PONDERING IS WHAT HAPPENED TO KAGOME BECAUSE OBVIOUSLY SOMETHING HAPPENED IF SHE WAS SCARED OF him........... WHO IS him AND WHAT HAPPENED TO HER? WOW SO MANY QUESTIONS AND NO ANSWERES IN SIGHT............ OHHH I ALSO WANTED TO KICK INUYASHA!!!!!!!!!! IT TOOK HIM LONG ENOUGH TO GET HIS ACT TOGETHER TO FIND KAGOME.... GEEZEZ..................... HOPE YOU UPDATE VERY VERY SOON WITH A VERY VERY LONG CHAPTER K!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 13:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off congradulations! I truly enjoied this chapter. Great job capturing true dective behavior. I love that Inuyasha slammed the other reporter up against the wall and basically showed him a blank set of papers. That was too funny. Well they have a clue, and I do hope they find Kagome soon. Chanda
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 10:45 EDT
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Yay update! And Yash is getting, er, closer, I guess. Well, progress is progress, right? Next chapter, back to Kags? Can't wait for the big action chapter! Always a good time! Hope school isn't kicking your ass too hard, but keep telling yourself the semester's almost over!
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 08:27 EST
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Definitely Naraku, no doubt about it. It was the "who are you today?" question that sealed it for me. But the Greek mythology connection, let's see. Prometheus, god of fire, gave fire to humans. Pandora carried her box from Zeus? containing the evils of the world. But someone else opened it, not Pandora... dammit, too long since high school english. Still trying to figure out what Kags knows or has that she's unaware she knows or has that would be able to wreak such havoc on Naraku's world. Next chappie we catch up with our favorite canine crew? Can't wait to see if Yash can pick up the trail.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729@aol.com On: February 18, 2008 21:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Poor 'Gome though.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 15:13 EST
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oh jeez that bad guy is a whack job and i do kind of like that kesuke guy i just like kagome a lot more and want her to live lol. i love your writing style. it's detailed without being wordy. thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 03:43 EST
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wow. cant believe it took them hecka days to try to save kag. anyways...omg! whats gonna happen next?? please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inukagssss On: January 24, 2008 11:29 EST
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This story is amazing. One of the Best that i've read in a while. I cant wait for another update!
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 10:13 EST
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Speedy, speedy. Guess you really were struggling with the end to Sword, eh? Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter as well as the last. Can't wait for Inu to sniff Kags out. I just hope he doesn't kill her reluctant guard. Now is the "Boss" from the beginning of the chapter the same guy as the end? They have two completely different airs about them. At the beginning it's cool, confident, disconnected and intimidating. At the end you show more uncertainty in himself, more distraction, but he's obviously cruel and twisted. The "Boss" came across more as Sesshy, but the guy at the end made me think Naraku. So I guess time will tell, eh?
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 01:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm absolutly clueless... although, I do love a good mystery, and you're doing so well at that. Thank you, for the quick update. Until next time, Chanda
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Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 21:11 EST
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OMG! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 17:47 EST
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okay so you hooked me. excuse me i need to go add this to my favorites...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 16:49 EST
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wow first attempt at a lemon? lol i don't believe you! that was incredible! and i really like what i've read so far! (i'm not quite done yet) great job!
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 01:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well let me just start by saying: This was well worth the wait. As far as your new character, I hope that he comes around and helps Kagome escape. I can also relate with school.... It must be psychosomatic because, I'd rather write than do homework...lol. Well I wish you luck with your muse and look forward till your next chapter. Chanda
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Reviewed By: lovelyflip08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 03:10 EST
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omg!! whats gonna happen next??!! are they gonna save her?? please please please update soon!
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