| "For The Love of a Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2008 21:27 PST
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Heh. Ya know it's ironic that Toshiro rants on Soi about being selfish and how painful love is when she's crumbling from within for his sake. True it was angsty, but that's where character development's sweet creamy nugen center lies (or is that lays?). As for POV, do a split where the fight between Toshiro and Zaraki parallels whatever the hell Soi does next.
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Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 22:35 PST
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Well that was another great chapter. I like the warning, but anything you write might it be angst or fluff is still to great to pass up. I didn't know that cows cry when they lick a salt lick. Who would have guessed. On the next chapters perspective I'm not to sure which one you should choose. The fight scene between Zaraki and Toshiro would be nice to see it might even get him butchered. =D Well keep up the great work and Happy Holidays. ~~Mors
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Title: ldymoon
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 21:15 PST
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I know there is a good reason for Soi to be that cold to him, but, there are still soooo many things I can't wait to find out. So, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Have a great Holiday.
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Title: Another Great Piece
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 22:31 PST
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Well that was very intense I think the setup you have done between Zaraki and Toshiro will be great. I do hope you update soon I love this story. Well keep up your great work.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 22:26 PST
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Oi. Now that's intense for ya. You've set up the Toshiro vs Zaraki fight perfectly. When it was mentioned that Toshiro had fought Zaraki, I had thought it had been a fight Toshiro stumbled into. However it appears either he was angry enough to do or Soi manipulated him into fighting Zaraki as a distraction which if that's what she was doing was genius. Though on the other hand this might be a classic miscue between Toshiro and Soi. God, their miscommunication reaches epic levels much to our enjoyment.
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Reviewed By: Ohm Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 21:55 PST
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Thanks for another good chapter! To be honest, I don't dig all of the angsty-ness either, but I'm assuming it will get better soon, so push past the wall and get us there, eh?
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 19:00 PST
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Another great update like all ways. You must keep updating we would all like to see how it ends. I like that they are semi back together again that is a plus. Now lets hope they can come to terms with their love and realize it is not just lust. Well keep up the good work and update soon. ~~Mors
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: November 17, 2008 21:43 PST
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*yeah* loooovvveeeddd it! I hope Toshiro won this round of supremecy. lol. can't wait for the next update. ^__^ yum yum goodness!!!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 22:08 PST
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Wow. That was... intense there at the end. Now we see the pandemonium that occurred when Ran returned that hinted in Different. Now comes the parallel between the two and I hope we get to see how Friend fills in the gaps of Different.
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Reviewed By: PBallPsycho [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 19:23 PDT
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Awesome chapter. Just read all of For The Love of a Friend and Different Circumstances. You have an amazing talent in writing and I eagerly await future updates, as well as the third story you seem to be hinting at.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 19:33 PDT
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lol now we know that Toshiro was no longer sleeping lol. But, he's a smart character and you pegged him in this chapter with that slyness, ooh never thought he could be so dang sly!!! love it. This is my favorite couple up to date. hmmm wonder what Soi's lutienent was smiling about and spaced out about, I can't imagine who you paired him up with. lol. Can't wait for the next update!!!
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Title: Great Just Great
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 22:40 PDT
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That was a great update. I now see why you are s instead of Z thank you for addressing such a trivial issue. The smut in this chapter was great i'm not to sure I believe to much in the dream. If Soi actually believed he was sleeping she is dumber then we all think. Well all i can say is keep up the great work and update for us again soon. One thing will you be playing catch up with Different Circumstances again? ~~Mors
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 08:56 PDT
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I haven't reviewed lately have I? Sorry! Anyway, thanks for the smut, all the angst was giving me heartburn. lol. I'm so ready for them to make up and plan for the baby but I know that's a ways off, according to Different Circumstances. I'll wait.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 09:31 PDT
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This is a very good story and is well written. Their is a few spelling errors mostly words that involve a z like realize. I was weary to read this story at first. Thinking that all it was going to be was a sex scandal, but you have done well to form a relationship between the pair. But i can tell you like to make people suffer. Having all the women throw them self at him, why the one he wants is libel to kill him. It is a great story now if you can just update and finish it so we can all see how else you can torture the two. ~~Sieg
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Reviewed By: JadeEye On: October 08, 2008 22:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well damn, this fic is totally diffrent from what I expected. At first I didn't like Toshiro/Soi pairing but I have to say its growing on me. I do have to say that the Byakuya/Kiyone pairing baffled me. And whats up with all the pregnancies? Momo is damn infuriating, Kinda agree with Soi Fong, she should just die. Hope Matsumoto gets back soon. Oh, yeah, Rukia isn't with Renji, is she? Its all a smoke screen.
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