| "Naruto vs. Sasuke The Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Title: great
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 14:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT. MORE
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Title: Yeah I work fast now.
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 04:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for replying and thanks for this great chapter. I can relate because I'm kind of in a moment of shitastic days myself. Man, I wish that I had a friend like Naruto. It seems that I'm the Naruto to most of my friends though, I always have to cheer them up even though I have problems of my own. I digress, in the future of this story I hope to see more of Lee, and I hope things get better for him. [Rock Lee fan] Also I hope things get better for you too King K. No matter how dark things may seem there is always a light at the end of the tunnel. Part of that light is you, just remember what I always say and shine eternal. See you later.
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Title: Best one on here
Reviewed By: AKACHAN CHUX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 02:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Literally the best one I have found one here, and I been looking for a while now. Keep up the great work. P.S. Wish i could write like you^_^
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Reviewed By: abbie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 23:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! THIS STORY IS BRILLIANT! FUNNY, SAD, THRILLING! IT HAS IT ALL!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 23:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
nice chap! keep up the AWESOME work!!
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Title: scene breaks
Reviewed By: Naruto'sBrat On: May 16, 2008 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only beef I have with your story, is scene changes. It's kind of hard to determine scene changes. Like when you were doing the Naruto/Neji and Tsunade/Chouza/Shizune back and forth thing, I got mixed up a bit. You should put something in to show where the scenes switch. Other than that, much props. I don't usually read stories on Mediaminer, but I've got the site on my favorites list just for this story. By the by, the only reason you don't have all tens, is because I've read some fanfics that are actually better than the actual series they're based off of. I'm on fanfiction.net if you want to read something of mine. I know some authors get pissed when people who haven't even written anything try to tell them how to write.
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 14:34 EDT
Comment/Review:
Man, Gai's grilling of Kakashi was epic. Up date soon, I really want to know what happened to Lee. Please tell me he's okay.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Sasuke-kun [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfiction I have ever read here. When I log on to MediaMiner, I always go see if you updated your story, because I like it pretty much. I love your style of writing, the story is EXTREMELY good and I love Naru/Hina(although my fav is Naru/Saku). The only part I think was weird, was the part when Sakura got raped, by Sasuke. I mean, the lemon part was good, but Sasuke is very sadistic, like you say in your preview. Overall : 9.5/10
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Title: GREAT!!!
Reviewed By: innocence_lost14 On: April 05, 2008 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I'VE BEEN WAITING SO LONG FOR THIS CHAPTER!! U LUV IT!! TO BAD KIBA AND SHINO DONT:) I THOUGHT IT WAS WELL PUT ON HOW EVERYTHING CHANGED FROM GOOD TO BAD TO SCARED TO GOOD AGAIN BETWEEN THE RELATIONSHIP OF NARUTO AND HINATA. IF YOU HAVE MYSPACE PLZ ADD ME WWW.MYSPACE.COM/INNOCENCE_LOST14
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 18:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
I've been waiting forever for this. That chapter was so sweet I almost started crying, and I'm in the library, people were looking at me and stuff. Anyway. Great chapter King K and I'll be waiting patiently for the next. P.S. I'll always review this story, because you write back. It actually makes you feel like reviewing was worth it. Shine enternal King K from your friend JJ.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i still like ur fic(even though i really didn't like the whole evil Sasuke thing. And the Sakura thing.) I give you props because it is very well written and overall AWESOME!!! so continue with the great story you are writing!!!
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Title: evilness
Reviewed By: Nannashi On: March 13, 2008 02:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
pretty good so far -.- as long as naru stays with hinata i have no problems =D hopefully(both idea and warning) that thing with Sai drawing naruto shouldn't happen -.- one rape scene was more then enough
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Reviewed By: Trife [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ichigo is from the anime Bleach if I am not mistaken. Also I would like to say very very good job on the story so far and update soon please and thank you.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 01:07 EST
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What a good chapter! I wonder what Tsunade wants with Kakashi? Things are heating up between Kakashi and Kurenai. Being in that position with Kakashi I'd climb in bed not go to the sofa lol.
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Reviewed By: SilverStar87 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 00:36 EST
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Even drunk Kakashi can still kick butt. What's with Sakura's mom spying? No way to tell except reading on!
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