| "Centennial Hunger" Reviews/Comments [ 192 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 10:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now you really have to update soon i mean your throwing kagome in there i want to see her reaction to losing inu-chan to sess that no matter what is going to be amazingly funny to me so now i really can't wait to see it......and i think it's kool how you didn't use the usual bit mark to become mates the gift thing is really kool..........PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Izzanami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 08:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, that chapter was so sweet. I was so, so happy when I saw that you updated this. I loved how you changed the mating from the typical bite. Now bitch Kagome's coming I can't wait to see what she says when she finds out InuYasha is no longer hers.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 08:14 EDT
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thank you for the update, i really love this story. what's going to happen now that kagome and the others have arrived?
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Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 07:20 EDT
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Oh end it that way will you? Cliffy me!? I'll get you for that!! *Fistshake* I enjoyed this chapter, though an idea I had has appeared, which means I'll probably have to think of something new. Curses. Glad to see no perverted Naraku, I didnt much enjoy that, mostly because I loath him as a character. Ahhh...time to see what the group thinks....and I can soooo see Kagome going off...and then Sesshomaru going off, but you know what I think is worse for Kagome then an angry Sesshomaru? An angry Fluffy.
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Reviewed By: Lunarfang On: June 13, 2008 10:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, me again. Just wanted to let you know that you're grammar has gotten WAY better. I didn't see a thing wrong with the new chapter. GO YOU! However, while it's good to know what Naraku is doing, or who he wishes he was doing :), but I think you could have put a bit more information into this chappie. He could have looked into his mirror and figured out what's going on with Kagome and them of something. I know it isn't my place to try and make you write your own fanfic (cause you are awesome at it) but you could totally take this thing places. Anywho, I was thinking even though you said that this fic wasn't going anywhere you could make a chapter where everyone else finds out or something. I know you may have already come up with that and thought it a bad idea but hey there's never any harm in trying something right? Thumbs up!!
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Reviewed By: harderfasterplease [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 11:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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*blush* But anyway. . . I really enjoy this story so far. It has a lot to it. But kind of drags out, no? And the title says it all. XD. Very good, keep on writing!
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Title: Baahahahaha!!
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 10:53 EDT
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So, Naraku's a perv with the best of Sengoku-tech, for his peeping/home-theater needs? Brilliant! You make this so much fun! Hehehe giggles insanely and wanders off
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 08:44 EDT
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damn! are you good, or what? this has to be the most incredibly funny chapter of any stoy i have ever read. you have just the right mix of sarcasm and egotistical indulgence. i never would have thought of naraku as a high tech geek, before you put that picture in my mind! this chapter did have a different feel than any of the others. the pace was much faster. i don't remember ever laughing so much, in my life. thank you for such a wonderful posting, and i think we should all bow down to your great talent!
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 06:20 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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very creative use of sensoround (did i spell that right?).... and remote locations.... been watching tech shows lately? but there must be something else naraku is up to ... and i dont know what i felt something like an instant replay of chapter 11, from another perspective... *grins*
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 23:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah! A little smut goes a looooonnnnnnnggggg way! ^__~ Thank you! Love the chapter- B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Trigger Happy Bitch On: May 30, 2008 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who ever thought Naraku was f*cked up before...wait until they read this chapter. Naraku needs serious mental help. But...LMFAO he is duch a freaking perv. Now Sessh and Inu will never be able to have alone time any more. Haha. This chappie had me rolling like normal. Can't wait 'til the next update.
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Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 22:59 EDT
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Why the hell wasn't I told when this updated? Stupid ass MM.... Annyway. Wow...that was hot, I enjoyed that very much. There is just something about an Uke Sesshomaru that feels so....right. Makes me wonder more and more just what will happen when all of this is over. What Inuyasha's group will think/do and all that. Nice to see Sesshomaru giving in to what he really wants, but I wonder when he will admit out loud what he really wants. Also makes me wonder what Inuyasha really wants, is he thinking for life? Or just a nice weekend? Great chapter all around, Can't wait until the next part.
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Reviewed By: shelimar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its about time sesshomaru gave in. that was hot.
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Title: .........
Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: May 01, 2008 23:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you have any idea of how long i have waited for this moment?! weekly checks, woman, weekly! and it was simply amazing! *nearly died of bloodloss* well worth the wait and then some. awesome work! my god, that was definitely one of my fic highlights for the year. do you ever plan on bringing it back to AFF? i noticed that you've begun reposting some of your older fics but this one isn't there. not that it matters, i'll follow this fic wherever it goes cause this is definitely one of my top 5 inuxsess stories. i'm looking foward to your next update whenever that may be. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Azalea J. On: April 27, 2008 13:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SO sorry for not reviewing this sooner- but life happens. So anyway- *NOSEBLEED* That was too hot for words! These chapters just keep getting better and better, the wait for this one was worth it and then some! I love how you have Sesshoumaru's personality remaining unchanged, and yet changing subtly whenever he's with InuYasha. I love his multiple personalities. I just can't get enough of this fic, you so totally make my world go round!!!
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