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Reviewed By: Cathappy;) On: June 10, 2007 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dam Dam Dam this is so good I love chapter 9. Thank you for the chapter. I do love it I am just not sure if I like all of the talk in between one part to the sex and the next. Like when they where going to fuck and inuyasha was talking to him self then sesshomaru was doing something to him and he continued to think. I think a little less thinking and a little more action would help keep your audence fixed on the story and not wander off. But it was still very good and I laght through most of it and whem I wasn't laphing I was transfixed by the story. Thanks so much. Keep going cant wate.
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Purinsu Arashi On: June 06, 2007 00:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I love your story, freaken awesome! My compliments to you beta as well! Is your beta the same as before? I love this chapter perfection in every way. I hope Every thing is going well for you. Im sorry it took so long for me to read/review... Lots of work lately, im getting sick of 10hour days =P Please take care! and as always your in my prayer/best-wishes! ^_^! =#=Storm=#=
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: HPTR Fangirl On: June 01, 2007 16:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely hot lemon scene between the brothers. Are there going to be more of it in the future. More importantly, would Sesshoumaru be uke in it, because there are hardly any stories I find with Sess as uke in InuSess stories. Your stories actually made me fanatic for uke Sess stories, especially in InuSess category. It even inspired me to write InuSess stories of my own. Comedy thrroughout the lemon also made laugh with glee. Can't wait to see how others are going to react to this, espcially, Kagome. Write more, I will be waiting for it. Got a serious question though (as an authoress to authoress) How come you can come brilliant story titles and chapter titles. I have hard time naming them. Please tell me Bye.
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Title: All plus Chapt. 9
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol...The whole story is just great! I love the humor. At last Sess gets a chance to spout his stuff in Chapt. 9! Loved the sex scene. He was so sneaky; he's had years of practice and now he's got Inuyasha hooked. Will both of them wind up pregnant? That would be a hoot, espeacialy since Inu was chanting 'no puppies'..lol I bet the Fates are laughing their collective asses off at the both of them. And yeah, Inuyasha can do a whole lot better than Kagome; will he realize that pretty soon? Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Merely Truth On: May 28, 2007 17:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor and nevertheless happy Inuyasha ! You fabulously described THE action and the two are doing captivating things !!! To my great pleasure ! Thank You ! I wait to see what Kagome will say at the end... Bonjour de la France ! Your french reader, Merely Truth
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 08:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read this and thought i already reviewed it, but i couldnt find my review. anyhow. so sess got what he wanted after all, to be seme... i can fully understand his gleefulness - imagine, defeating the fates. thus, it can be done! but i think you might make him forget as punishment. *grins* but one has to adore fluffy. fluffy says what sess denies. and you made inu so adorably funny... and sweeet. but inu is always sweet anyway!
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 21:04 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man NOW THAT IS WHAT I CALL A LEMON!!! I love it when Seshhy is on top X3!! That was so good and the ending was just so sweet and adorable. I'm glad Inu is now excepting things even more, it shows his maturity and ableness to adjust to new situations, that or how submissive and easily influenced he is LoL. Anyway the story is just so intriguing and interesting it's WONDERFUL!!! Oh boy I can't wait until the next chapter is up this story just makes me BEG for more, it's like a fix haha. Aagin GREAT chpater and I can't wait for the next one XD!! Luvinz, SSONQ
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 13:21 EDT
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Heyo, me again. Just wanted to tell you that my friend has very little time to read, but I was readin your fic on my laptop the other day, and I laughed, and when she asked why i just read (cuase i was readin past chapters again ^_^) the bits with Sess and his bone XD She was busy but so interested that I READ it all to her ^_^ She LOVED it and wants ya to write more *huggle* ^_^ be readin ya! -- Shigure-san x chuu x
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Reviewed By: Trigger Happy Bitch On: May 27, 2007 02:43 EDT
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OMG! I love ur story! It's sooooo great and funny! Hope u update asap.
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 14:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your new chapter ROCKED i mean it was YAY sess got laid and he got to be on top...and your right the bit wasn't what i thought it would be at all...it was way better...i can't wait to read what'll happen next..PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 04:18 EDT
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Phew! Geez that was hot! I personally prefer Inuyasha being the taken rather than the 'Taker', but I dnt mind it the other way round either ^_^ Neways, Cant wait to see what happens next, I'll be waitin' XD -- Shigure-san x chuu x
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Reviewed By: Vague86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 22:43 EDT
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Reviewed By: Vague86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah you little!!! you lied to me!! i could kill you but luckily for you, Sesshoumaru having his way with inuyasha was pretty hot granted not as hot as Inu yasha with sesshy but still fricking hot. Ive grown to slowly love the prescence of fluffy. He's so bad. but it makes you wonder. how the heck has sesshoumaru been able to go around looking all cold with such a pervert for a conscience Fluffy!! We love you!! Can i have him? pretty please?
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Title: Cute
Reviewed By: lost_sasuke_loves_itachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 15:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are keeping up the work to a nice standard. So long as you continue to atleast keep up with those chapter lengths and I can read and understand what your saying I'm pretty much pleased. Very rarely do I commend those that have either tramendously short chapters and take forever to update or thheir grammer is so bad I have troubles reading it. So far you've steered from either one of those areas and the fact that your plot seems to be unfolding very well. I like how you've potray Sesshy(I know the Lord will kill me for such informalities but he'll get over it. Its that or Sesshyomaru, which by the way is how much 5 year old gay nephew spells Sesshomaru's name). I mean who can keep his cold demenor and still have him rock Inu's world? I will continue to read so long as you continue to update. You have my support and the hottest, most optimistic, outgoing gay guy you just might ever meet (In my school which is an all guys prep school my support is about the equivalent to having a respectable president on your side).
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Title: Well hells
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 12:10 EDT
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You have once again out-perved yourself! ;) Poor poor Inu, it's all fun and games till the salve wears off, no? Heh, your haiku's were much better than mine! Perhaps you hadn't finished off 3/4 of a bottle of wine before hand. I'll have to remember not to write up reviews if I can't think properly. Another wonderful job! And thanks again to Hellfyre and yourself for this newest chapter! Cheers! :D
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