| "The Intertwined" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 05:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I can wait please update
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 23:03 EDT
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I just read you are only going to update in aff. dont do that. Update in media miner. PLEASE,
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 22:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really great. I'm enjoying this a lot. I don't have a problem with things taking some time to get going. . . to "get to the action or good stuff" it is more believable that way. Youko's theft / inducement to get Shippo's candy was greedy, but it was very generous of Shippo to trade his relatively precious and somewhat irreplaceable pocky for fire wood. I do wonder who the 6th will be. It seems you are setting it up for either Jinenji or Sessoumaru. Sessoumaru seems the obvious choice. It will be very interesting when Kagome disappears down the well to get more pocky and supplies.
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 22:04 EDT
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-cocks head to side- Stone you? I wouldn't throw stones at you. I might scratch you until you scar but that's only if I were friends with you. Do continue this fic. I like it and have reviewed it since I first came across it. I just want to know when the more... citrusy things happen. If they happen at all.
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 11:52 EDT
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Your updating floods my inbox, you know. Every little change you make sends me an email, I have to delete 'em three times a day. Lol. Anyway you did a good job with this chapter, but nothing has really HAPPENED per-say. Something should HAPPEN sometime soon, I should think.
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 02:42 EDT
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I absolutly love it. thogh it seems a bit dragged out, its not really all rhat...dragged out.
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Reviewed By: Honebar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 00:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would say this was not forced at all. hmm I wonder what book he wound up reading was. I'm hoping for a group thing myself. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 18:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally I don't think your writing sounds forced at all, and in my opinion is quite original. ^.^ love the fic, please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Lillian9 On: March 16, 2007 03:14 EDT
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Please update soon! I like your story. Hopefully InuYasha chooses Sango, then Youko will have to take Kagome ;-) I think the InuYasha/Kagome pairing is boring. Maybe because it´s canon...
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did very well, I do like this story though you make it a bit... Unbelievable, I didn't realize it was a crossover for a minute, silly me I guess I should look more carefully. Anyway, you did do well, and I commend you. Continue please.
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Reviewed By: Lil Rin On: March 15, 2007 00:10 EDT
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It's too early for me to say anything of the story except that the beginning is intriguing. Continue writing.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: March 14, 2007 23:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an intresting story I like it and am curious as to where your goin with it. Are you going to let all of them get together though? That would be hot! update soon.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 22:26 EDT
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This is getting off to a very interesting and creative start. I like the pocky bit; very generous of Shippo to offer his pocky to Youko. I wonder why Kirara isn't outing him. The team needs some meat, and not just ramen. I was under the impression they are walking parallel to his territory and aren't in it specifically. Couldnt they hunt on the other side?
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Reviewed By: Jadedragon24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start to a good story. To me, the writing didn't seemed forced; the chapter had a good flow to it. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: moonsharmony(toolazytosignin) On: March 13, 2007 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story so far. And I'm interested to see where you plan on going with this new bond between Kagome and Sango. And as to what exactly it is and what caused it.
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