| "For The Love of a Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: January 13, 2010 19:09 PST
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OOOH so happy I got to read these two chapters!!! Yay! well written and oh is Omeada in trouble with his nasty self!!! Again, can't wait to read what's coming next and I hope that you enjoyed the holidays as well!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2010 20:38 PST
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Wow that was fast. Short chapter but a poignant one nonetheless. Soi begins to turn it around and finally seems to willing to face the facts. I like the way you got here to finally accept and offer forgiveness. It took a few chapters of her being totally irrational, but it sure was entertaining. Now I'm curious about Soi's reaction to Momo's attack on Ran. That outta be good.
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Title: happy new year
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 00:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Size Font Color It was a very good start to my new year to find out there is a new chapter to FLOF. This was a good chapt. and it gave alot of back story for DC but I was itching for some toshiro an soi action. When I say action I mean an interaction not that other type of action if you now what I mean. As always a pleasure to read and looking forward to future chapters.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2010 20:11 PST
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Lookin' good. Though it does get a little tedious when the plot of Different and Friend cross over. However, it does help shed some light on Toshiro's thoughts. Now I'm just waiting for more Toshiro/Soi interaction. Maybe seeing what's happening with Soi might tide me over. ;)
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Title: It been too long
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2009 00:33 PST
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Well I have reviewed and read in a awhile. I Love were your going with this story. I just hop that you decide to finish and don't get burned out.You still make my day when I see an update in. I hope you update soon. ~Mors
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: November 06, 2009 22:31 PST
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another chapter well written and waiting for the next chapter can't wait! :)
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Title: omg its happening
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2009 19:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg sooo close to different circumstances sooo happy. Can't wait to see what toshiro thoughts as he breaks the news to momo ohhh this story is juicier than a steak fresh off the grill can't wait. Your storys is an enjotment to read as always
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Title: OOO
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2009 18:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH love is in the air, well in the air the of seretei anyway. I can't wait till this story catches up with different circumstances watching the cause of events in another story is very interesting. It's nice to get different perceptions of the same event it gives more of the feeling of understanding and not missing the last piece of the puzzle. Anyway your stories are always a great pleasure to read looking forward to future chapters.
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Title: ldymoon
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 20:12 PDT
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Ah another great chapter, can't wait to read the next one! Tho, I could totally see Toshiro's face when he figured out 'who' gave Soi the gift lol.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 07:11 PDT
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Geez, Shunsui is pretty dense. At least he's staying true to his womanizing ways either that or he's in really deep denial. Then again everyone in this story is in deep denial of some sort. BTW, what's a hornet doing in Shunsui's house? Anyway, now Toshiro is armed with his awesome present and will be having that conversation with Ran we saw in Different Circumstances. It'll be interesting to see Toshiro side of that one.
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Title: ldymoon
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 19:50 PDT
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I was so happy to see that this story was updated in my mail box I literally yelled out "YAY!" and my husband gave me a weird look. lol. I don't know what is going on with Byakuya and Kiyone but that's a story I'd like to read. I also liked how the 3 Captains in the end were in their own worlds talking about seperate things but it all fit together smart dialouge there. Look forward to the next chapter as always!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 23:33 PDT
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God damn, Byakuya is a bastard. What's his angle here? Why is he trying so hard to distance himself from Kiyone. Though I really like how you make the reader compassionate for Kiyone but at the same time feel pity for her. Toshiro's right, she was downright pitiful. Really I kinda felt sorry for Soi since she gets to see what it's like ot have someone rebuff you. Maybe that will open her eyes? Knowing you, it won't amount to much but then that's what makes this story entertaining, Toshiro and Soi's little mating ritual dance (except with the possibility of eviserating). Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2009 04:09 PDT
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Another Good update. A few minor Spelling errors but other then that greatly written. Now if only we could see where all leads to. The Fruit basket idea was great. Hope you update soon. ~~Mors
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: June 27, 2009 21:37 PDT
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Oh i'm always waiting for the update on this story and i'm never dissapointed. I can't wait to see how it all turns out but I don't want it to end to soon either! lol. and oh, my stomach turned with omeda as well and your description didn't help any either. :P
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Reviewed By: Darkwolf22 On: June 26, 2009 17:42 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. The plot is very different and new. I never imagined some of the couples, like Hitsugaya and Soi Fong, Unohana and Hisagi, Shunsei and Isane, and Byakuya and Kyone. I really liked the part when you compared how the children of the couples. It was really funny. Also, the plot is very suspenseful. I'd like to see how Hitsugaya and Soi Fong will interact. Will they get together or will it all fall apart? Anyway, thank you for writing such a nice story.
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