| "For The Love of a Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2011 06:33 PDT
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I gotta give you props. After seeing how much of shill Momo was in Different, you turn around and make her grow up in Friend. Heh. Now things are coming together for Soi and Toshiro and maybe FINALLY we can see how things get resolved between them after Soi gets that letter. Man Orion, it sounds like you're having a heck of a time back home. Hope things are getting better. |
Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: December 04, 2010 17:32 PST
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Ah the family affairs hmm, understand that! I'm glad it's been resolved and that you can go back to doing something less dramatic and more relaxing. I am so enjoying this story so every chapter you put up is a ready read for me. :) Looking forward to your next chapter. Have a good holiday...where you'll see the family again. lol |
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2010 07:02 PST
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Heh. I noticed a pattern with those songs there. I'm surprised you didn't have REM's "Get up" in there. Anyway, we get another chance to see what went on behind the scenes when Ran was attacked by Momo. This time around we get a better feel for what's going on with Iemura. In Different he seems docile, in Friend he seems dangerous. I can see Momo manipulating him like she did Toshiro. As for disowning family, well, I wish I could do that too right now but for different reasons... >_> |
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Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2010 16:36 PST
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aw man waiting for the next chapter, haven't read in a while and now that I had a lil time I was all ready to catch up on my read. lol. Well, whatever it is that your doing I hope that your well and in good health. Enjoy the holidays and looking forward to ready the next chapters. :) |
Reviewed By: FauxFire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2010 11:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do enjoy this story. I've been reading it on my phone for the past few days and I admit it is thoroughly entertaining. Interestiing the way hitsugaya and soifon interact. You keep writing and i'll keep reading.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2010 09:49 PDT
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"Soi, I love me. Marry you." Haha. Sometimes Orion you just can't resist to cut in with the dry humor. Very interesting and the plot advances some more. Soi has been so much fun to read with her denial of her emotions and silly errant thoughts. It's those little things that make you realize she's a bit more 'airy' like Ran. Then again let's just blame pregnancy. Nasty bit of that going around, eh? ;p Anyway, another great chapter and hopefully we'll see the sparks fly between Soi and Toshiro soon.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: September 10, 2010 17:51 PDT
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OMG SO HAPPY TO HAVE FINALLY BEEN ABLE TO READ AND ENJOY THIS STORY. BEEN SO BUSY!! I'M SO EXCITED ABOUT THE LAST PART!!! DON'T WANT TO GIVE ANYTHING AWAY. CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN THEY MEET UP AGAIN NOW THAT SHE KNOWS!! LOL. TIL NEXT CHAPTER!! :)
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 09:47 PDT
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Thanks for another great chap! Toshiro's thoughts are always interesting and I really liked the "trying to write a letter" part (just fluffy enough :3 ) Can't wait for the next chap!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2010 21:53 PDT
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This was an interesting chapter. Toshiro reflection on things shows how he's changed just like Soi's reflections did. I really like the scene with him trying to write that letter. He's being so heartfelt but still full of doubt. Man, I can't wait for them to get together again and watch the sparks fly. Good job as always!
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: June 08, 2010 20:26 PDT
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Yay!! another chapter it's like the episodes of Lost you always leave it to where we are so anticipating the next episode! :) It seems like we might be getting to the meat of the situation what is 12 Division up to and are they under Aizen's control too??? Hmmmm....looking forward to the next read :)
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2010 14:37 PDT
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Ah Psycho Momo, you are too entertaining. Maybe she'll become like Ghost Nappa and hang around for comedic cameos. Now we see the worm turn with Toshiro as he sees what he really wants and that doesn't include Momo. Then there's poor Yumichika. That guy just can't get a break, eh? We're in uncharted territory again, so what will happen with Soi and Toshiro while Ran is unconscious? Hmmm.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: April 28, 2010 08:35 PDT
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Sry it took this long to read the story but I sure did wait anxiously to read! And it was worth the wait! I believe he's as gross and as crass as you made him out to be! So, I hope he gets what coming to him even if it's fictionally! lol. Great chapter again! Waiting for the next one and congrats on your nomination!!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 11:52 PDT
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Oh my Omaeda. You have made the mistake of drawing the ire of women. This is gonna be fun to see how that turns out. Actually it was nice to see Soi not angsting about Toshiro in this chapter (she does some but I'd be worry if she didn't). I love the use of minor characters, I really liked the four girls. Hopefully they'll make another cameo. Also sorry for the late review but my life has become crazy at the moment. Hehehe.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: March 17, 2010 22:28 PDT
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liked the scene in the kitchen. And btw I love how you take the one scene from one story and identically redid it for this story only from Toshiro's pov. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 10:22 PST
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Ah so that's what happened when Ran went to bed. What's interesting is that out of all the men, Toshiro was the only one who didn't reveal his love interest. I'm curious about Ikkaku and Nemu and what brought those two together. Also, the way Ikkaku really screwed Yumi proves no good deed goes unpunished. Great stuff, now let's see some Psycho Momo!
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