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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intriguing story. I was surprised to see that it was finished without revealing if Yuka, was in fact, the modern day Yuka. Contrary to "King Baka" I did in fact find quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Not enough to detract from the story, though enough for a grammar Nazi like myself to stop and stare at for a few seconds. They are very common mistakes and I'm sure if you went back and looked at your story you would find them almost immediately. Well that said please continue writing and good luck. ^_^
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 11:10 CDT
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i really enjoyed this story, despite that it was an inu/kag. i'm a bit of a diehard sess/kag fan but i like to vary my reading every now and then, especially when the stories are well written and have good plot lines. this story has both and it deserves every award given. job well done.
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good action/adventure fic, and I would have gone higher than 10 on originality/creativity if I could. I especially enjoyed the interaction between Inuyasha and his father; we got to see a side of Inuyasha that we rarely see. That said, at several points I was left wondering why certain characters acted in certain ways. For example, would Inuyasha really leave Kagome in a hostile castle under the 'protection' of a man he completely doesn't trust? I'm not trying to be overly critical or pass judgment; it is your perogative as the author to follow your own ideas. Despite my reservations, this story kept me entertained from start to finish. In fact, I think you should list this story under the Suspense category as well. Listing this story under Romance is bit of a stretch, however. Overall, I highly enjoyed "Displacement." I'm a nut about bad grammar, and yours was almost impeccable. You also showed uniqueness and creativity that many fanfictions lack. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice I wonder if the cat demon would have servived did she you think. Nice endding
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Reviewed By: bert8813 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 00:11 CDT
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i just came across this story and i loved it!! all the historical facts were interesting and i loved how you protrayed inu's father.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 15:03 CDT
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Heh, awesome story. Continue to write, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Aurorean [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! ^_^ I'm sorry to see it has finally come to an end... The whole story was well thought out, which made it all that more enjoyable. Not to mention that the end was fantastic! I liked that you had InuYasha thoughts at the end...It helps the reader to understand what was going through his head during there one week in the past. PS~I'll be looking forward to reading more of your fanfics!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps hands* Bravo! A good ending, a very good ending. I was really able to feel what Inuyasha was feeling during this chapter, excellent work. Its a shame it is over now, but, i am now eagerly looking forward to your future stories. Thank you for this excellent piece of fanfiction, i thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wildly imaginative and well written. This was truly a great story. Every chapter had you begging for more. I will have to look for you in the future. Good luck and great job!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 21:11 CDT
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i love your story! it was action pack and very original! the idea of inuyasha meeting his father is very touching. he can finally know what it is like to have a taiyoukai as a father. it is also nice to read that kagome can kick some ass. great story!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice finish. I really enjoyed the histoical setting. It was intersting, and, most of all, DIFFERENT. Toom many stories can be plugged into a certain formula. This one didn't do that, and, believe me, I appreciate that. I also liked the father/son bonding with Toga and Inuyasha. You definitely made us wait a LONG time for it (lol), but it was definitely worth the wait. Great job, and I look forward to reading more from you soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god i was in tears T-T... "I…I don't wanna say goodbye," i was fine but then I'll be losing you again." felt them coming and "I am always with you, my son," killed me completely... i had to stop and wipe the eyes lol and that was cute ^^ a little fluff for us at end :P and im soo happy Inuyasha got to be with his father ^^ and i learnt history! and it wasnt boring history i learnt from school lol and thank you SOOO much for writing this, and ill be definly (sp?) waiting for more 'Love Me, Hate Me' *starts giggling* :P
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
......... I.... have no words to describe how absolutely brilliant these chapters have been. I thought i could write intense action scenes, but this... wow, i could see it all in my mind crystal clear, the details were so amazing. I am sad to see this fic come to an end, but all good things have to end at some point i suppose. Now, all that remains is the final chapter, and knowing you, it will be a very fulfilling one. Looking forward to it! PS: Sorry for not reviewing sooner, had to catch up first :)
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beyond words!!!!! A pissed off Kagome 'the knee' Higurashi...the fight sequences...WOW...and Toga totally kicks ASS!!! Oh...he's got to know now Inu-chan is his son! Kags just about confirmed it when she named Inu's fang! You are an awesome talent! Keep them coming! (So, I'm a kiss ass, deal with it! *wickedly smirking*)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 05:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts breathing fast* OMG OMG OMG FINAL!!! OMG OMG OMG!! i wonder if Toga is gonna say something about Inuyasha being his son...
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ending to the battle. I can't wait to see if Toga figures out WHY his Tessaiga was able to control Inuyasha's blood. And I defnitely hope that they get home in the end, though I'm sure that Inuyasha will hate to leave his father. I look forward to seeing how you close this out.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 23:52 CDT
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it seems that kagome had already had yasha's dad's blessing when they first encountered tessaiga, this just completes the circle. i guess all that is left is the formal introductions and good byes. lovely story, one only wishes that the best stories wouldn't end. anticipating more but sad that it will end. ~ always a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 23:02 CDT
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Good chapter. I admit that battle scenes are not my favorite....but I can still appreciate a gruesome good job, lol. I'll be looking for the next update.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me love 'Love me, Hate me' ^^ but ooo Qin got me thinking there... his sword can purifi?? omg i soo cant wait for more ^^ and to me Toga, is more blood thirsty until he met Sesshys mum or Izayoi, and turned all nice..
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Reviewed By: IXIWineIXI [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great so far, i seriously hope inuyasha will be able to tell his father of the future. i do want inuyasha to have his father alive.
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Reviewed By: Graypheonix85 On: May 05, 2008 18:47 CDT
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Hell, he'd be VERY pissed ff with most of his troops slaughtered with cowardly tactics. Kill them all I say. Still, how did the insane bastard get a weapon infused with pure spiritual power? It's very odd. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: bigfanofiykag [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite stories. The story is so unique, very well written, stimulating, and intriguing. Maybe because I love this story so much as to why I'm writing this, but if there were to be a fifth InuYasha movie, this story could easily be it. Hell, this story is better than some of the other InuYasha movies that are out on DVD and video now, especially the fourth one. (I did not like that one too much. It lacked that InuYasha and Kagome love thing that I like so much. True, she was jealous when he chased after that Kikyo clone when the clone stole that 'box', but I expected a little more conflict than what was in the movie.) Anyway, this story is a far better story. All in all, I hate to see the end of this one and I hope you update soon. Take care.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can i drop you a twenty for orignality? the scale should go up further. this is definatly a unique idea lovey, nothing like i've ever read. i love him running into daddy that fast, and it's awesome to see the interaction. i love the simlarities between daddy and SEsshoumaru. very very awesome. sorry it's taken so long for me to get on to actually read this, but it's awesome! i will continue reading later, but this is really really well done. i love the research and time that you've put into this!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Inuyasha is certainly between a rock and a hard place now, since he knows Kagome is in danger and can't get to her. Inuyassha is clearly going to need all that rage as they face this army. And Ryuichi finally chose sides. This plot is moving quickly now, and I look forward to seeing what happnes next.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 11:21 CDT
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Heh, becoming a corpse that cannot be killed again, that can only be done with several jewel shards, placed all over one's body. Without that, no effort can return a person back to life, or prevent them from ever dying. Heh, death comes for us all, and this fool thinks he has an exception. What a moron. Neh. COntinue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
were close to the fight!! yay ^^ awww Inuyasha got scared about Kagome :P soo sweet :P
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Reviewed By: FreeDaChickens [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very interesting; I love how you've kept all the characters in character while putting them in a entirely new situation. It moved a little slowly at the beginning, but it's definitely interesting now. I also really like how you've incorporated the actual historical events into your story, including having real people play major roles. I can't wait to see what happens next! FreeDaChickens
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 14:56 CDT
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I wonder how long it'll take Inuyasha to rip Ying's head off once he learns that he's been trying to get into Kagome's pants...Great story, I can't wait till next month!
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Reviewed By: hanyouXmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a great story so far! I really enjoy reading this, and I really hope you update soon, because I really want to see what happens with Kagome. *squeals* This is so exciting! ^^
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: April 13, 2008 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, this is cool! The chapter was touching, really touching... but i also wonder, why didn't Toga revive his men with Tensaiga? Oh well, probably wasn't thinking too much about his sword at the moment, rather, about slaughtering Liu Bang :) But anyways, you described the transformation from his humanoid form to his demon form with really excellent details, thumbs up for you. It sucks about your computer, mine has had some problems too and even went kaput once, so i know the feeling. I wish you the best, and when the next chapter comes out, no rush, i will gladly read and review again. See ya next time!
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