| "Naruto vs. Sasuke The Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jimmy35 On: September 26, 2008 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story is great and am looking forward to reading more asap please. Now we know Hintna kidnapped but just don't have her raped I think one is enough meaning Sakura. The writing is great because of the detail you put forth and the plot is a sound one to build off of.
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Reviewed By: Jimmy35 On: September 26, 2008 01:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story is great and am looking forward to reading more asap please. Now we know Hintna kidnapped but just don't have her raped I think one is enough meaning Sakura. The writing is great because of the detail you put forth and the plot is a sound one to build off of.
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Reviewed By: GamerJay of FF.Net On: August 31, 2008 22:15 EDT
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Inochi's theory with Inner Sakura sounds very logical and valid. The character development, especially the NaruHina, were great, and kudos on that fleeting, emotional moment between Tsunade and Jiraiya. The Sannin really do need to sort their lives out. This chapter gives out a sense of foreboding towards later chapters. If you don't mind me saying it would be best if Sakura told Tsunade and Naruto of Sasuke's plans the second she recovers, and don't let that tainted little Uchiha have his way. I can easily imagine what will happen to Sakura once she recovers. We can expect that the village will be calling her traitor and her going through what Naruto went through, and feeling terrible because of it. And I can imagine her trying to win his love, going as far as becoming fanatical as she did with Sasuke. This has been a really interesting chapter with, like I stated already, a sense of foreboding. I hope it doesn't take you a long time to update because the anticipation is too much to bear. GamerJay out...!
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Title: No
Reviewed By: Nannashi On: August 31, 2008 02:37 EDT
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dude no on previous review I think its Asuma but no way Kurenai would be mad at Anko for being with him, but i do think that Kaka-sensei needs to just talk with Kurenai instead of assuming. Otherwise awesome fanfic O_O darkness isn't usually my thing but I'll deal for the sake of awesome plot line
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Title: Yeah, I still work fast.
Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 02:26 EDT
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Dude where have you been? I've been waiting forever for this to come out. I'll have to take your advice too, I was planning a party scene later in the story, but it does sound kind of hard to do. I really love the opening of the chapter, Kiba just doesn't get it. Also, please save Sakura soon, I'll admit that I don't like her and you actually pulled up the exact reason why as Inoichi explained to Tsunade, but I actually feel like saving her myself. It would be cool though if that rage somehow made her extremely strong. P.S. is the person Anko is with Asuma? It would explain why Kurenai was made at her. Just guessing though. Anyway be faster next time King K, I was beginning to worry about you man. Til next we meet Shine eternal.
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Reviewed By: theoryofaninvisibleman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 02:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude i just finished your story and i have to say that that was one of the most injoyable things i have ever read and i can't wait to see what you come up with next. Keep up the good work. Oh, and i realy hope you don't kill Kakashi or Naruto for that matter.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: ninjaintheshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story so far just finished ch 21 i like that the chapters are long cant wait for ch 22
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Reviewed By: Deadberserker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 01:47 EDT
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One of the better chapters so far. You seem really good at writing comedies please update soon. And thanks for writing.
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: June 26, 2008 13:43 EDT
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I can not read the the update you have for yesterday. Please fix it soom. I like this story a lot. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 12:00 EDT
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Heh, awesome latest chapter. Now, if only the next update came a little faster, neh? Alright, please update soon, this story rocks hard, and is worth the wait, but much longer and this one just becomes a pain to wait for. Heh. Update again soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: GamerJay of FF.Net On: June 17, 2008 22:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to review this and give my opinion on this work of literal art. This is one of the best Naru/Hina fics I've read in a long time. The only thing that disturbed me was the entirety of Chapter 13 (which I now avoid when reading this story from now on), even if Sakura realizes and admits she's a bitch. Speaking of Sakura, maybe you should continue the storyline now. It'd be great if it took Naruto to wake her up, and that afterwards she would start obsessing over him and trying to win his love, much to Hinata's anger and Naruto's disgust. As for Hiashi...kill the bastard as soon as possible. Naruto's already got Akatsuki, Sound, Orochimaru, Sasuke and other corrupt Konoha officials/shinobi to deal with, the last thing he needs is someone close by threatening his beloved Hinata. With Tsunade...she should hurry up and sort her life out, especially when it comes to Jiraiya. Kakashi...I'm glad he admitted he was such a damn hypocrite, and was unfair to Naruto. And finally when it comes to Sasuke...for all our sakes don't let him touch another woman, ESPECIALLY Hinata. That would be a real tragedy. That's all I have to write. Great job so far and I hope you update soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 14:49 EDT
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^_^ yays you updated! as usual, you delivered an amazing portrayal of the characters and i am loving the scene with Hinata and Naruto at the end :P
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Reviewed By: jumperjacket [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 01:18 EDT
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SO you finally updated again King K. How have you been, hope things got better. Anyway, I like the Tsunade/Jiraiya altercation. Also, drunk Naruto was hilarious. I think that you are one of the best at capturing the character's true eccense. But, hey I've told you that before. Oh, one favor can you check my story "Eyes piercing the darkness" I've got good reveiws, but I want to see what you think. See you next time King K and Shine eternal.
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Reviewed By: Daianta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 07:31 EDT
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WOW. YOU'VE GOT ME ADDICTED it's utterly amazing, and i wish i could write like you do.. Pleeeeease hurry up and update! it's driving me crazy
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Title: FUNNY
Reviewed By: blue wolf On: May 19, 2008 15:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great. I am glade that I forgot how to spell Naruto's Teacher's Name (feels stupid) is out of the hospltaland what happend to Lee. I am glade that Naruto got Lee to smeil and Lagh. keep up the good work and update soon. Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you. please update soon Thank you.
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