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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: July 26, 2007 07:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inu no Taishou!!!! Inu no Taishou !!! Inu no Taishou !!! YAY OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I CANT WAIT UNTIL THEY TALK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 17:11 CDT
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I knew it was HIM, you sneaky devil you... i had a strong hunch the general was going to be HIM and i was right, oh boy... the intensity of this story just increased 10 fold in less than an instant! I can't wait to see how things will proceed now, this is just too good to miss now, so please update again and soon!
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Reviewed By: RaptorChicky On: July 25, 2007 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I was just waiting for that twist at the end! I kept thinking it was going to be him or someone further back in Inu's family tree, but what you've done works nicely! I am anxious to see how Inuyasha and Kagome get out of this nasty mess--keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: aj On: July 25, 2007 13:45 CDT
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OMG!!this is so good** gave me chills** please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 10:00 CDT
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aw, COOL! moment of silence for the eventual father/son bonding. . . ...... . . . one would only hope yasha would have enough sense to seek his father's help and council to get him and kagome out of their current predicament without upsetting history too much . . . while kagome has to deal with a man suffering from mercury poisoning madness... amazing piece weaving threads of history, beloved characters into a richly colored tapestry, exciting and eloquently mastered. ~ a true pleasure, ginny ~ a rich and sinful reward for such a beautifully colored and richly textured piece: ~ ::ginny's rum balls:: ~grind up: walnuts, dates, almonds, raisins, pecans, coconut, chocolate chips(lots and lots)...add more sticky dates and raisins if not gooey enough ~mix in: mini-chocolate chips, 151 proof rum ~roll in ground nuts, cocoa powder, or finely ground coffee(hazelnut coffee is good) ~ because you don't cook them the alcohol is still there... warning: eating too many rum balls will make you drunk >=P
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I had a feeling that Inuyasha had been sent to kill his DAD! When they mentioned a demon that no one could kill, Yash's dad definitely came to mind. I can't wait to see how their conversation goes next time. Please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 20:56 CDT
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Another good chapter. That Ying Zheng is a manipulative little turd, though. I can't wait to see how Inuyasha deals with him. But, since they are now holding Kagome, that is going to be easier said than done. And his mission is not going to be easy to carry out either, if he's able to carry it out at all. If the youkai he's supposed to kill is who I think he is, there is no way Inuyasha will be able to kill him....for more reasons than one. I really like this story. It's unique and draws you in immediately. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ho hoooo... now things are starting to make sense... and if my theory is anything close to the truth, i think i have a pretty good idea who this 'Yaoguia' general is that Ying was talking about, oh boy, if i am right, this is going to be a blast. As for Kagome, hmmm, things are not looking good i see, and the plot will only thicken from here on out. I love this, i hope you update again soon, because I...AM...LOVING...THIS...!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww i love it!!! its getting really interesting!!
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Reviewed By: ShadowlessMutt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 16:56 CDT
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I have to say this is one of the most original plot lines I have ever seen for an InuYasha fanfiction and I'm rather interesting in seeing where you will go with this. However, I do have some questions, mainly with the demon general. First reading that, I would guess, as others have, that you may be speaking of InuYasha's father(the killing warriors with one swing of the blade kinda gave a clue), but based on the fact you put that Midoriko has not existed yet, I'm curious and I wonder if it is an original character of yours or not. So many other things popped out to me...yet I can't remember them as of this moment. Pathetic, eh? Can't wait to read more of your story. ~Laters
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Reviewed By: foreverremember66 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING plot haha, good job, although the chapter were a bit short, great story none-the-less. Please continue
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
could it be 'the great dog general' helping the chu? would yasha have to fight and behead his own father? if he does that it would endanger his own existance... the temporal implications would be insurmountable because a hanyou who didn't exist would never be able to go back in time to eliminate his father... a different timeline or dimension altogether... AAAAHHHH!! STAR TREK FLASHBACKS!!! . . . oh, i couldn't help myself, so sorry. . . . i'm intrigued, a good story! ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Hime-Jun-Hi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yipe!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 12:46 CDT
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I love this! History is one of the things I live for. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This keeps getting better and better! I'm so looking forward to how this continues to unfold, especially when Inuyasha being a hanyou becomes known to the them, when Tetsusaiga is transformed... there is so much to look forward to, so please update again soon!
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