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| "Displacement" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] | | Pages (8): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 › » ] | Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fuck yeah! Yet another thrilling chapter, hahahah, i knew Kagome was going to do something like that, it is just like her to be rather... outgoing with her temper, hehehe. Royal jewels almost got shattered. And the next chapter... hehe, well, if you are eager to write it yourself as well, then it is bound to be out of this world. Get it out, soon, please :)
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, boy. I knew Kagome's mouth was going to get her into trouble. Didn't she know that hostile walls have ears?! Oh, well. She was a bit of an airhead last time, and it clearly cost her this time. But....I did enjoy that well-deserved kick to the balls, lol. But, she is in a whole lot of trouble. And Inuyasha is distracted by problems of his own regarding his dad. I can't wait to see where you take this next. If you are so eager to write it, I KNOW it's gonna be good!
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 05:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo then im DIEING for the next chapter ^^ i always seem the squeal when i see you updated lol anyways... hmmmmm looks like Inuyasha, and his dad should get moving to get Kagome and kill that asshole lol
| Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you are looking forward to the next chapter then I'm sure I'm going to love it! Good luck and hope to see more updates soon.
| Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the update but does InuYasha remember that he only has ten days(i think) to get back to Kagome?
| Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: February 06, 2008 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooohh boy... i can't wait for the next chapter! Bad things are going to happen? eek, don't like the sound of that, but i am waiting eagerly to find out what it is. Oh boy, no matter where they end up, the shards invite disaster, and i love it. Excellent chapter, please update again soon!
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 03:21 CST
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yes, it sounds as if you're building up to some pretty bad things for kagome, i fear for her safety. it was stupid of her to reveal the jewel to anyone. she should have just described naraku and her power if she was feeling generous but she should have known 'the walls have ears' especially in the court of an ambitious and paranoid leader. and all of those world war two adages about 'loose lips sinking ships'... ~ thank you, ginny
| Reviewed By: Aurorean [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story so far! I'm feeling rather sorry for Kagome right about know. T_T Update again SOON! Don't leave your poor readers with a cliffy! LOL v_^
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 14:24 CST
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So then write the next chapter so we can shit on you for writing something so lame! Lol, just kidding, but seriously, WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! It's been months since you last udpated, and though this update is great, it's sorta like, wtf, what took so long? Anyway, continue to update, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 03:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmm i was thinking you were going to chuck Sesshy in but all well ^^ anyways oooooo Kagome is in danger!!! i cant wait for the next chapter!! like again.... i jumped when i saw you updated :P
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 19:34 CST
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Well, never mind. Lol, I just finished reading your last update and I see that sesshoumaru is not born yet. And I was so looking foward to it too. Anywayz, I cant wait until your next update. And I think that this Ryuuci(I 4got how to0 spell his name) guy does not betray Kagome and tell his master and bout the Shikon jewl shards....Well update soon, I cant wait!!!!!~HCDK^_^
| Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 19:03 CST
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Awww, I kinda rather like Shesshoumaru, he is real clam cool and collective. He puts on a real emotional front but if you look into his eyes long enough you will see the breifest of emotion. He cares but he is just afraid to show emotion because the emotion "Toga" showed for InuYasha's mother, led to the great Inu no Tashio's down fall and he seen that as a sign og weakness. But anyways, I love this fic and I think that it is really great, I hope that Sesshoumaru has already been born in this time, because I know Shesshoumaru is older than 500 years old. I have just fisnshed reading chaper 10 and I decided to review. But love the fic, love the story and love the plot, please continue to updatem your great!!!!!~HCDK
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I'm afraid that Kagome just said WAY too much when she talked about the jewel shards. She should have known better than to talk about them and their power so openly in the palace of a power hungry human like the emperor. That was NOT SMART (to say the least). As for Inuyasha and his dad...interesting. Inuyasha is getting to see firsthand that, although his father was a great and powerful demon, he was also flawed. And it's good that he's getting that chance his dad as something other than this all-powerful, can do no wrong, larger than life figure. Inuyasha, deep-down, as always been somewhat in awe of his dad and unable to belive that he would ever be as good as he is, cocksure attitude or not. This experience has been good for him in more ways than one. Now, if he could only keep his silly girl from talking so much.....I look forward to reading more soon.
| Reviewed By: crimsondragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, very nice story, I'm having quite a good time reading it. As one who's rather interested in history, this fic has been quite enjoyable, being set in a different time than usual. I wonder if anyone else has noticed(or knew of) the Liu Bang reference? Kinda nice to see he wasn't excluded from the story(at least totally). I rather like the twists in plot, although I have to admit it seemed a bit obvious that it was going to be Toga before InuYasha actually meets him, but much of the rest has been quite well done. I particularly liked the scene between Kagome and the Taoist sage. It certainly seems reasonable that would be her greatest fear, though the scene was done so that I couldn't see that part coming. All in all, well done! Oh, and there were a couple of spelling errors, though I couldn't tell you exactly where they were off the top of my head.
| Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better and better, this is both extremely enjoyable and educational, excellent combination! Learning things about China, in a fictious way, but still learning while enjoying a VERY interesting storyline... oh boy, the only Inuyasha fic with a plot this intense, complex and interesting, was "Delayed Dawn". This is like watching the series or the movies themselves to me, so thank you so much! Hope you update again soon!
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