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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ending to the battle. I can't wait to see if Toga figures out WHY his Tessaiga was able to control Inuyasha's blood. And I defnitely hope that they get home in the end, though I'm sure that Inuyasha will hate to leave his father. I look forward to seeing how you close this out.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 23:52 CDT
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it seems that kagome had already had yasha's dad's blessing when they first encountered tessaiga, this just completes the circle. i guess all that is left is the formal introductions and good byes. lovely story, one only wishes that the best stories wouldn't end. anticipating more but sad that it will end. ~ always a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 23:02 CDT
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Good chapter. I admit that battle scenes are not my favorite....but I can still appreciate a gruesome good job, lol. I'll be looking for the next update.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me love 'Love me, Hate me' ^^ but ooo Qin got me thinking there... his sword can purifi?? omg i soo cant wait for more ^^ and to me Toga, is more blood thirsty until he met Sesshys mum or Izayoi, and turned all nice..
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Title: wine
Reviewed By: IXIWineIXI [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great so far, i seriously hope inuyasha will be able to tell his father of the future. i do want inuyasha to have his father alive.
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Reviewed By: Graypheonix85 On: May 05, 2008 18:47 CDT
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Hell, he'd be VERY pissed ff with most of his troops slaughtered with cowardly tactics. Kill them all I say. Still, how did the insane bastard get a weapon infused with pure spiritual power? It's very odd. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: bigfanofiykag [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite stories. The story is so unique, very well written, stimulating, and intriguing. Maybe because I love this story so much as to why I'm writing this, but if there were to be a fifth InuYasha movie, this story could easily be it. Hell, this story is better than some of the other InuYasha movies that are out on DVD and video now, especially the fourth one. (I did not like that one too much. It lacked that InuYasha and Kagome love thing that I like so much. True, she was jealous when he chased after that Kikyo clone when the clone stole that 'box', but I expected a little more conflict than what was in the movie.) Anyway, this story is a far better story. All in all, I hate to see the end of this one and I hope you update soon. Take care.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can i drop you a twenty for orignality? the scale should go up further. this is definatly a unique idea lovey, nothing like i've ever read. i love him running into daddy that fast, and it's awesome to see the interaction. i love the simlarities between daddy and SEsshoumaru. very very awesome. sorry it's taken so long for me to get on to actually read this, but it's awesome! i will continue reading later, but this is really really well done. i love the research and time that you've put into this!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Inuyasha is certainly between a rock and a hard place now, since he knows Kagome is in danger and can't get to her. Inuyassha is clearly going to need all that rage as they face this army. And Ryuichi finally chose sides. This plot is moving quickly now, and I look forward to seeing what happnes next.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 11:21 CDT
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Heh, becoming a corpse that cannot be killed again, that can only be done with several jewel shards, placed all over one's body. Without that, no effort can return a person back to life, or prevent them from ever dying. Heh, death comes for us all, and this fool thinks he has an exception. What a moron. Neh. COntinue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
were close to the fight!! yay ^^ awww Inuyasha got scared about Kagome :P soo sweet :P
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Reviewed By: FreeDaChickens [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very interesting; I love how you've kept all the characters in character while putting them in a entirely new situation. It moved a little slowly at the beginning, but it's definitely interesting now. I also really like how you've incorporated the actual historical events into your story, including having real people play major roles. I can't wait to see what happens next! FreeDaChickens
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 14:56 CDT
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I wonder how long it'll take Inuyasha to rip Ying's head off once he learns that he's been trying to get into Kagome's pants...Great story, I can't wait till next month!
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Reviewed By: hanyouXmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a great story so far! I really enjoy reading this, and I really hope you update soon, because I really want to see what happens with Kagome. *squeals* This is so exciting! ^^
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not signed in) On: April 13, 2008 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, this is cool! The chapter was touching, really touching... but i also wonder, why didn't Toga revive his men with Tensaiga? Oh well, probably wasn't thinking too much about his sword at the moment, rather, about slaughtering Liu Bang :) But anyways, you described the transformation from his humanoid form to his demon form with really excellent details, thumbs up for you. It sucks about your computer, mine has had some problems too and even went kaput once, so i know the feeling. I wish you the best, and when the next chapter comes out, no rush, i will gladly read and review again. See ya next time!
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