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Reviewed By: icefyre1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I'm currently studying Chinese history, this story was very interesting to read =) The idea of this story is very original, and I like how you managed to incorporate a lot of Inuyasha's past into it. I will be following your updates, so I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: imajen On: January 21, 2008 02:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Love the story line please keep writting more !
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 17:50 CST
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Lmfao, screw studying. Reading your history notes and this fanfic ACTUALLY helped me past one of my AP World History tests!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 05:01 CST
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omg lol how can you say that about Sesshy?? lol anyways oooo Inuyasha's full youkai is going to be a problem ^^ but im lost with something... where is Inuyasha and Inu-no-Taishou going?? amyways oo i cant wait to hear what Kagome's role is ^^ *giggles* me love the 3rd movie ^^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 23:34 CST
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Kagome in fuku traipsing through history, like the garden gnome traveling the globe. . . gotta see if i can photoshop those scenes. Kagome in ancient Rome, Egypt, with Alexander the great conquering Phoenetia! The coronation of Queen Elizabeth I, the Salem witch trials... Yasha would have to save her from being burned. . . yeah, where was i? oh, great chapter, i love when you weave history and inuyasha! *\o/* hooray for more frequent updates *\o/* ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO. I did enjoy this chapter, and I'm definitely glad to get some insight into what Kagome has to do with all this. The stuff with Inuyasha and his dad has been great.....but I had been wondering how Kagome fit into what's going on. And her role is clearly VERY important, if it involves dealing with Inuyasha's full youkai form in some way. But this, of course, is not why I'm laughing. Your crack in your AN about Sesshoumaru being as transparent as Casper had me rolling. Because you are absolutely right. He might as well have been glass in that movie when it came to Rin AND Inuyasha. Now, yes, he blasted the heck out of Yash a couple of times.....but big brothers have been beating the crap out of their little brothers since time began. He also took a blast for Inuyasha that probably would have killed him...and big brothers have been doing that for almost as long. Sessh isn't fooling ANYONE; I definitely agree. But *sighs*, he is also still an arrogant jerk....no doubt about that either.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes! Another chapter to my favourite fic! I really love this fic... but right now, i don't have the energy to give it a proper review. This christmas, something horrible happened that affected everyone in my family. My mood is horrible and sad, so i cannot give a review i usually do. I hope you update soon, and that my moods will have become better when you do. Thanks for this good chapter.
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Reviewed By: bbbeleana On: December 26, 2007 03:43 CST
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Hey, something really funny happened yesterday. After I read your story, there was a documentation of Qin on TV. LOL! Therefore I am really interested which other facts you are gonna use in your story. See you soon! :)
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this story is beautifully written, good job :) But might I suggest adding Rouyokan(sp?) to the story? Both the anime and manga suggest that he fought many battles alongside InuYasha's father and given his spirited nature he might be a fun addition, for some light comedy you know. As far as I know your description on Toga's death was on point for the movie but none of the InuYasha movie's are canon. Still, it's acceptable because I don't know of the manga or anime going into detail about his death...I'm looking forward to you next update...and happy holidays! -Amber
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Reviewed By: bigfanofiykag [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have the 3rd movie, and what you have written is correct. After the fight with Ryokotsu (my spelling stinks), InuYasha rushed to the castle to revive InuYasha's mom, name InuYasha, give his mom the fire rat robe, and fight that Takazuma character (again with the spelling) until he died as the castle burned to the ground around them. I have not read anything different than what you have written. This is one of those stories that is as soon as its posted, I read it. I'm so intrigued by this and all of your stories. You have a wonderful talent and I enjoy all of your stories. Post soon and Happpy Holidays.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nope you got it all right about his death ^^ and at least you updated something ^^ and i kinda screamed again when i saw you updated lol anyways HAPPY XMAS!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2007 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. And, no, you didn't get the facts of Inuyasha's father's death wrong. That is exactly what happened in the third film. I don't know about the manga, though. As for the chapter, I'm glad that Toga seems to have finally figured things out. It was only a matter of time, though, especially considering the explanation Inuyasha gave. Toga is not a fool, as he said. I just can't wait to see when (or IF) Toga is going to confront Inuyasha about it. Inuyasha is a poor liar, so if his father confronts him directly, there is a good chance that he will shake something loose. I'll definitely be looking for the update.
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Reviewed By: Zelix (not signed in) On: November 26, 2007 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhh, i always love good OC's, the neko and the kitsune, those have such promise and i can't wait for more verbal banter between them and Inuyasha, heheheh. It also seems like things are beginning to get more intense, plot and mood wise, goody... i can't wait for more, everytime i see an update notice in my Email that you've updated this or others of your inuyasha fics, i always go 'Oh fucking deadly! yes!!' so, see ya next time, my favourite author!
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Reviewed By: anel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: November 26, 2007 05:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo another Miroku XD i really do hope Inuyasha runs into Kagome :P anyways thanks for the chapter ^^ and i like that Kitsune ^^
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 06:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea im doing the same... downloading the manga XD but im sooooo HAPPY you updated!!! i wonder if Inuyasha and all that will get to Kagome?? hmmm .... anyways start running Kagome!! XD and why cant i learn this in history... and not Hilter -_- P.S. this has to be 1 of my fav stories!!
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