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Title: ldymoon (nsi)
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 15:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, NOW I'VE READ BOTH STORIES AND I AM WAITING TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER TO THIS STORY AND MORE OF MATSUMOTO AND ZARAKI AND OTHER LITTLE STORIES THAT INCLUDE ALL THE PEOPLE GETTING IT ON IN SEREITIE (DID I SPELL THAT RIGHT?? LOL) THIS STORY IS SO GOOD AND SO ENTRANCING, THE SOAP OPERA OF ANIME!!! LOVE IT!!!!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 14:29 PDT
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Wow, you are not giving Toshiro a break this chapter. Every woman he does not want is throwing themselves at him and the one woman he wants thinks he is having a new lover. I feel bad for the guy. Hopefully the next chapter he can get some. Maybe Soi will stop by the room and just have her way with him! LOL Until next time.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 20:49 PDT
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First, you chose 'A Better Lie' for this chapter? Usually I reserve that song for beat downs. Though I suspect Toshiro is pretty close to giving one in this chapter. And we get our first glimpse of Rukia. Would be interesting to see more of her *wink wink*. Anyway great chapter and more revelations and more drama! Awesome. More please, I implore you!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 00:56 PDT
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the drama you give them is hilarious! i love how you portray soi as any other female character when forced into a stressful situation. it is so sad that she assumed he was gay. he is too cute to be gay lol looking forward to your next update.
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Title: GOTTA LOVE IT
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 18:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG plz plz plz continue this. i was hoping she would carry the child. The whole thing kiyone and kuchki was straght out left feild but good nonetheless. Omg plz bring it up to date with diffrent circumstances cuz my mind is buzzing possibilites till i read the next chapter. This is very well written by the way and i am sure it is as fun for you to write as it is for me to read. sorry if my spelling sucks kind of running on empty. Anyway plz update
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 08:05 PDT
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BWHAHAHAHA! This is rich. All that's missing in this chapter is mpreg. *evil grin* You pulled this off rather well and it serves a purpose to convince Soi in her decision and as well as admit her true emotions. Nice job. Though I was chuckling more than anything else by the end even with the melodrama, is there something wrong with me?
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 21:28 PDT
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Hmmm, the plot thickens. Well, somewhat. Here we got a better perspective of Kiyone's actions through Toshiro's eyes. As well as a revelation about Shunui though I don't understand why he's so desparate to know who Toshiro likes. Though I have a better understanding as to why Shunui wants to ditch Nanao. It would be interesting to see what's going on with Isane and Yumi. ;)
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Title: Can't wait for the next
Reviewed By: Jehuty Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 21:28 PDT
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the only complaint and I know this may sound irritating is, you might want to add more genre to the catigory other then Hentai. I'd recommand romance and drama. I'm not trying to offend you. I absolutely love the story, but it seems to be turning into more then a basic hentai fic. Anyway, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 21:45 PDT
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i forgot to mention, i love how you write soi being jealous! i bet it is hard to write that since she has such a strong facade that it is hard to portray her as being jealous. but can i request for a lemon between her and toshiro??? PLEASE! :D
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 21:43 PDT
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i read this chapter about four minutes after you posted it, but i only found time to review it now. you never cease to surprise me with your pairings! i think that is what i love about your story. it has surprising pairings that throw you off. and the characters are not out of character. ok i admit i am not the biggest bleach fan(like how i am with inuyasha) but i don't find myself thinking that isn't what that character would do. hopefully you will be able to update faster. i am a greedy reader ;)until next time!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 08:34 PDT
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Damn it, you got me again. See this is why I keep reading this you twisted son of a biscuit eater. Though I am a little disturbed that it appeared that Kiyone was trying to entrap Toshiro since it was obvious she was trying to seduce him (a detail she conveniently skipped over with Soi). Though I found the exchange between Soi and Kiyone awfully entertaining, kinda Abbot and Castello like. And this epidemic of pregnant women in SS is just Aizen evil plan to corner the daycare market in Seireitei. ;p
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 11:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yamamoto has declared martial law... how American of him. ;P Anyway, Kiyone is giving off those Fatal Attraction vibes. Are all the women in Toshiro's life psychos? Nice chapter, let's see some more.
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 21:58 PDT
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you always have a way to surprise the readers! here i thought there couldn't be a shocker, then boom another twist for our poor toshiro. i love how he wouldn't let me blackmail him! update soon!
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 09:07 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say but very, very excellent. I love how her emotions are just running wild. I bet she absolutely HATES being so confused about her feelings towards her baby's daddy. I...okay I have to be honest here...I seriously HOPE she keeps the baby and she tells Toshiro. That way he won't marry Momo and they'll all be one happy family. lol. Okay I said it *now blushing from embarrassment*, cheesy I know...but not all stories have sappy, happy endings...right? Anyways, nice work and I know you hear this all the time but I'll be anxiously awaiting your next chapter ^_^ n8tivegurl
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 22:27 PDT
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Joy gives me my last regret Freaking brilliant use of that line. Very haunting. Anyway, nice chapter and now we know where the sob didn't come from. Now that we've seen events from Soi's POV, I get the feeling things are about to get reeeal interesting. Great job.
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