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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 05:57 PDT
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The chapter was PERFECT!!!! I experienced all the different emotions it was so wonderful. I think it is sweet how insecure he is about Kagome's feelings. My glasses steamed up quite a few times ... but damn it was good. I so feel like rolling over and cuddling up .... but sadly I don't have InuYasha to snuggle with. I am extremely curious as to how she is going to find out about them being really mated. I think I remember a few chapters back when he talked about the condom thing... I wonder if it will just dawn on her that they did not use one at some point or if someone will bring it up to her... like she will run in to Kouga and he will get all mad when he smells it. Can females smell the difference or just male demons? Does this also mean that the other demons use condoms? or that they have better control of it? My skin is still tingling from reading this chapter... it was so amazing.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 22:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is simply incredible, passion, drama, it's all here. I can not wait for the next chapter. I know you have great in store for us. Please don't stop writing!
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Title: HOLY MOMMA!!!
Reviewed By: MadMistress65 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 04:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I was beginning to think that because I've been reading so much lately, I've become desensitized to the smut. It hasn't been doing its "job" lately. Well, for a while actually. But then I read your update. HOLY SHIT Girl! That was fuckin SCHMOKIN!!! (Excuse my French ... heh) Nearly 20 printed pages worth of hot smexy goodness, with a nice spattering of fluff and a touch of angst there at the end. I whooped for joy when they finally confessed their feelings for one another, and applauded Inu for getting his head out of his ass and figuring out that Kagome's the "one." Finally!! Bravo on the spinx (did I spell that right?) idea. I have NEVER come across anything like that before in any fan fiction that I have personally read. Unique! Waiting on bated breath for the next update. :D Now if you'll excuse me, I have a husband to attack. *wink*
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Reviewed By: PatriciaLoras On: July 13, 2009 21:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BTW, I need a COLD SHOWER!
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: PatriciaLoras On: July 13, 2009 21:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have nothing more to say than, EXCELLENT, SPEECHLESS, and WORDLESSLY. Please don't make Inuyasha suffer too much, she loves him, we love him, and he deserves to know that!!!!!! Pleeeeaaseee update as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: July 13, 2009 20:05 PDT
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Final-fucking-ly!!!! Lol I was begining to think that they would never become mates. This does help to solve the whole Kikyo coming back thing tho. ^.^ which is awesome cuz that bitch sucks!!!! Unfortunately though I think this will make Kouga even more pissed off. Anyway this chapter was awesome!!! Update soon ok.
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Reviewed By: EliFanel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 09:36 PDT
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Yay!... new update thx lot, really I wasn´t expecting inuyasha and his family were arriving in Kyoto o_o but great chap and hope your vacations were as well great.
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: July 13, 2009 09:00 PDT
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Holy Crap!!! Yea you should totally have this as a warning. WARNING: CHAPTER IS EXTREMELY HOT!!!IF YOU ARE READING THIS CHAPTER BE PREPARED TO NEED A COLD SHOWER AFTER OR PERHAPS A ROUND OF SEX!!! I loved it!!! SOoooooo goooood!! Thank you *bows on her knees*
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 08:50 PDT
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Sweet bleeding vaginas thank goodness that wasn't Kouga!! 8D so we all know that Nola is going to point out that Kagome is mated eh? 8D
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 01:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what... i was panicking that it was Koga... would of been a bad! lol but *squeals* love it ^____^ i burst into laughter with Souta XD i tried so hard, but i ended up laughing out loud and people at home gave me weird looks lol but i was squealing throughout this chapter! YAY! Inuyasha finally gotten over his stupid little voice inside XD listen to the demon!! and either way, your fogiven ^_________^
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 00:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed a few typos, but I don't care! You get all perfect 10's anyway! I am soooo glad you said there was more fluff to come, because I would hate for the next chapter to be angsty after all that, like Kagome having no clue how significant everything really was. But I don't think that'll be the case. I remember that first bit when she asked him not to use a condom and his little "Open mouth, insert foot" moment, so it's already been established that Kagome knows damn well that youkai (and hanyou) have to wear condoms. Even if it did slip her mind in the heat of the moment, she'll realize what it all means in the morning. I love your little explanation, though, that reveals how the girl doesn't really notice the difference except for a more intense orgasm. So she might not realize that he did bond with her, but only that what they did was supposed to be saved for the bonding. Still, I'm not worried. He thinks he mated her without her permission, but it seems to me that she was fully aware of what she was doing, with that whole "Do you love me?" bit. First, she saw the look in his eyes when he asked her that, and then the way she asked it back for good measure... Yeah, Kagome knew... I'll reiterate my subject bar: Yay!
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Reviewed By: Animegirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaaaaaagh!!!!!!!!!!!! that was soooo amazing it was a long wait and i hated it but it was soooooo worth it! caint wait til the next (please read the end)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!thnx
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Reviewed By: wthlovex [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 20:36 PDT
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Yay! It was who we wanted it to be! I was going crazy without the update lol! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: goldenxtuna On: July 12, 2009 20:07 PDT
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awesome chapter!!! whooo, i feel very safe now about the entrace for kikyo or kouga ...they cant break inukag noww!!!!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, after that chapter, i've gotta say that's some nice heaven inuyasha got for himself. now, let's see how he deals with self-loathe. ouch. and thanks so much for the update! you are a genius in disguise, i know it! thanks to you i had the greatest surge of encouragement and what not to publish my own story called hello daddy! you are definitely a hero in my life!
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