| "Naruto vs. Sasuke The Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaverr On: May 11, 2010 08:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story, since about chapter 6 was published, and I was very happy to see it updated, as it is one of the few tales i've acctually taken to following in this genre. While grammar and spelling are not always perfect the story has been very enjoyable and the character portrayals of sasuke and sakura pre shippuuden are to my mind entirely believable.
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Reviewed By: jasgag [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2010 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great, thank you for writing it,i have been waiting for another chapter to come out, keep on writing it is very good. thank you again. great story and excellent plot
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Reviewed By: Yasha512 On: April 15, 2010 03:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story and if you do have the ability to upload it still plz do for you do have at least one fan still around who wants to read the rest.
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2009 13:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story alot I hope you will add more soon.
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Reviewed By: GamerJay of FF.Net On: February 27, 2009 00:41 EST
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I'm not telling you how you should write your own story, but I need to get this off my chest... Damn it, something better not happen to Hinata and Kurenai, otherwise this story is ruined for me. Something this well written shouldn't feature any more debauchery than what was already inflicted on Sakura...especially for a sweet girl such as Hinata and a strong woman like Kurenai. I can tell this story is going to be long, so I think it would be great if you started killing off the enemy and appeasing our bloodlust. First the small time (Kabuto, Oto Ninja), the middle-men (Hiahi, Ishi, Danzo) and finally the big-fish(Sasuke, Orochimaru), and then all that's left is Akatsuki. You know, I wonder how Itachi would handle seeing how his brother has completely gone insane? Because last I checked that not what he wanted for him... Nicely written. And once again, I'm not telling you how to write your own fic, but please...no more vile, debauched stuff happening to anyone. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: February 18, 2009 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great. I can not want to see what happends next. It is like watching the show its self. I can not wait until the next chapter is up. Please keep up the good work and please up date soon. Thank you and have a nice day.
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Reviewed By: gerodumus prime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 14:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
execellent work my friend please get to work on the next chapter at once
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Title: aftermath
Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this story for quite some time, and was checking for updates the day before this chapter went up. i was very glad to see it. I've been enjoying this one and had worried it would not update again, given the time between updates. keeep working at it, this story is surely worth seeing through.!
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Reviewed By: naruharemlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 15:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story so far exept that i dont like rape and i love what you makes gai say i think that he sounds like one of the knights from the medieval times
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Reviewed By: fes On: January 26, 2009 00:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just wanted to say i think this fic is awesome and i aprieciate all the work you put into it and i look forward to reading the next chapter thank you
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Reviewed By: GamerJay of FF.Net On: January 25, 2009 19:48 EST
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Guess the entire universe is conspiring to destroy the Leaf Village and everyone in it. Now I'm really starting to feel sorry for Sakura, and I hope her fate doesn't befall Kurenai. You might want to put Ishi Haruno on that mile-long list of people to kill off. Taro, however...don't know about him. Spare him, perhaps? Make him realize how corrupt the Haruno clan is and do something about it. In short, Keep up the good work. I hope it doesn't take a long time for you to update.
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: January 25, 2009 12:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great. I hope that everyhings co,e out ok. I tis great that naruto and the other lady are friends. I hope that if hainta gets in to trouble that she gets help if she needs it. I hope as will they get the seals off of the teo people that want them off.
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic you've taken Naruto charachters and given them the personality's and status they deserve. I have one request though PLEASE DON'T LET SASUKE HAVE HIS WAY WITH HINATA!!!!! And one more thing I hope this deosn't sound to perverted but is there gonna be a chap where Naruto and Hinata you know do it coming up soon? And if there is could you let me know. Thank you. I'm greately anticipateing the update of this fic. And good luck with getting a job, especially if your in America, what with the econemy and all.
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Reviewed By: GamerJay of FF.Net On: September 26, 2008 09:12 EDT
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Heh, no wonder Anko doesn't have any friends. Good work, and kudos on the conclusion to the dreamscape fight.
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Reviewed By: Jimmy35 On: September 26, 2008 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story is great and am looking forward to reading more asap please. Now we know Hintna kidnapped but just don't have her raped I think one is enough meaning Sakura. The writing is great because of the detail you put forth and the plot is a sound one to build off of.
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