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Reviewed By: laWaya_aDisi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2011 18:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I remember when you first started this fic. It was so interesting that I just flipped when I found out you had added to it.Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 05:58 EST
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i love this story since it's been 3 months since you updated does that mean the next update will be twice as long as the last chapter?
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 19:19 EST
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Based on the fan art and the fact that this is a IY/YYH crossover I was totally expecting to hate this story. 99% of the IY/YYH stuff in the last year has been lame Kagome-Sue crawls in bed with whichever of the YYH guys the author has a thang for, which is a shame since the two worlds mesh together really well and crossovers have a lot of potential. This story realizes that potential though. The plot is believable and interesting with great twists. I really feel that Kurama is more his post human incarnation self than his past ruthless thief self but other than that the characterization is dead on and the later version of Kurama is a more interesting character and works much better in this AU than the alternative would have. I commend you on keeping this story going despite everything you've gone through since you began it and doing a really excellent job.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 18:24 EST
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Congratulations Sardave!-your story The Intertwined has been nominated for Best Action/Adventure at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! ThisIsMeSmiling
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2008 00:07 EST
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It was so wonderful to see a new chapter for this story. ^_^ I know how difficult it can be to write when so much is going on in your life. I am amazed you were able to keep up with this and bring us a new offering. I really enjoyed the talk between Sesshoumaru and Youko. It was nice to get a glimpse of the way they relate to each other. Sesshoumaru came off very wise, and I loved the mention that it was a bit galling to him to realize that his half-brother had learned his father's lesson quicker than he had. I also particularly loved the comment about humility not being a good color for him. LOL! AND, I also liked the way Inuyasha and Miroku were hanging in there with the girls. At the beginning of the story, I was really not liking Inuyasha's attitude and felt he didn't deserve a wonderful woman like Kagome--his indecisiveness about his feelings for her and Sango just struck a nerve. But he is definitely showing his preference for Kagome now, along with a nice maturity. So, now, I would feel a bit sorry for him and Miroku if they were to lose the women they have traveled with for so long to the smooth silver ones. LOL! I am still on the edge of my seat to see what you have in mind for them all. Don't feel pressured to crank out another chapter, but rest assured we'll still be here when you do. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 20:40 EST
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Thanks for the update! It was worth waiting for. Sorry to hear about everything going on in your life... that's the way it goes sometimes. :( Take your time with the updates, though. The group of us still clamoring over IY/YYH xovers will be waiting patiently in the meantime. :)
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Reviewed By: Resilience(not logined in tho) On: November 13, 2008 22:26 EST
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Well, i must say i would have liked a little bit more, but still it is great to receive an email saying a chapter was added!! And im sincerely sorry to hear about your situation. Maybe this could be a way to escape from what you have goin on! lol just kidding. once again, great to see your writing. keep them flowing!
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: November 13, 2008 21:20 EST
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I have to say, despite the long wait , this chapter has satisfied me for now xD Though maybe another chapter would suffice? (Haha, just kidding!)
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 09:29 EST
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Love the story but I'm a little confused,is sess and sango gonna pair and Kags and yoko,or are they gonna share like sess,kags,yoko and sango gonna all pair and share..Like that one better but I was just wondering....It was a thought because were yoko holds kags sometimes and then sango and then sess does the same thing..
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 01:14 EDT
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Love the story,I know its been awhile It was very good reading.I enjoyed it very much I hope to see more soon..
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 22:49 EDT
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this is a great story, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 05:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An absolutely amazing fiction. Within the first chapter you had me entranced in the story (perhaps the same way you had Youko entranced with the group). Extremely original and I respect you highly for that. The interaction between the characters is some of the best I've read and I've read a hell of alot. Very entertaining fic (considering I stayed up till 5am to see what happened) and I admit I hope to see an update in the near future. Keep writing- you've got serious talent. -Dusken
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 02:50 EST
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first of all your cliffies are sooo unfair. Love the story it's really well written and highly enjoyable great suspense trying to figure out what's going to happen next. I'll be watching for the next update
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Reviewed By: kye On: January 09, 2008 15:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really good please up date soon
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Title: Ch. 1-13
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 01:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, i'm in luv with this story, its so kick ass! its original, awesome, and totally in its own category of "The-Shit-ness!" i hope 2 read more soon! *dances in anticipation*
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