| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yomiruki On: December 02, 2009 00:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
58 chapters later, and it feels like nothing. I loved your story so much, I cried so many times! Nothing was cheesy or fluffy! I loved the part when Inuyasha talked about condoms, ugh that was so wonderful! I am so excited to see where you story will go, because i feel like the fun stuff is just about to begin!
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Reviewed By: Kouchu On: December 01, 2009 18:07 PST
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Can I tell you how much I love this! I started reading it this morning, and I finished it tonight, I think I need to read this again, lol!
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Reviewed By: Deeply On: December 01, 2009 11:39 PST
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Update soon please
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Reviewed By: Erin_kori On: November 30, 2009 15:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update soon because your story is addicting. And I am on the edge of my seat! Please end my agony!
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Reviewed By: Kutikuti On: November 30, 2009 13:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved your story. At first I was very skeptical to start it. It sounded like the same old story with a lot of fluff and badly written. Until I started reading it. I was quite hesitant with the first few chapters but as you progressed I loved it more and more. How instead of falling so compeletely head over heels, and chasing each other, their relationship starts out different. I am a sucker for friendship turned relationship thing. And I usually hate the mate thing. I was never even aware of the thing in the anime or manga, and it usually made me mad about all the stupid rituals like biting and other bullshit. If there are mates involved I usually will close the fiction right there and then because they never turn out well, it's more like your write about animals than concious beings. But your thing works soooooo well! I was so surprised, and in this story it doesn't only work, it's magnificient and very well intertwined with the story! I was so elated when Inuyasha claimed Kagome as his mate. It was obvious from the begining in a very subtle way, which just reassured you. And I love how your characters are so real, they are not one dimensional where they are always so happy and lovey dovey, and the way you treat sex I love it! That is so true everything that you were talking about. I love how this story is going, it's dark and sad but not a cliche, the same story over and over again. Poor Kagome now she will have soon three people after her Kouga, Ayame and Kikyo. I wonder how all of those will tie in. I expect something horrible to happen soon, which weakens Kagome for her confrontation with Kikyo. But great character development, and I love how you don't compare Kagome and Kikyo together, rather you always contrast them! I am so excited to read more of your works, and I am hopeful you will update this as soon as you are able too!
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Title: WoW
Reviewed By: Hoshikouchu On: November 29, 2009 15:59 PST
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UPDATE SOON! CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kenjikan On: November 29, 2009 15:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I can't believe what's happeneing! The suspense is killing me! Update ASAP!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Junpei On: November 29, 2009 10:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love, Love, Love your story! Update soon!
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Title: Amazing Story
Reviewed By: Orinawa On: November 29, 2009 09:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cried so much during this story, it is so good. I laughed and I got angry. But I loved it very much. The suspense is killing me! And so Ayame is not Kouga's mate? What will Kouga do when he realizes that Kagome is InuYasha's mate? Aaaggg I am so excited for the next chapter, and for the rest of the story! I hope you update as soon as possibl!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Horinatu On: November 28, 2009 10:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading your fan fictions for quite a while, and this is just so suspensful, and very very interesting. I love your story so much! Better than the original, soooo much better. Take Care and Update Soon!
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Title: Amazing story
Reviewed By: Torentail On: November 27, 2009 21:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I have to say this is killing me! A great story! Cannot wait for more, hopefully you will update soon!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Reting2323 On: November 27, 2009 12:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! This is quite amazing! I hope you are going to be updating soon! I hope you have a great day! And please update! Your story is soooo amazing
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Reting2323 On: November 27, 2009 12:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! This is quite amazing! I hope you are going to be updating soon! I hope you have a great day! And please update! Your story is soooo amazing
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Title: Completely Captivating
Reviewed By: Sound of silence On: November 26, 2009 22:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do not know where to start. Simply this has to be one of the best things I have ever read! I am sooooo in love with it! I cannot stop reading, I read it over and over again! I cannot wait till you write more! Love
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Title: I Had forgotten
Reviewed By: Fallen6906 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2009 21:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had forgotten why i read this and why it is saved in my favs and then i decided to check it out again!!!! and i remembered thinking its awesome. please contine to update.... i miss it
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