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Title: Chapter 62: You're trying to kill me, aren't you, Sue?
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 08:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How can you take me from nearly blubbering at that heart-warming reunion to nearly gut punching me with that one-sided fight! I'm...I'm SHOCKED! Hell, I'm kidding. You've always done just great at taking the plot in a completely different way in a half a second, shattering all me assumptions and desires for the better of the story. It was, as usual, eye-opening and jaw dropping to go so quickly from fluftastic to WTMFH!!!!!!!!!! in 0.2 seconds! Kich beet the holy HELL out of Kurt! Good GRAVY! **shudder** The goosebumps are STILL raised on my arms, Sue! Well, I'm off to read the next chapter! This one was just...what are the words? Well, you ROCK, Sue! Great one!
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 05:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sammantha's coming Kurt! Don't you worry about it! UGGGHH the fact that they are hurting Kurt is making my skin crawl. That poor man is doing the best he cant with what he's got for crying out loud! Great story Sue thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 23:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good (even thought it isn't the happiest) chapter!
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Reviewed By: kittycatkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 21:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the "Princess Bride" that movie put me into labor the night I saw it! Sam really really needs to do some more explaining to help Kurt out some! Now lets just get Kurt to talk to Griffin some.
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Reviewed By: 3427 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 19:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
perhaps Myrna or sydne will find kurt's story through their special crimes files, and also find out about the little girl through the files kurt gave them. since mates are suppose to protect each other, sam may insist on fighting in kurt's behalf against the males or help him make the ofuda for combat.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 18:36 PDT
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Hmm...I wonder how far Sami will get to seeing Kurt before someone other than Griffin stops her. I'm also wondering if maybe Griffin is going to say anything to the others about what Sami said about Kurt being familiar!
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 18:18 PDT
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Woot! I'm back from vacation and they've released me from my medieval prison where I had no cell phone service and NO INTERNET CONNECTION!!! Horror beyond horror I tell you! Anyway, I loved the reunion with Kurt and Sam. I had to look away from the screen at least 3 or 4 times so that I wouldn't cry, and I'm not just saying that. That's too bad about the little girl though. I really hope they somehow get reunited because she was just too adorable for words. All of this, however emotional, is completely overshadowed right now by the fact that Kich wants to kick Kurts a**. lol! I'm not gonna lie I didn't really see all of this coming but now that they've got Sam on 'Lockdown', for lack of a better phrase, and they're taking turns taking out their frustration on our favorite tajiya it seems...logical. I really wish they'd believe Sam about him being her mate, or at least stop hating him so much. Not that I can blame them. They went through a lot ad all but...I think they should understand where Kurt is coming from. Maybe if he told them his story they'd be a little more, er, forgiving. Except maybe Kich...and maybe Belle...okay so I'm not sure how much good that will do, BUT at least they can come to some kind of terms with him. Oh, and one more thing. Does Kurt realize Sam called him her mate about 3 times in front of him when they were first reunited? He probably has no idea what that means, but it will be interesting when that conversation finally arises. Okay, that was my long-winded way of saying awesome last few chapters and I can't wait for the next one. Something tells me that no one is going to be very happy if they catch Sam in Bevelle with Kurt. Really, I wonder if they shouldn't just pull a Purity 3 and go get hitched in Vegas. lol! Okay I'm rambling so I'm just going to say, "Awesome job Sue! I love your work! I love this story! Thanks and I can't wait until tomorrow!"
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 18:14 PDT
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Aww!! Poor Kurt! He definately got a beating but I think He's being very noble. I mean how may other guys would just stand there are let people beat him up unrelentlessly? I loved Gin's outburst and her sweetness. If I were Gin I probably would've helped him too. OH, speaking of help, Griffin is such a sweetheart too! I love how he just falls at the whims of the Izayoi girls :D Good job and I can't WAIT for the next chapter!!! ~MSMND
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Reviewed By: bert8813 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 17:32 PDT
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ouch the family turned kurt into a punching bag. hopefully things turn up for sami and kurt
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 17:20 PDT
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OMG Sue! I love this story! I love how Griffin was the only one to actually listen to Sam. That's one of the reasons why I love Griffin so much is that he's levelheaded and is able to listen to both sides. Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 14:44 PDT
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The Princess Bride, wow... that would be like watching a Charlie Chaplin movie these days, that's old! (sorry if I insulted you...I'm a teen ^_^) I like Griffin, I think that he and Kurt could possibly have a grudging friendship eventually. I wonder if Kagome will help Kurt control his powers better so that he won't electricute one of his new family by accident. Being a family of Youkai and Hanyou with no male humans in the bunch, they don't really realize (the guys don't) that he's still human, he can't fight to their level... not even close at this point. I just hope that they don't 'accidently' kill him first. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 13:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew Griffin would come through! He always was more tender hearted than he let on. I'm glad Sami's on her way, but what will she find when she gets there? Will she catch Kurt sleeping, battered and beaten, or worse, will she see her family beating the crap out of him? She'll be livid either way.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 13:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! Griffin! Yeah that was kind of bad beating up someone who won't fight... I had real trouble reading that part. And Sami is breaking my heart she knows what's good for her, but I can see things from everyone else's too. Please update soon Sue you have me soo addicted.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 11:51 PDT
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Great chapter!! keep up the excellent work and update soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 11:39 PDT
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LOVED Ryo's speech. Altho I think it would have been better with the "gnarly white beast" line... XD Anyway, I'm glad Sami's going to see him. Still, I'm worried about the little girl. I just get the feeling that she's going to reappear at the most inoppurtune moment possible, y'know?
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