| "For The Love of a Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 14:53 PDT
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Ah now we see why Soi knocked Toshiro out. I get the feeling the message Toshiro gets the next morning is going to be bad news. I sense the secret admirer is more meddling from out favorite hairy captain. When will he ever learn? Welp, once again another great chapter and no matter how much of a bitch Soi is, at the end of the day you just want to hug her despite the fact she'll sever my spine.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: May 29, 2009 20:39 PDT
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You know I love this story! he's one of the characters i crush on for real even tho he looks like a boy i know that he's a man he's over 800 yrs old! lol. and i love this pairing. now...i love that he was thinking about kids his kids playing with matsumoto's kids and i was rotfl! it was halirious to see him thinking about his kids being bullied by zaraki's or even marrying them! loved it! can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2009 04:39 PDT
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Another Good chapter you have written here. I do like that Toshiro is trying to makes things better with Soi. I Still think Soi pinning Toshiro to wall might be a good thing. I cant wait to your next update. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 22:13 PDT
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Instinctively, Toshiro felt he was going to want to hurt someone, very soon. Hehehe. I like how you've been able to incorporate funny moments like this throgh out the story. I take it the message is an announcement of Omaeda's proposal. I felt kinda bad for Toshiro when he confronted Soi after the meeting. I've had moments like that and even gotten slapped for it too. His reasoning for not giving her fruit or the statue were wise reasons. Very wise. Finally it looks like he's going to be actively trying to win her back. All I have to say is, Go for it Toshiro! Show that Soibitch who's boss! Yeehaw! Another great chapter, but I agree Friend is like Different's slower cousin no one openly acknowledges at family gatherings. ;) *takes a sip from his sake jar and smiles lazily*
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Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 13:42 PDT
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OMG!!!! ILL!!!! I WANTED TO SLAP THE MESS OUT OF HIM TOO HE WAS TAKING WAY TO LONG TO GET ON WITH WHAT HE WAS SAYING BUT THEN....I WAS LIKE ILL!!!!! ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER I THINK I'M SICK NOW THO LOL
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 22:45 PDT
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Toshiro wouldn't believe that, would he? He could count. Heh, I love how you keep putting these little zingers in each of your stories. Well now Byakuya is going to have to face the music and Soi's going to have a front seat. Ooo, this will be entertaining. Then there's Omaeda's little bombshell. To be honest, I think this was all his little scheme to get out of work for a month or two or three. Loved the brief interplay between Soi and Toshiro, really captured the heart of what makes them work but also makes them disfunctional. Geez, Soi's got herself a problem but somehow other people's problems keep getting in her way. Heh. Great chapter Orion.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 20:55 PDT
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Great as all ways. I am glad to see that you have updated it all ways makes for a better day. This chapter was a great piece I think it is funny how you had Oomaeda propose to her. Maybe now she will get the nerve to tell Toshiro before she does something stupid. Well i hope you keep up the good work and Have a good Easter. Even though I think it is over now. =D
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Reviewed By: miaow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 03:34 PST
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how did Toshiro know that Soi has his baby? i mean, after that 'time' which Toshiro thought he was dreaming, he didnt even come close to Soi. or maybe its the reiatsu? i hope Toshiro can clear any misunderstandings with Soi. it is getting too angsty!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 14:41 PST
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This was a very interesting chapter. The fight scene was well choreograph which is surprising being Zaraki and Toshiro. Does Toshiro know that Soi is pregnant? Well yet again another chapter update soon and we will love to read it.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 22:26 PST
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That was an awesome fight scene. Well paced and I could follow the action easily. At first I thought it would a hackfest but it turned out more to be swordsmen ballet. Not that Zaraki and Toshiro were wearing tutus or anything... Anyway, I liked the end of the chapter with Toshiro spilling the beans to Zaraki along with Toshiro figuring out that Soi's taunting had a purpose. Though, why is Kira still hanging around Soi? And finally, triggers eh? Hmmmm...
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Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 20:58 PST
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How dare he! She didn't need to rely upon fruit to seek gratification. All the same, part of her mind wondered about it, would it be necessary to peel it first, or would it better to... OMG I was rolling here she is totally upset and than asking at the same time should she peel it first! I busted out loud with laughter and made my dog come over to me and sniff me up to see what the hell was a matter with me laughing so loud when everyone is asleep. Thanks for that and thanks for another really good chapter. Wow, I wonder what in the world Aizen did to Nano-chan (I know I didn't spell her name right :P) lol. I think I have an idea, tho, I'm not sure. Til next chapter.
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Title: Funny
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 17:18 PST
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That was a great chapter. I have to say the part were Soi Fong is trying to find a way to ban bananas was just plain funny. I have a Feeling what is wrong with Nanao but I'll wait to see if you will confirm my suspicions. It was a interesting thing to bring Kira into it he seemed to be able to help straighten Soi out. My only thing is Soi Fong doesn't seem like one to shy away from something. I think she should go pin Toshiro to a wall and make him apologize and maybe tell him shes carrying his baby. Well Keep up the great work and we will all be happy to keepe on reading.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 00:59 PST
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Well fuck, it's nice to see Nanao involved in the story but geez, a few lines after her introduction she apeshit crazy. Like Lady MacBeth apeshit crazy. I have my suspicions but I'm not entirely sure though I'm sure it has something to do with the vizard incident. Hmmm, me thinks further re-reading is in order. *mutters* Damn I thought I read it pretty closely the *first* time.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: January 03, 2009 21:01 PST
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I liked her point of view. I can't wait to read more and I definately can't wait to read when they get together finally and than I'll be sad this story is over, but, I'm looking forward to your other stories cuz I'm still curious as to who you have in mind for yamachika. lol.
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Title: TEARS
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 12:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOO sorry i havent reviewed lately finals and all. but during school craziness loved to read this fic and the other with Rangiku though cant find it. plz tell me how to find it *tears* i need to know the rest. plz bring up to date i would love to know how it gets to that point love your stories.
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