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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww i love it!!! its getting really interesting!!
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Reviewed By: ShadowlessMutt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 16:56 CDT
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I have to say this is one of the most original plot lines I have ever seen for an InuYasha fanfiction and I'm rather interesting in seeing where you will go with this. However, I do have some questions, mainly with the demon general. First reading that, I would guess, as others have, that you may be speaking of InuYasha's father(the killing warriors with one swing of the blade kinda gave a clue), but based on the fact you put that Midoriko has not existed yet, I'm curious and I wonder if it is an original character of yours or not. So many other things popped out to me...yet I can't remember them as of this moment. Pathetic, eh? Can't wait to read more of your story. ~Laters
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Reviewed By: foreverremember66 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING plot haha, good job, although the chapter were a bit short, great story none-the-less. Please continue
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
could it be 'the great dog general' helping the chu? would yasha have to fight and behead his own father? if he does that it would endanger his own existance... the temporal implications would be insurmountable because a hanyou who didn't exist would never be able to go back in time to eliminate his father... a different timeline or dimension altogether... AAAAHHHH!! STAR TREK FLASHBACKS!!! . . . oh, i couldn't help myself, so sorry. . . . i'm intrigued, a good story! ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Hime-Jun-Hi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yipe!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 12:46 CDT
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I love this! History is one of the things I live for. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This keeps getting better and better! I'm so looking forward to how this continues to unfold, especially when Inuyasha being a hanyou becomes known to the them, when Tetsusaiga is transformed... there is so much to look forward to, so please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i LOVE it now ^^ it sooooooo interestly different :P please update soon if u can ^^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
asian history... they were so far advanced compaired with europeans of the same era. it's a pleasure to experience through the eyes of characters that i love. i understand that this is fiction but to use actual historical events with a bit of artist's license create an intelligent and entertaining tale. . . i do so enjoy your work. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 16:49 CDT
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Love it! Can't wait to see how they get out of this, and what they go through in the process. I'm hooked!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of my fucking god! Just when i thought your fallen series was good enough too eat... you bring out this sizzlingly interesting piece of absolute quality! My god, this has now caught me hook line and sinker, please update again soon and i'll promise i'll keep reviewing. When the story developes a bit more, i'll make a bigger review, since for now i am just observing how this plays out. Now you know i am interested, so please, let me see where how this unfolds.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i like it!!! cant wait for the next part :P
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: June 01, 2007 14:15 CDT
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This looks to be an interesting start, especially with some of the oddities that were going on in China around 500 AD and how so much of Japanese culture started in China and 'moved' over. One error I found: "We're from Japanese, we just want to get home," Kagome tried again. Japanese should be Japan.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent start so far. You two are both wonderful authors, so working on a story together easily assures us that you shall deliver nothing less than pure gold.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 19:47 CDT
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exciting. i love collaborations and i love anything historical (my tendancy to look everything in the world up, as inugrrrl, she'll tell you i'm a geek right to the core). very nice start and a great place to leave off.
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