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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 15:39 CDT
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i am wondering why toga didn't revive his men with tensaiga? . . . touching chapter, many revelations and some understanding. it would be interesting if toga was ultimately responsible for the well magic, it would explain a lot. ~ a pleasure as always, ginny
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 15:46 CDT
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Wow! The tension is exhilarating or however that is spelled. I can't wait for the next chapter or ore like the fate taht awaits Kagome and Inuyasha! Oh! The suspense is killing me! Great job! Beautifully done!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: April 06, 2008 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your a idiot.. who ever is under me, Toga doesnt die yet.. anyways ooo he transform!! * jumps in excitment* oooo i cant wait omg.. too excitment to do work now lol and got me guessing, if Toga truely knows who Inuyasha is..
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Title: Review Request
Reviewed By: Wine On: April 05, 2008 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far but I have a request. Don't let the father die.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 16:12 CDT
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Well shit. Definitely time to get some revenge, these don't get any mercy after what they did, they get a couple of wind scars straight up their assholes, as far as I'm concerned. Dishonorable bastards. Neh. Update again soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. This whole situation has to be tough....for both Inuyasha and Toga. How hard must it be to know that your days are numbered as soon as your first son is born? And how hard must it be to stand right next to the father you never met and pretend that he's nothing more to you than a fellow warrior? Those are really hard situations for father AND son, no matter how you look at it. And you are doing such a good job showing the complexity of all that. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 03:50 CST
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*clapping hands* Bravo! That was f*****g brilliant! Really well thought out chapter, and i really loved your theory behind Tensaigas healing power, really well thought out. This chapter was worth every single letter to read, and i hope to read more in the future! (PS: Thanks for the short, yet groovy reply to my Email :)
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 16:59 CST
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Okay, you really really need to update soon, I am dying to know what Song-sama and Toga-sama were talking about. I am so happy that you did mention Sesshoumaru, since he is my favorite Demon Lord and everything..Loved the chapter except the short ness. So plaese update soon!!!_HCDK
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Reviewed By: bigfanofiykag [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite stories to read. As soon as I get the email that it's been updated with a new chapter, I drop everything I'm doing at the moment to read it. You are a very talented and gifted writer. You know exactly how to spin that spider web to catch your readers attention and then keep them there until you gobble them up with your magnificent description and dialogue. I am one of your biggest fans. Please update as soon as you can and thank you for sharing your great gift. bigfanofiykag (P.S. I also agree with you musings about Kagome and Sesshomaru pairings. Those two together just don't blend well. The idea of Kagome and Sesshomaru together rubs me the wrong way.)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo i think Toga learnt that Inuyasha is his son XD and oooo i understand ^^ and i little confused but now you made it clearly ^^
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 14:53 CST
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Great story! I am really enjoying it, though I am hoping for a bit more Kagome/ Inuyasha interaction. Please update soon, I have to find out what happens to Kagome! :D
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 12:24 CST
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Huh, neat explanation, neh. Of course, if the blade harms the spirit, it would do no damage to the flesh in the appropriate situation, or reverse the damage, healing the wounds both spiritually and physically, if the sword wants to. I think that's more along the lines of canon. Neh. COntinue to update, this is interesting to read, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent explanation. I could never have thought of something like that. And it makes SO much sense. As for what Toga asked Lady Song, I hope you plan to tell us. Clearly, it had something to do with Inuyasha, and I'm DYING to know what it was. Very nice chapter.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 01:25 CST
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i thought your explanation was very logical. an interesting development, he now knows who yasha is. it would be interesting to see if you are going to allow him time to get to know kagome once they save her from 'a fate worse than death' and not just a brief meeting. one would consider that he would have to spend some time getting to know her so that he could have tessaiga recognize and even protect her from sesshoumaru's dokkasou so soon after coming in contact with her in his tomb. . . a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: crimsondragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, interesting chapter, Drake! Not a lot of action, but some good plot extension thus far. Though a few more things are yet to be revealed. I s'pose this next one will reveal a few more things? I still have a strong inkling that ol' Liu is gonna be playing a pretty big part coming up in the latter parts here, and I guess time will tell...
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